SwaRon OS ~Pehli Barrish~

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: meevee
Back with a bang as always...dont u know that anything u write cant b boring of all the things...awww thank you so much🤗...aur kya perfect timing hai...from the moment I saw the title of the OS till the last sentence, I had a wide smile plastered on my face...mujhe mera Swaron Monsoon Special jo mil gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 ...awww api that is so sweet of u😃

Everything was just appropriately in place😃...bilkul Swayam ki Sharon aur Sharon ka Swayam aur unki khubsurat dunia with nuthing to bother their joy at being with each other..yup that was the idea after all it was there pehli barrish there was no need for anyone else😉...even the kids seemed part of the settings & not an interruption...effortless writing once again ..thank you...- the two highlights for me were when he cums to kiss her, she places her hand between their lips and finally when they hav "the promised cup of coffee" she rests her head on his chest - PERFECT is what I say......thanks once again for those kind words api i am so glad that u liked it😊

thanks a ton for commenting i absolutely loved it...ur comments always bring a huuge smile on my face so thanks for that😃

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: d3lover90
Awsm awsm ..
Cnt tell how badly we needed this..
Thnk u thnku

thank you for commenting.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream
Girl wasn't it too good... I just loved the whole thing, wish they had showed even a part of it in the D3 serial...

thank you so much for commenting i am glad u liked it.

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Thank You so much for writing this OS😃 !! At least we got SwaRon's first rain sequence here !!! The whole thing was written so beautifully !!! From the part where Swayam admires Sharon to their dance and the way Sharon puts her hands in between when he leans in to kiss her to him chasing her and finally, the whole boys vs girls and you ended it perfectly with them in each other's arms, sipping a cup of coffee !!! Damn, I wish I could see this for real in the actual epis but we're never that lucky !!! ...yes i wish the same...but...All we have are our FFs, SSs and OSs !!!

ahh ABBy thanks a ton dear for such an amazing comment...always love ur comments. once again thanks for those words of admiration they truly mean alot.🤗

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: shaani2209
woahhh this was freaking awesome...thank you😃

we all surely wanted something like this in the monsoon episode but our bad luck*sigh*...
thanks for writing this piece it was really a beautiful and blissful piece to read this...

thanks for the pm :)

thank you sooo much for the comment...it means alot.😃

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@DaShInG_DeViL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: manasie
Well it was damn amazing to read... and it some what reminded of the movie KKHH and Dil To Pagal Hai... seriously Awesome... n bazz do you remember you have a FF to update... when in the world are you going to update the next part...

thanks so mcuhf ro commenting Mansie...as always love ur comment <3

lol yeah i also thought that it seems similar to KKHH.😛

and yeah dear i remember about the FF...i was gonna write its next part as got some free time but then when we didn't got any swaron rain romance then the idea of writing something on swaron in rain seemed very tempting...i will try to write it asap.

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@ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

It was amazing...firstly sharon thinking of swayam...swayam watching sharon...swayam chasing sharon... then their girls boys fight...n then d mud part...a beautiful n lovely descprition of monsoon swaron special

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

I can't thank you enough for writing this beautiful OS.

Sharon's was completely in a new light, when playing with the kids, the boys and girls fight was cute. Swayam should have know better then to anger Sharon..it was nice how he comes back to her..asking forgiveness and was ready for his punishment. Loved the rain dance they shared..its super writers like you who make SwaRon more beautiful as the show has nothing to offer anymore.

Thanks again for writing this.

P.S - if time permits please update your FF.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Ahhh BAZ .. one of my favourite writers .. back in action .. I hate IF Pms mostly .. VERY few ppl get me to smile with PMs of their updates .. one of them being u .. 😳 🤗 (The other two being Sawerrayyy and KD 😳)

So what happends when you put Swayam / Sharon / Rain and dance together ?

We .. magic ofcourse 😳

And if Baz is writing about it ?

It sure as hell would be ONE helluva rain experience !

I love the RANGE of emotions u manage to cover in ur writing .. from Sharon's shyness when she seed the way Swayam looks at her to Swayam's awestruck expression when he watches her dance .. poora malang ban kar ... I think I'll stop bitching about the lack of SwaRon in the Manhoos .. ooops Monsoon special .. cuz Baz just showed me SwaRon's Monsoon special 😳. I LOVE how HAPPY and LIBERATED u portray Sharon .. in the opening paragraph .. so happy .. to be finally able to embrace the feelings she'd shut out or run away from .. and how beatifully u word it ... when Sharon thinks back to all the lil stolen moments with Swayam ... Chura liya .. him tucking her hair behind her ear .. ahhh ... Sheer blisss .. reading ur work Bazzzayyy !! 🤗 I laaabh jooo ! 🤗 Writing more joo are pleeejjj !! 😍

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@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

How I wish we had a just the same scene in d3 too. Wow lovely amazing, out of the world. I dont which part i liked the most the first part or the second part or after the shower😍all are super Fabulous! Cant tell you how many times i read the whole thing.Thanks so much. Lovely...