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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awww...i was havin a cutee blushy smile while reading your OS!!! 😳
i think you shud make a separate show on swaron..we vil help you in casting dem! 😆
gal dis was perfecttt...hayyeee...kahin toh swaron ka rain sequence mila! 😍

p.s.--i hav sent u a buddy request.. on "devil_rocks"
kindly accept..! 😊

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Baz ! You are back. From the moment i read the title of Your OS I knew i would be finally able to keep the disppointment of monsoon special behind me.This OS was one of a kind experience which can be only experienced in your OS's. The range of emotions and very aspects which this covered was just unbelievable. One of the most beautiful piece of work i ever read. Awesome just awesome .

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Hey ur back and with a bang...gosh this was so required after all the torture we all have been going through. I feel like messaging your OS to palki and ask her to Read and show us same on SwaRon.

Sharon dancing in rain..love the way u described Swayam admiring her beauty. The almost kiss was adorable and d whole boys vs girls match was fun n cute. Sharon is truly no less than a lioness and only Swayam can handle her. Sharon pouting and Swayam manofying her was uber cute. Loved it and thank you for PM. 😊

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awesome os...totally loved every bit of it...from the beginning till the end...swaron dancing in rain...then their match in the mud was amazing...do update ur ff soon...

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

this was too too good... 👏

i just loved ever SwaRon moment 😳

they both were so adorable..

the rain dance, Swayam mesmerized by sharon's beauty..

the basketball scene 😆 Sharon demanding to give her the ball 🤣

i really loved this OS..

thnx 4 da pm😊

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tanharocks

@tanharocks

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

You are back with a bang...loved it to core..i mean i always love ur work

The dance, then game and the ending superb...

Plz update ur ff...

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

So u r back with a bang
Awesome os
I wish we could see this in show too from swayam admire sharon,swaron dance n then girls vs boys fight n after all this perfect ending
Loved it
Update ur ff too please

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesome OS Baz. Sharon dancing in the rain in White dress, ah, dream come true. I could almost imagine Swayam standing and staring qt her while she danced her way to glory, in the rain. And I've always wanted to see that scene between these two, where Sharon places her palm therefore breaking an almost kiss. :D But humari toh lismathi phooti hai, yeh Sab sirf FF/OS/SS mein dikhta hai.
Sharon's aunt is smart, kitna jaldi pakad liya dono ko, Lol. And the ending part was really cute too.

I wish the CVs were half as good as you are, we would have been super lucky. But no.

An I am so so sorry for being late with the comment.

Anyway, thank you for the PM and once again, I Loved It..!! :)

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: SwaRon911
Ahhh BAZ .. one of my favourite writers .. back in action .. I hate IF Pms mostly .. VERY few ppl get me to smile with PMs of their updates .. one of them being u .. 😳 🤗 (The other two being Sawerrayyy and KD 😳)...awww rafi thank you so much i seriosuly dunno how to tell u what i feel right now.😳

So what happends when you put Swayam / Sharon / Rain and dance together ?
We .. magic ofcourse 😳
And if Baz is writing about it ?
It sure as hell would be ONE helluva rain experience !...so sweet of u yaar
I love the RANGE of emotions u manage to cover in ur writing .. from Sharon's shyness when she seed the way Swayam looks at her to Swayam's awestruck expression when he watches her dance .. poora malang ban kar😆 ... I think I'll stop bitching about the lack of SwaRon in the Manhoos .. ooops Monsoon special .. cuz Baz just showed me SwaRon's Monsoon special 😳....thank you once again dear...I LOVE how HAPPY and LIBERATED u portray Sharon 😃.. in the opening paragraph .. so happy .. to be finally able to embrace the feelings she'd shut out or run away from .. and how beatifully u word it..thanks. ... when Sharon thinks back to all the lil stolen moments with Swayam ... Chura liya .. him tucking her hair behind her ear .. ahhh ... Sheer blisss .. reading ur work Bazzzayyy !! 🤗 I laaabh jooo ! 🤗 ...aww Rafi i love u too...🤗Writing more joo are pleeejjj !! 😍...of course specially for all u guys whose comments inspire me so so much.😃

thank you from the bottom of my heart Rafi🤗 i am seriosuly falling short of words to tell what this comment means to me...thanks once again for your amazing comment...no wonder i always wait for u to comemnt😃

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: marauder
Baz ! You are back. From the moment i read the title of Your OS I knew i would be finally able to keep the disppointment of monsoon special behind me.This OS was one of a kind experience which can be only experienced in your OS's. The range of emotions and very aspects which this covered was just unbelievable. One of the most beautiful piece of work i ever read. Awesome just awesome .

Bro seriously u and Rafi have made me speechless with ur beautiful comments...i can't thank u enough...thanks a ton for commenting i really really inspires me alot😃