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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha...awsum job...u made us feel each n every moment, each n evry emotion as if we were really there...n I loved d para right after d proposal... .

She broke in to a lighter sob as he engulfed her in to his arms comforting her. The warm sensation melted her and she rightly felt loved.

Superb keep going………👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A beautiful n highly satisfying swaron piece after days!! Ur a savior sudha!! n as always the concept deserves all the accolades.. That 'time' can literally stand still at the sight of swaron just shows how mesmerizing they can be!! It must have bin difficult to think of a theme that is beautiful in every sense but not necessarily simple and then express it in words keeping a word limit in mind! But u have done a brilliant job with the writing.. it conveys what u intended to convey and at the same time it is concise and appropriate! Special mention to the beginning and the ending.. i personally loved the end!!

They stood in each other's embrace blissfully happy as the tall lighthouse from far behind showered the light as its own promise for their bright future.

And it goes without saying that i hope u win! Infact m sort of convinced dat u will.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sudha, just read As I Stood Still and it was beautiful as always, like all your other works !! I don't know how you manage to keep SwaRon so simple and yet so divinely beautiful !! Just had a smile on my face and warm feeling in my heart when I read your OS !! Really well written !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Sudha, just a BANG ON post!!!
Loved it to the core!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Sudha-As I Stood Still - SwaRon

WOW...loved the simplicity and divine nature of their love...the nature...the sea...HIM & HER...the kiss...the proposal...those lines...MAGICAL...

Sharon, I Love you, my motto in life Is to see you comfortable and happy. I want to grow old with you your face is the first I wish to wake each morning to. The kiss we just shared was so magical, your presence and aura transforms me, I want to kiss you every living day of my life and feel what I just felt.

And, you are the only reason to my existence and my only shot at happiness, will you be mine forever and Ever.


The surroundings...the acceptance... the purity of love...

I Love you Swayam, she said as she placed her head over his chest, he moved the soft strand of hair and whispered his promises of love in to her ear.

TIME...the ultimate witness...is the witness of these two souls getting married to each other...

"I as 'TIME' stood still, leaving the two beautiful souls to relish their moment a while longer as the blanket of stars and moon stood witnessing their promise to each other.



It was DIVINE...A DIVINE OS ...loved this OS Sudha...u write so beautifully ...its just unbelievable...thanx for this beautiful OS ...
Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Hey Sudha...amazing os...very well written...luved the way SwaRon bonded n their first kiss...it was short but a sweet os.


Thank you so much dear :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: idiot_box

Sudha...that was a brilliant os!!sooo well written...you know i really find it difficult to comment on your works because you are just such a brilliant writer!!you have a level of your own!!i just can say one thing that it was beautiful!the little moments that you put in are the beauty of your works!!the way you described their passion and intensity through the kiss was phenomenal..and my favourite moment was when Swayam proposed obviously. And my favourite line was-"I as 'TIME' stood still, leaving the two beautiful souls to relish their moment a while longer as the blanket of stars and moon stood witnessing their promise to each other."...How can you write so beautifully?it's almost unbelievable!!😊
-Amrita


Amy thanks for such sweet comment dear :)
And please don't say you find it difficult to comment with out you, readers comments i will be lost. I don't have any level its just your love towards the work and me..i am so happy.
Happy that you quoted your favorite part, its one of my fav too.
Thanks again
Sudha

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: meevee

Suds, this was as romantic as it can get...so SwaRon and almost like a poetry in motion...beautifully conceived and expertly written...way to go👏


Meera 🤗

Thank you so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: shikha31

Sudha...awsum job...u made us feel each n every moment, each n evry emotion as if we were really there...n I loved d para right after d proposal... .

She broke in to a lighter sob as he engulfed her in to his arms comforting her. The warm sensation melted her and she rightly felt loved.

Superb keep going'''👏


Thank you so much for your encouraging comments dear :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

A beautiful n highly satisfying swaron piece after days!! Ur a savior sudha!! n as always the concept deserves all the accolades.. That 'time' can literally stand still at the sight of swaron just shows how mesmerizing they can be!! It must have bin difficult to think of a theme that is beautiful in every sense but not necessarily simple and then express it in words keeping a word limit in mind! But u have done a brilliant job with the writing.. it conveys what u intended to convey and at the same time it is concise and appropriate! Special mention to the beginning and the ending.. i personally loved the end!!


They stood in each other's embrace blissfully happy as the tall lighthouse from far behind showered the light as its own promise for their bright future.

And it goes without saying that i hope u win! Infact m sort of convinced dat u will.. :)


Shalini 🤗

Thanks for your comments dear :)
Isn't that ironically true that we stop time per say and think of SwaRon and be blown away by their brilliance. Thanks for quoting your fav part one of my fav too -
and thats so sweet of you to say that - makes me feel as if i already won 😳
Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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