SwaRon OS ~Pehli Barrish~ - Page 4

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

Hey ur back and with a bang😳...gosh this was so required after all the torture we all have been going through. I feel like messaging your OS to palki and ask her to Read and show us same on SwaRon. ...awww it won't help dear i don't think she would still understand how to use her most talented actors to make the show reach new heights...arrghh i dunno why do i end up falling for people palki has a problem with 😕first shilpa and now Sneha...two amazingly beutiful actors.😃

Sharon dancing in rain..love the way u described Swayam admiring her beauty. The almost kiss was adorable and d whole boys vs girls match was fun n cute. Sharon is truly no less than a lioness and only Swayam can handle her. Sharon pouting and Swayam manofying her was uber cute. Loved it and thank you for PM. 😊...i am glad u liked it dear.

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Awesome OS Baz😃. Sharon dancing in the rain in White dress, ah, dream come true....yes i know i am also dying to see her dressed like that in the show😍.. I could almost imagine Swayam standing and staring qt her while she danced her way to glory, in the rain. And I've always wanted to see that scene between these two, where Sharon places her palm therefore breaking an almost kiss. :D But humari toh lismathi phooti hai, yeh Sab sirf FF/OS/SS mein dikhta hai...yeah i know don't even wanna start talking on that...it is scene which happened so many times with AR an almost kiss even with RM and i don't know if it happened with Kriyansh but i think Swaron are the only one Palki has a prob with, i mean trail confession ke bad bhi...forget it.
Sharon's aunt is smart, kitna jaldi pakad liya dono ko, Lol. And the ending part was really cute too.😃

I wish the CVs were half as good as you are, we would have been super lucky. But no....arey yaar CVs have set a standard for themselves which no one else can reach😉...cause there ain't anyone like them right!😆

An I am so so sorry for being late with the comment....koi baat nahin u commented thats what matters😃

Anyway, thank you for the PM and once again, I Loved It..!! :)😃

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

It was amazing...firstly sharon thinking of swayam...swayam watching sharon...swayam chasing sharon... then their girls boys fight...n then d mud part...a beautiful n lovely descprition of monsoon swaron special

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

I can't thank you enough for writing this beautiful OS.

Sharon's was completely in a new light, when playing with the kids, the boys and girls fight was cute. Swayam should have know better then to anger Sharon..it was nice how he comes back to her..asking forgiveness and was ready for his punishment. Loved the rain dance they shared..its super writers like you who make SwaRon more beautiful ...thanks a ton...as the show has nothing to offer anymore.

Thanks again for writing this.

P.S - if time permits please update your FF.

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

How I wish we had a just the same scene in d3 too. Wow lovely amazing, out of the world. I dont which part i liked the most the first part or the second part or after the shower😍all are super Fabulous! Cant tell you how many times i read the whole thing.Thanks so much. Lovely...

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Awww...i was havin a cutee blushy smile while reading your OS!!! 😳
i think you shud make a separate show on swaron..we vil help you in casting dem! 😆
gal dis was perfecttt...hayyeee...kahin toh swaron ka rain sequence mila! 😍

p.s.--i hav sent u a buddy request.. on "devil_rocks"
kindly accept..! 😊

Originally posted by: Anindita91

awesome os...totally loved every bit of it...from the beginning till the end...swaron dancing in rain...then their match in the mud was amazing...do update ur ff soon...

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

this was too too good... 👏

i just loved ever SwaRon moment 😳

they both were so adorable..

the rain dance, Swayam mesmerized by sharon's beauty..

the basketball scene 😆 Sharon demanding to give her the ball 🤣

i really loved this OS..

thnx 4 da pm😊

Originally posted by: tanharocks

You are back with a bang...loved it to core..i mean i always love ur work

The dance, then game and the ending superb...

Plz update ur ff...

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

hey dear u r back with an os..nice..this was nice OS..reminded me of dmg nd sum hindi movies. ..whn r u plnng 2 update your FF ? do update it soon..