SwaRon OS: The two thieves

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

dis one is so beautiful...it reminded me of dis buk " If tomorrow comes"...coz der also, d chic n d guy keep meetin at d dame place al d tym while stealin stuff n hav dis stupid war going on...

but reading it on swaron was all d more better...i loved d fact dat dis tym, it was sharon who tuk d initiative...n e1 though u changed everythin, u kept their basic characteristics d same..fiery sharon n cool swayam. loved how d entire storyline developed😃

awesome concept n ofcourse, great writing.😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

amazing OS

a different yet adorable swaron

well the title made it very clear that they r theives but this dhamakedaar dhoom2 style was well planned...

thanks for the PM

Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: chimpukli10
its awesum Rutu..u have good ideas yaar.u r writing d next part also kya ? i wuld like to read more..

Thanks Vaishanvi but this was the last part dear!🤔

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: meevee
That was Dhoom 2 - Rutu style...it was very dhamakedaar...not the usual stuff from u...but nonetheless well written and I was engrossed reading it thank u

😆Meera indeed Dhoom2 with my version . And yeah more exposure to action flicks changes your thought process, so this update😆

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: marauder
One of the most unusual work on SwaRon. Just awesome. To be honest I have never thought one day we have to see such an aspect of SwaRon in full to dhoom:2 style. The starting of OS reminded me of an Amitabh Bachhan film - Do aur Do Panch. In that Amitabh Bachhan and Shashi Kapoor used to arrive at the same place to do stealing. Here its happening with SwaRon. Fanatstically written. Their banter, their kiss, their pov's with keeping a tab on their back story and emotions everything was just amazingly written. Amusing as well as strangely emotional and romantic. Loved it.

P.S - Batman ka batcave hota hai den nahi.

Well I had an overdose of action movies and with SwaRon at the back of my mind, here was the unusual update. I had no idea of Amitabh Bachan movie, all I wanted to do was, to show SwaRon landing up at the same place😆. Thanks for the comment and about the den part, skipped my mind but lets assume Sharon is ignorant about Batman's whereabouts🤔

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Neeti96
Hey amazing OS. It was the SwaRon version of Dhoom 2 😆 I loved the ...ahem...kiss part 😃 It was so damn romantic 👏 U write romantic stuff very well 😊 Keep writing..loved it. N I also loved how you gave a reason for their cold behaviour..It made a lot of sense.

Keep writing and do PM me when u write another one 😊

And btw thanks for the Bday wishes 😃

Thanks Neeti, and yeah assume SwaRon in Dhoom2 style😆

And again I would say enjoy your Bday to the core!!

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Awesome os
Dhoom style with swaron
loved it...:)

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Rutu, now that's the kind of OneShort I expect from an engineer sahiba😆

Sensuos yet brilliantly written. I loved the entire concept of Sharon being a catwoman and Swayum being his Batman. A very-apt title, must say. Flawlessly written sweetie. Do write more.😊

P.S.- I'm typing this with a 100 degrees fever, hope it made some sense.

Edited by nikita_arsha - 12 years ago