SwaRon OS: The two thieves

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -shenz-
amazing OS

a different yet adorable swaron

well the title made it very clear that they r theives but this dhamakedaar dhoom2 style was well planned...

thanks for the PM

Thanks a ton for commenting😳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter
the name it self is funny
great work
something new and original i must say
but why dont u continue with it like make it an ss or ff if u want to
any ways it was a treat to read
keep up the good work

Yeah the name with reference to SwaRon is funny. But cannot be continued dear, at least now since my main exams are coming up.Will think upon the same, when I'm free. Thanks for the comment😃

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Rutu a cool one re😎 me too khush, wow swaron can become anybody, they just are perfect... Yaar for a moment i thought they will part their ways and it will end in tragedy, but I am so happy that swayam decieded to give it a chance and learn about love from Sharon Aw batman and cantwoman, what a beautiful couple. Rutu always a pleasure to read you updates yaar, and this concept is just out of the world⭐️⭐️⭐️. So different, noone has ever thought of it, but a beautiful, romantic yet so touching love story on SwaRon,👍🏼 Thanks for an absolutely fantastic OS

Yeah Suku, I can associate SwaRon with anyone😆 I was not thinking of giving a tragic end here.Tragedy becomes more relatable when two people come too close and are too much involved and then they get separated, and that wrenches our heart. Anyways Swayam couldn't back off knowing Sharon here was going to love him. Thanks for the always lovely comments dear😳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Batman and Catwoman, now that's an awesome way to write a SwaRon OS on !! I loved how Swayam took Sharon along when she was sobbing and was blank as to how to leave the museum !! The kiss was unexpected but the way Swayam was so gentle and Sharon being the exact opposite made it even more beautiful !! I loved how Sharon kissed him again and was waiting for him to respond but he never did !! The end was really sweet with both of them opening up to each other and riding away together !!

Yeah that was the kinda turning point in the story when Swayam couldn't leave her alone when she was in trouble. Thanks for the comment Abby😳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sajan_swaron
it was sooo good
the way u explained everything was perfect
then swaron giving a chance for love to enter their life was very well written
thanx for the pm😊

Yup they both decided to give a chance to love. Thanks for commenting😃

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: mrash
SWARON n thievs??? 😲 Actually u r right!

Hum sabke DIL to churahi liye hain unhone.

Way tooo different concept and well written 👏👏👏

Now that is a different outlook for our SwaRon😆

Thanks for commenting😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Hello miss' electronics and telecommunication'!!!!!:)
Wow,what an amazing write and dear i am esp happy coz you somehow related it to our stream...:)
aaj ka epi dekh ke dil bohot bhari ho gaya tha,but after reading this i am feeling good...!!!!
Thanks re...and a tight jhappi for continuing your wonderful write ups...
please keep on shaping swaron os's and please do continue your other works..please yaar...i will be waiting..hugs...

And hello Miss electronics and instrumentation😳

Tania that was bound to happen, engineering giri toh haat se nikalti hi hai na😆

Thanks a ton for the comment dear, and which other works I need to continue re? As far as I remember everything is done😕

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
rutu 🤗
that's like an awesome concept which you picked,Sharon the Cat-woman and our majnu boy the Batman loved their story. well,i agree with everyone out here they are truly re-writing Dhoom 2 in their own style. their obstinate nature towards the emotion called love is awesomely written. and also,their two kisses and the contrast was shown with perfection. now,that's what i call a true SwaRon OS for the essence of SwaRon in it with a pinch of spice to it.
looking forward to your future works.

Ananya🤗

Well yess Dhoom2 it is, after watching our Majnu bwoy /Shantanu dancing on Dhoom number, couldn't help to avoid writing on the same. Well their mulish behaviour especially Swayam's was due to their past as I have mentioned.Thanks for the comments dear, and well with my exams nearing I doubt whether I will write this soon but lets see.

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: kool kanz
rutu...as usual superb work...keep writing...too cute n romantic...loved d entire concept of swaron as 2 thieves...thanks for d pm😊😊

Thanks for the comment dear😳

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Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: namratajadhav
Wow..!! Dis is so damn amazing..
Imagining dem in dis way feels so gr8..!!
Can u plzz cont dis as an ss plzz wanna read more of dis..
Plz plz plzz fr me plzzz...
Il b glad if u cont dis..!!

Thanks for the comment Namrata. About continuing I don't have a story right now on how to proceed after this, if I get some idea on the same I will do it for sure