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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys how r u all? well i am back with an OS, didn't plan to write it but just like u all, i think i was also expecting too much from the monsoon special epi... haven't watched D3 for a long time was extremely busy so was looking forward to some SwaRon in this epi but but...u all know what happened so i couldn't control myself from writing something on them.

this one also is written without a proper story line in mind just wrote what came in my mind. hope u all will like it. here u go. enjoy
PEHLI BARRISH

She walked through the hallway with a soft smile playing on her lips. Her one hand played with her hair while the other one was hanging by her side. She was lost in her own world. A world which she had hidden deep down in her heart and no one had access to it but then slowly some strange rebel winds have started crossing the barbed wire around it. A feeling had started to reside there making her helpless in front of a certain man. A man she tried to hate not because he had challenged her but because he had done the crime to open the door to this hidden world inside her heart. She with all her might had tried to stop him from entering there but he had not only entered but walked on the path of her heart leaving behind his footprints which no one even she herself was not able to remove.

She leaned against the pillar in front of an open window and her mind instantly went back to the dance they just shared. She had danced with him before but this time it was different. Al those times she had danced with him trying to control her feelings and trying to prove herself that he didn't mattered to her but this time she had danced with him embracing all those feelings which hit her with an extreme amount of intensity. Moreover it was their first dance after finally being into a relationship. The smile never left her face. It remained dancing on her lips as she once again remembered how her heart did a double flip when he winked at her. The wind blew and her hair fell on her face. She gently tucked them behind her ear again and then remembered the chura liya hai dance she shared with him when he did that for her. Her heart started to beat wildly again. She shook her head and took a step forward. Yes it was true that she had tricked him into dancing with her so that she could buy rey some time but it was not a lie either that deep down she was thrilled to dance with him. Of course she kept denying it to herself but she could not deny it to her heart.

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She felt so happy today she wanted to tell the world how happy she was. The smile never left her lips the whole day. She was feeling an alien feeling- of contentment, true happiness and love. Yes, she was contented with her life there was nothing more she could have asked from god to bless her with. She entered her room and realized that it had started to rain. She ran towards the window and extended her hand outward. The raindrops fell in rhythm on it and the smile on her face grew even wider. Her heart had been dancing since morning and now she wanted to follow its footsteps. Today she wanted to do all the things which she would have never done if her swayam would have not found the key to her heart. She quickly went towards her cupboard and took out a dress.

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He turned the music on full volume and rolled the window of his car down allowing the little droplets to fall on him and to enjoy the cool wind. He had not seen Sharon anywhere after their morning Salsa and he was dying to see and talk to her. After looking everywhere he had asked Rey who had told him that she always goes to her farmhouse in this kind of weather. It was not far from here. So now he was on his way to his siren. Things had changed so much between them and he wanted to enjoy each second of it with his Sharon. He finally reached the farm house and eager to see her he got out of the car quickly but the sight in front of him made him stop in his tracks. He could see a figure dancing in rain on the roof and it took him only a second to realize that it was Sharon. His feet involuntary dragged him towards her and he not wanting to miss even a second of Sharon dancing in rain ran upstairs as fast as he could. There wearing a white frock with white churidar and her dupatta tied around her waist she looked just like angel on earth. She was a natural beauty, there was no makeup on her face, her lips were their natural shade of pink which were curved into a soft smile, and her gorgeous bare feet which were dancing flawlessly in rain made her look even more beautiful than an angel would have been in this position. Her wet dress clung onto her body and outlined her beautiful and delicate frame which twisted and turned in rhythm made her look no less than a Greek goddess. Her waves, twists and turns were extremely graceful yet passionate and it seemed that today she won't stop dancing. Nothing could stop her now. He stood there dumb struck by her beauty and grace resting against the wall. The sight in front of him was making it difficult for him to believe that this girl was his.

She was so lost in her own thoughts that she did not even realized how long he had been starring at her. She fell down on her knees when her legs refused to move more and started panting. Her hair fell over her face and then she fell a similar touch remove them from there. She realized who the person was as soon as his fingers brushed against her skin. She slowly opened her eyes with the smile never leaving her face and looked in the pool of his eyes only to be held captive by them. she smiled at him and he smiled back at her then he helped her in standing and she asked him "you??...here? who told u I was here?" then again she knew the answer to it her one and only kind friend would have done that and both of them said in union "REY" swayam "hummm looks like u r in a mood to dance all day today!" Sharon "why?" swayam "u know in the morning u wanted to dance with me and now…" Sharon cut him in between and said "whoa…I didn't want to dance with u okay it was just a challenge" swayam "no it was not" Sharon "yeah it was" swayam "no" Sharon "how do u know that?" swayam "because we never decided who was the best….and knowing u…u never leave any challenge in between!" she was left dumbstruck this boy knew her inside out so well that sometime it even scared her. But then again it felt nice to have someone who would understand what u want without saying anything. She looked away and fumbled "of course…I…I was the..best…what was there to decide" he smirked after seeing her reaction and then brought his face close to hers so that she could feel his breath on her skin and then whispered in a husky tone "why don't we have another match" she slowly turned her head towards him still feeling his breath on her face and looked at him while he continued "maybe this time I wanna dance with you" and extended his hand forward. She looked at his hand and then gently and slowly gave her own hand in his. He grabbed it firmly and pulled her towards himself. She hit in his chest with a bump and then their bodies started swaying on the music playing through the strings of their hearts.

Both of them were having the most memorable time of their life. They had no idea that it will turn into an unforgettable and beautiful memory which would never fail to sketch a smile on their faces. After all it was their pehli barrish together. They kept dancing and dancing in the rain with the feel of the other person beside them. it was like a fairytale moment for them where they would dance together in rain. Then he picked her up in his arms and twirled around while she got lost in his eyes. Then he slowly set her back on her feet and she gently stroked his cheek. He cupped her face and rubbed his thumb on her cheeks as she closed her eyes. He rested his forehead against hers and said while breathing heavily "you look so breath taking beautiful when u dance with that smile on your face" she opened her eyes and said "u mean like this" and gave him another heart stopping smile. Those lips curved in a smile with their natural shade of pink tempted him beyond extreme. He gazed her lips which were parted and she knew what he was thinking. She wanted nothing different. His wet shirt hugged his perfect body out lining the contours of his muscles, his wet locks of hair fell on his face and the naughtiness in his eyes made her want to smack her lips on top of his. He slowly brought his face close to hers to end the distance between their lips. Her heart was beating wildly in her chest she felt like her knees would give away. And just when he was about to place his lips on her she placed her hand in between and he kissed her hand. Then she pushed him back and ran downstairs placing her where her heart was supposed to be. But now it felt like a hollow space which reminded her that she had left it with a certain person.

Swayam saw her run downstairs and ran a hand through his hair while smiling. This was the best day of his life. "How could someone be so adorable?" was the only thought that came in his mind when he saw her blush like that and run down stairs. he also ran behind her and saw her standing there talking to a middle aged woman. He slowly walked towards them and Sharon saw him coming towards her. the woman who was talking to Sharon also followed her gaze and saw a young handsome lad walking towards them. Sharon quickly said "Bua he is my friend Swayam" her bua looked at her and then at swayam and by that time he has reached them. he bent down to take her blessings and she lovingly ran a hand above his head. Then he said "Namaste I am swayam…sharon's friend" the lady smiled and said "but why r u both all wet?" Sharon quickly said "yeah ummm we both were talking on the roof and enjoying rain." The old lady nodded and smilpy passed a smile. The smile on her child's face and the way she looked at him was enough for her to figure that there was something more than the so called friendship between them. then she turned towards swayam and said "beta make urself comfortable. It is just like ur own home. Also Enjoy urself …I will bring something for u two" swayam nodded and then thanked her and she left with a smile on her own face.

Swayam was about to turn towards Sharon when a little girl not more than 11 years old came crying towards Sharon and hugged her. Sharon lovingly patted her and asked "what happened piya?" she looked at her with her big eyes full of tears and replied "didi rahul cheated and now he is teasing me that I lost" before Sharon could say anything rahul came from behind and said "No didi I didn't cheat…she lost fair and square" swayam chuckled and said "arey beta don't worry girls never accept their mistake and NEVER their DEFEAT" then he high fived the boy who nodded his head in agreement. Sharon glared at him and said "excuse me….u the ones who never accept that we girls can actually play better sport than u" swayam "lol Sharon why r u fighting I was just kidding" Sharon "oh yeah….u were insulting girls" swayam "no I was not" Sharon "u r on" swayam "fine bring it on"

Sharon stood in the ground with her hands on her hips and her dupatta still tied around her waist with a bunch of girls standing behind her and in front of her at a distance stood swayam with a group of young boys behind him. This was going to be a war. Droplets of water once again started to fall from sky this was going ot be one heck of a game. Finally the game started and Sharon kicked the ball. Yes of course boys were winning. Sharon had hardly played basketball but she was Sharon she was not ready to believe that she was losing. After something desperately trying to kick the ball and ending in vain she marched towards swayam and yelled at him "I want the ball now" swayam looked at her with an amused expression and said "then try taking it from me" Sharon " I want it now" swayam "huh that's called CHEATING" Sharon "NO….u r the one who has been cheating ever since the game started and I want the ball now" swayam "what??? I did not cheat" Sharon "yeah u did" with this she tried to kick the ball but swayam was quick he moved sideways and took the ball with him and Sharon who tried to kick the ball too hard fell in the mud puddle. Everyone started laughing and she glared like an angry lioness ready to eat him alive. She stood up and ran behind him who ran for his life. he ran in the entire house for his life grabbing his ears and asking forgiveness. But she was Sharon and u don't get forgiveness so easily from her. She ran as fast as she could but was not able to catch him so she finally stopped and stood there with a pout on her face. swayam saw her and his heart went out to her. She looked like a child who was not allowed to eat too much candy. He walked towards her and stood in front of her saying "okay take ur revenge" she turned sideways and didn't reply him. He came and once again stood in front of her this grabbing his ears and saying "plz Sharon take ur revenge and don't be mad at me" she looked at him and rebellious smile broke her face which made him smile too. She brought her hands which were still dirty because of mud, closer to his face and rubbed them on his cheeks then she looked satisfied with herself and walked back outside to play with children. He just stood there watching her play with children. It was something he had never seen before and he wanted to sketch its memory so that he could never forget it.

Finally the sun had set and all the children had gone back to the orphanage down the lane. Swayam was in the kitchen after taking a shower and he was making coffee for Sharon and him while Sharon was still in the shower. He poured the steaming hot coffee into two cups and took them outside. Then he saw her sitting on the couch by the fireplace. He was rubbing her hands together and her wet hair was pulled on her shoulder. She was also back in her jeans and top. He walked towards her and gave her one of cups. She took it gladly and flashed him a big smile. He sat beside her and both of them silently took a few sips of the coffee just enjoying each other's presence and the soothing silence. Then he relaxed on the couch and placed one arm around Sharon while she rested her head on his chest. The fire kept burning in the fire place just like their heart was burning with love for each other.

P.S: okay so i hope it was not boring and u all liked it? do leave ur feedback and comments. it means alot and i did not read the last few paragraphs so they are not edited. if u find any mistakes plz ignore them😳

-thanks

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
i am so happy that u are back with a SwaRon os
unres
awesome os baz !!
beautifully written 👏
totally loved it 😃
swaron and their pehli barrish ☺️
dancing in rain ,the girls v/s boys fight and playing in the mud was so adorable😳
really hope something like this can happen in d3.
keep these wonderful os's coming...
thanks for the pm.

p.s - if you are done with ur exams then plzz update the swaron ff also 😊
Edited by tanukaswaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Back with a bang as always...dont u know that anything u write cant b boring of all the things...aur kya perfect timing hai...from the moment I saw the title of the OS till the last sentence, I had a wide smile plastered on my face...mujhe mera Swaron Monsoon Special jo mil gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊

Everything was just appropriately in place...bilkul Swayam ki Sharon aur Sharon ka Swayam aur unki khubsurat dunia with nuthing to bother their joy at being with each other...even the kids seemed part of the settings & not an interruption...effortless writing once again - the two highlights for me were when he cums to kiss her, she places her hand between their lips and finally when they hav "the promised cup of coffee" she rests her head on his chest - PERFECT is what I say...
Edited by meevee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm awsm ..
Cnt tell how badly we needed this..
Thnk u thnku
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Girl wasn't it too good... I just loved the whole thing, wish they had showed even a part of it in the D3 serial...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You so much for writing this OS !! At least we got SwaRon's first rain sequence here !!! The whole thing was written so beautifully !!! From the part where Swayam admires Sharon to their dance and the way Sharon puts her hands in between when he leans in to kiss her to him chasing her and finally, the whole boys vs girls and you ended it perfectly with them in each other's arms, sipping a cup of coffee !!! Damn, I wish I could see this for real in the actual epis but we're never that lucky !!! All we have are our FFs, SSs and OSs !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woahhh this was freaking awesome...

we all surely wanted something like this in the monsoon episode but our bad luck*sigh*...
thanks for writing this piece it was really a beautiful and blissful piece to read this...

thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

res

i am so happy that u are back with a SwaRon os ,...that is so sweet of u😊
unres
awesome os baz !!
beautifully written 👏
totally loved it 😃
swaron and their pehli barrish ☺️
dancing in rain ,the girls v/s boys fight and playing in the mud was so adorable😳
really hope something like this can happen in d3.
keep these wonderful os's coming...
thanks for the pm.

p.s - if you are done with ur exams then plzz update the swaron ff also 😊...ahhh dear no i am not done with them *sigh* but i do have some free time i will try to write it asap.😳

thank you so much for such an amazing comment loved it.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well it was damn amazing to read... and it some what reminded of the movie KKHH and Dil To Pagal Hai... seriously Awesome... n bazz do you remember you have a FF to update... when in the world are you going to update the next part...

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