SwaRon OS: The two thieves

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hello miss' electronics and telecommunication'!!!!!:)
Wow,what an amazing write and dear i am esp happy coz you somehow related it to our stream...:)
aaj ka epi dekh ke dil bohot bhari ho gaya tha,but after reading this i am feeling good...!!!!
Thanks re...and a tight jhappi for continuing your wonderful write ups...
please keep on shaping swaron os's and please do continue your other works..please yaar...i will be waiting..hugs...

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

rutu 🤗

that's like an awesome concept which you picked,Sharon the Cat-woman and our majnu boy the Batman loved their story. well,i agree with everyone out here they are truly re-writing Dhoom 2 in their own style. their obstinate nature towards the emotion called love is awesomely written. and also,their two kisses and the contrast was shown with perfection. now,that's what i call a true SwaRon OS for the essence of SwaRon in it with a pinch of spice to it.

looking forward to your future works.

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

rutu...as usual superb work...keep writing...too cute n romantic...loved d entire concept of swaron as 2 thieves...thanks for d pm😊😊

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Wow..!! Dis is so damn amazing..
Imagining dem in dis way feels so gr8..!!
Can u plzz cont dis as an ss plzz wanna read more of dis..
Plz plz plzz fr me plzzz...
Il b glad if u cont dis..!!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
RUTU 🤗

res
unres

Awesome os rutu !!
The most unique story on SwaRon and I totally loved it.
swayam and sharon thieves , totall dhoom 2 style .😎
the backstory and the hesitation of both swayam and sharon to accept the new found feelings was very well written .
the kiss and happy ending .
I really had a good time reading the os.😃
thanks for the PM.

Tanuka🤗

Thanks for the comment and glad that you had a good time reading this one😳

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
Reserved...

When will you unres this Nivriti?

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: dips098
WOW...Rutu ...MIND BLOWING OS dear ...SWARON version of Dhoom ...it was such a pleasant read ...SWARON as thieves ...the ping pong fight among them ...loved it...when she told her problem to him so honestly ...and he saved her like a true bollywood hero ...it was just WOW..the kiss was dreamy ...both of them were so different ...with different meaning for both of them...loved it when they addressed each other as CATWOMAN & BATMAN ...AWESOME OS dear...u made me smile with this one 😊

Thanks for the comment Deepika, glad I could make you smile while reading this😳

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Anindita91
awesome os rutu...u described every thing from the beginning till the end so brilliantly...the way u described the reason for their behaviour was really great...i just loved this dhoom 2 style wala swaron os...great one...thanx for the pm...

Thanks for the comment Anindita, glad you liked it 😃

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: swaron9113
nice update

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome os
Dhoom style with swaron
loved it...:)

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva
Superb os...luvd it...

Originally posted by: tashu20
awesome os😊
something new & different...loved it!!!

Originally posted by: frankyfio
awesome

loved e ending

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
nice one

Thanks a ton people for commenting😳

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal
dis one is so beautiful...it reminded me of dis buk " If tomorrow comes"...coz der also, d chic n d guy keep meetin at d dame place al d tym while stealin stuff n hav dis stupid war going on...

but reading it on swaron was all d more better...i loved d fact dat dis tym, it was sharon who tuk d initiative...n e1 though u changed everythin, u kept their basic characteristics d same..fiery sharon n cool swayam. loved how d entire storyline developed😃
awesome concept n ofcourse, great writing.😊

Thanks for commenting Payal,I didn't read that book but in a way this one was inspired from Dhoom2 and Batman series.

Anyways Swayam here was bit different, he thought that he can never love someone and can never receive love by someone but Sharon here believed in that. So kinda role reversal regarding this love matter😳

Anyways thanks for encouraging comments😃