Swaron OS- Hope; Updated, part2 on page4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: booksfreak07

I know man... She's my favourite character tooo 😃

Love the layers her character has, you dont get to see characters like that very often.

thanks for reading and commenting..

PS I'm a very slow writer, so slow that it irritates me also. Its not intentional.

Originally posted by: marauder

<font color="#003333">How the hell did i miss this ? This OS is one of the best i ever read. You have beautifully written the state of mind of both Swayam and Sharon.
First part perfectly depicts Swayam's conflict with himself . And then the second part shows us Sharon's vunerabilty and her fear. Loved these two even more in this OS than the show.
Please PM me when u write anything else.😊
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Originally posted by: booksfreak07

Thanks 😊
You flatter me, honey! 😳
Thanks for reading, commenting and analyzing what I've written. Glad you understood the point comprehensively!!!

Originally posted by: marauder

<font color="#003333">I'm a guy so i would prefer that you do not call me 'honey'. Anyways your OS was really very good.</font>

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Love that even though Sharon was trying to seduce Swayam...u did a splendid job by making it not look trashy. I love the fact that u gave this bit feeling of Sharon comfortable enough to say anything to Swayam.</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">This was my fav bit<font color="#009900">"Do me a favour, don't ever stop. Whatever I might say when I'm angry or upset, whether I deserve your live or not, I'll never want you to stop loving me. So please, don't stop."</font></font><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sharon is so adorable...I wish we see soon get to see Sharon loving swayam with same intensity on show.</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#009900">"His heart refused to stop loving her. It knew she loved him too, even if it wasn't conscious and she didn't know that she did. But she loved him" </font><font color="#ff00ff"></font>*Sigh* Swayam is such a awsum guy...he knows her and her feeling abt him so well.</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you for the PM...lovely OS.😊</font>

Originally posted by: chimpukli10

truly speaking i was waiting for your update...loved d drunken sharon.. loved d overall part...i m really nt able 2 guess what will happen in d next part so do update it soon...nd i would also like 2 read Rimar story which you r plnng 2 write...