Swaron OS- Hope; Updated, part2 on page4

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Amazing update
U describe their emotions perfectly
Starting was really cute how sharon cutely talk to swayam
I really liked last para where u show sharon feelings n insecurities
Do write more on swaron n thanks for pm

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

just read the two parts in one go...awesome work yaar..the way u described how insecure sharon was about not matching up with swayam's love...and loved this line "I can hear it. I can hear your heart beating." she looked up at him excitedly and bent her head down again, pressing her ear against his chest.

will look forward for ur future works on swaron...do pm me the same😊

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

super amazing update !!

the whole ss was written beautifully 👏

i really loved the part where sharon says that her dad is very protective of her and some actions of swayam reminds her of her dad 😊 awwieee

i always like when swaron cry their hearts out for each other 😃

sharon was so adorable when she said swayam to never stop loving her and swayam promising that he never will !! ❤️

thanks for the pm .

plzz do write more on swaron.

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manasi

@manasie23

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

aaawww it was just awesome... amazing... great job... keep it up...

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

This was one awesome OS...Swayam controlling himself as always cause he doesn't want Sharon to regret what happens between them the next day and the hope lives on...Both in Swayam and Us...cause all of us know, that despite what Sharon says, she does truly love him !!!

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

This is beautiful. the first and the second part.

I loved how you portrayed Sharon. She seems so innocent, so vulnerable, Sharon has always been my favorite character in D3 and seeing such beautiful projections of hers makes me really happy. Do write more often, very often in fact. Would love to read more works on SwaRon from your side.

And I'll wait for the RiMar OS as well. : )

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booksfreak07

@booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ABBY92
This was one awesome OS...Swayam controlling himself as always cause he doesn't want Sharon to regret what happens between them the next day and the hope lives on...Both in Swayam and Us...cause all of us know, that despite what Sharon says, she does truly love him !!!

YES! YES! YES!

Thats exactly what I was trying to convey, the hope!!

Thanks for getting it, it makes me sooo happy!!!!

YAY!!!!!

😆

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Amazing update.

You have shown Swayam's love for Sharon so beautifully, the fact that to him nothing matters more than her happiness and he would do anything to keep her smile intact, even if it meant him leaving her. That emotion you captured with those lines, bravo.

Sharon on the other hand was adorable when she said she could hear her name only her name coming from his heart. Sharon asking Swayam not to ever stop loving her, no matter what and he crossing his heart promising that he would never was perfect.

Starting from the very beginning SwaRon were adorable and your writing made an impact on how much they love and mean to each other.

Thanks for the PM.

P.S - Would love to read more from you. Don't forget to PM.

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booksfreak07

@booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
This is beautiful. the first and the second part.

I loved how you portrayed Sharon. She seems so innocent, so vulnerable, Sharon has always been my favorite character in D3 and seeing such beautiful projections of hers makes me really happy. Do write more often, very often in fact. Would love to read more works on SwaRon from your side.

And I'll wait for the RiMar OS as well. : )

I know man... She's my favourite character tooo 😃

Love the layers her character has, you dont get to see characters like that very often.

thanks for reading and commenting..

PS I'm a very slow writer, so slow that it irritates me also. Its not intentional.

Edited by booksfreak07 - 13 years ago

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booksfreak07

@booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Amazing update.
You have shown Swayam's love for Sharon so beautifully, the fact that to him nothing matters more than her happiness and he would do anything to keep her smile intact, even if it meant him leaving her. That emotion you captured with those lines, bravo.
Sharon on the other hand was adorable when she said she could hear her name only her name coming from his heart. Sharon asking Swayam not to ever stop loving her, no matter what and he crossing his heart promising that he would never was perfect.
Starting from the very beginning SwaRon were adorable and your writing made an impact on how much they love and mean to each other.
Thanks for the PM.
P.S - Would love to read more from you. Don't forget to PM.

I love long comments, so thanks 😊

And so glad that you liked and actually bothered to remember stuff and write in comments...

Will make sure to PM you whenever I write next!!!😊