Swaron Two Shot- Tanhayee..(current track)part4-pg 10

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sneha_sharon

@sneha_sharon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

brilliant it was ⭐️
airport scene fab 😊
can't wait to read d last prt... 😛
update asap! 😉

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Unres...

Ufff finally pad liya maine...

Varshu lagta tum kuch zyada hee bollywood movies dekhti ho n unki fan ho..

Airport pe confession wah kya baat hai😆😆

It was mindblowing update..

I simply loved sharon.s dad in dis update..

He was amazing in his convo wid sharon n wid swayam too...

It was simply brilliant d way u penned der convo👏

Rh scene swayam ka guilt of forcing himself suoerbly penned..

N sharon ka dialogue dat time perfect apt..

Very emotional it touched my heart..

Swayam n sharon bth searching fr each other very nicely done..

Gang was also perfectly portrayed..

N finally d end convo in d airport dat was just lovely n Wow...

Perfect each word each line each dialogue beautifully penned..

Simply loving it👏

Gud tum jaldi jaldi update de rahi ho.. Next update bhi jaldi dena...

Ps: kaun sa song dala hai tumne is update mein.. Sorry it does nt play so pls tell me

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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Magical_NaiRan

@Magical_NaiRan

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

varshuu loved it a lot a perfect ending i shud say👏

as usual this was fab...and loved this chapter more...lovee u for writing dis OS🤗

loved GRP andd swayam part alsoo😃

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Magical_NaiRan

@Magical_NaiRan

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon
Res. .
Tu song Kyun dalti hai yaar 😭
Now i have to wait for so long to read dis 😭
U know na d prob 😭

🤣

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GlamourousPearl

@GlamourousPearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

yaaayyyeee...superbbb👍🏼
waaoooww amazing i loved da whole idea of airport mein confession waaaooowww👍🏼👍🏼...n toh dance sequence was jst faaabbb yaarrr...lyk i could imagine dem...oohhh goddd...😊

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

it was good

Sharon's dad is so good

one question vo swayam ko pehle se kaise jante hai

thanks for the pm

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swaron20

@swaron20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Beautiful update

Loved the concept of the airport confession ...

convo between swayam n GRP was good...

Please update next part soon

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

varshu di..i am now running out of words to describe your updatesso let me say the usual awesome marvellous loved itGRP is sucha cool dad..bina kuch kare bohut kuch kiya..the airport scene..😊 ekdum filmy reunion..superbyour "TWO SHOT" is brilliant..😆 (hey..but i am not complaining 😆)waiting for the next partthanks for the PM

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

finally the whole gang trick worked on swayan and sharon and
i think all awesome credit go somewhat to her dad to...
and finally both confessed their love at airport and her dad told sharon
that she is not coming with me u are go back and that parcel thing
is meant for them... do continue soon and pm me