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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Thank you Srishti and Suku 🤗

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

@sudha..beautiful os!!!

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

@ Sudha: awesume os...loved they way swayam proposed...just the way it shud be...👏

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unaj

@unaj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

@sudha...i luvd it dear. Vry beautifully penned. Minute details made it even more touching n effective. U've presented swaron beautifully jus da way dey r and ur writing made me imagine and live through swaron's blissful moment. Vry mature proposal and da most romantic 1. Hats off to u. Whoever reads it, they'll definitely feel da beauty of swaron. Gd job n kp it up. -urmi

Edited by unaj - 12 years ago

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

@sudha 🤗 loved the OS!!!!😳 great job!
keep up the SwaRon-ish work!😳😆
loved the title 😊

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

@Sudha- Amidst all the existing turmoil, your OneShort made me smile. Loved each and every bit of it. The day I read the proclamation of the contest, I was waiting for you to write something and see, my wish got fulfilled, I'm so happy you wrote this.
The brilliant description of the nuances drifted me into a SwaRonilicious world. Enjoyed the proposal. Sharon's inhibitions, Swayum's unconditional affection, its all so brilliantly described.
I wish you win Sudha :-)

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

@ Payal, Binuja, Urmi, Satu, Nikita - Thank you guys 🤗

Thanks to all the likes as well :)

@ Payal - once again sorry about the PM, i am so happy that you liked it :)

@ Binuja - Thank you dear :)

@ Urmi - Thank you so much, it had to be mature and romantic as its SwaRon :)

@ Satu - happy that you liked the title, thanks dear :)

@ Nikita - Thats so sweet of you dear :) friends asked me to write so thanks to them 😳

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Hey Sudha...amazing os...very well written...luved the way SwaRon bonded n their first kiss...it was short but a sweet os.

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Sudha...that was a brilliant os!!sooo well written...you know i really find it difficult to comment on your works because you are just such a brilliant writer!!you have a level of your own!!i just can say one thing that it was beautiful!the little moments that you put in are the beauty of your works!!the way you described their passion and intensity through the kiss was phenomenal..and my favourite moment was when Swayam proposed obviously. And my favourite line was-"I as 'TIME' stood still, leaving the two beautiful souls to relish their moment a while longer as the blanket of stars and moon stood witnessing their promise to each other."...How can you write so beautifully?it's almost unbelievable!!😊
-Amrita