taarey os: the unwritten letter - Page 3

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

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Angelita,u know what i was wondering how u would have got thir idea, rey as an old man, there hasnt been a single work in this forum with that idea , hats off to ur imagination skills dear.
The way u used ur words to describe the condition of an old man, u know like his back cracked while he got up (i cant cpy paste as iam thru cell , its frm memory so may nt b as u used) and then the way an old loney man feels for his partner, the faint smile when he sees her photo.all were too good , more than that i loved the description were rey sees himself in the mirror, realizes n smiles remembering the handsome hunk who is lost behind the wrinkles. After reading that i literally said wow! How beautifully u have used words.
The flashback scene, scene in store room were emotional , when he sits to write the letter .. He doesnt get anything, and then realization strucks, his wife was best , there was never a need to describe his feelings, she understood before that!! U know beautiful play of words.. Words when used with correct intensity casts a spell in a reader n i should say this os had done that .. I strongly recommend u , do write more n more, feel it from ur heart n put it with ur words, u have a magic play of words, i wanna read more from u
god bless u

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

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wanna give a long comment .. will unres tomorrow

unres...
Angelita,u know what i was wondering how u would have got thir idea, rey as an old man, there hasnt been a single work in this forum with that idea , hats off to ur imagination skills dear.
The way u used ur words to describe the condition of an old man, u know like his back cracked while he got up (i cant cpy paste as iam thru cell , its frm memory so may nt b as u used) and then the way an old loney man feels for his partner, the faint smile when he sees her photo.all were too good , more than that i loved the description were rey sees himself in the mirror, realizes n smiles remembering the handsome hunk who is lost behind the wrinkles. After reading that i literally said wow! How beautifully u have used words.
The flashback scene, scene in store room were emotional , when he sits to write the letter .. He doesnt get anything, and then realization strucks, his wife was best , there was never a need to describe his feelings, she understood before that!! U know beautiful play of words.. Words when used with correct intensity casts a spell in a reader n i should say this os had done that .. I strongly recommend u , do write more n more, feel it from ur heart n put it with ur words, u have a magic play of words, i wanna read more from u
god bless u