taarey os: the unwritten letter - Page 2

God,i sense my eyes r wet aftr rdng ur os.It ws 2 emotinal & md me nostalgic...TAAREY r eternal...

U made me cry 2day...dil ko touch huya...rey wid out taani omg...cnt imagine ...it is full of pain,love,...next time write a happy os...wen u write next time pm me

awesum r fab r any other word dont really represent dis os dear

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Angelita,u know what i was wondering how u would have got thir idea, rey as an old man, there hasnt been a single work in this forum with that idea , hats off to ur imagination skills dear.
The way u used ur words to describe the condition of an old man, u know like his back cracked while he got up (i cant cpy paste as iam thru cell , its frm memory so may nt b as u used) and then the way an old loney man feels for his partner, the faint smile when he sees her photo.all were too good , more than that i loved the description were rey sees himself in the mirror, realizes n smiles remembering the handsome hunk who is lost behind the wrinkles. After reading that i literally said wow! How beautifully u have used words.
The flashback scene, scene in store room were emotional , when he sits to write the letter .. He doesnt get anything, and then realization strucks, his wife was best , there was never a need to describe his feelings, she understood before that!! U know beautiful play of words.. Words when used with correct intensity casts a spell in a reader n i should say this os had done that .. I strongly recommend u , do write more n more, feel it from ur heart n put it with ur words, u have a magic play of words, i wanna read more from u
god bless u

wow how deep and sad that was.. don't knw what to say. really touching! great writing.

This was totally amazing! Loved it ❤️

😭 [SIZE=4]i'm crying , i'm crying i'm crying very badly
This was just sooo sad and at the same time very beautiful
i'm speachless , brilliant job

😭 it's so sad dear!! I just can't imagine Rey or any one else living their life like this... It just hurts so much!!! 😭 u did an amazig job writing this os!! It's just so pure and true to life as not every story has to have a beautiful middle to have a happy ending.

I'd love to read more of ur works... So if u do write more do pm me!! Luv ya ❤️

Oh god!!! Mera muh khula reh gya padte padte...
Hw cud u write so so so beautifully??!!
It was amazing and top of the world!!
U r a fab writer... I hv simply no wrds left to describe ur os!
Bt just wanna say keep writing!!
😃 😃

Angelita, i unresed my comment in page 2, do read it