Swaron OS- Hope; Updated, part2 on page4

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booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: meevee
Yet another superb update... Sharon was beautifully portrayed in all her vulnerability, with all her insecurities, her hesitations her unsureness, luvd the last part when she says don't stop luving me - it was like she was telling him keep trying, u will finally bring me around and I cannot b without your luv too...splendid & let it keep cuming ... Rimar is rare so welcum too 😊

Read my comment just before yours, it explains what you've written.
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And thank you for getting it and also reading and commenting, mean alot. Thanks 😊
Trying to make Rimar as special as I can. I really wanted to write on them since very long and when I started I realised that the story that I envision for them is a good fit for them, they're the only couple who can hold up that story, none of the other couples fit the bill. And also because I personally feel like they aren't focussed on much so I can add my own touches to it and create the characters that work for me. Hope you like it but it will take quite a while to develop that as per my liking...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

I need to read dis O.S a couple of times more.I just can't get enuf of da magic of ur writing😍.I luved da 2nd part most!!👏

A request-Can u plz write more on SwaRon??😳

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booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
I need to read dis O.S a couple of times more.I just can't get enuf of da magic of ur writing😍.I luved da 2nd part most!!👏

A request-Can u plz write more on SwaRon??😳

I'll definitely write on swaron if I get an idea that does justice to them, they are my favourite couple after all. I've started an FF on Rimar for the time being, really hope you like that too as the concept is very close to my heart.
Glad that you liked my OS 😊
Thanks!!

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@Parvathi12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

awesome yaar...continue soon.. i wanna know what happens after sharon wakes up the next morn... pleeejjj update fast

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Trouble_Magnet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

It was written beautifully.😊👏

I wud love to read more of ur wrks..
Keep writing.😃

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

i shud tell you...i was all the while searching for this OS for replying...ur OS brought tears to my eyes...making me crave for this kind of true love in my life too...i am sorry i cudnt reply back then...i loved both the parts...u are so amazing with ur ideas and thoughtss...

swayam's controlling his feelings...it was a WOW brief

had tears at the part where sharon brings her head at swayam's chest and says out her name repeatedly...OMG had tears...it was so touching...doing the same vth swayam...i really really wish something like this emotional wud be dre in D3...

plzz do update many more like thiss...hey can u PM me...waiting for the nxt update...jaldi sey

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booksfreak07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
i shud tell you...i was all the while searching for this OS for replying...ur OS brought tears to my eyes...making me crave for this kind of true love in my life too...i am sorry i cudnt reply back then...i loved both the parts...u are so amazing with ur ideas and thoughtss...

swayam's controlling his feelings...it was a WOW brief

had tears at the part where sharon brings her head at swayam's chest and says out her name repeatedly...OMG had tears...it was so touching...doing the same vth swayam...i really really wish something like this emotional wud be dre in D3...

plzz do update many more like thiss...hey can u PM me...waiting for the nxt update...jaldi sey

It's really heart warming to read comments like these. Makes me feel really happy, that I must be doing something right. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, it's really encouraging.
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This was the last part. Hence the title-Hope. Read the last line again and relate it to the title, you'll get why this was the last part. For now I'm giving all my time to a Rimar FF. I hope you like it!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

It is one of the most beautiful OS i have read in a while..i really loved it..I know i'm late...But still I must tell you i loved it..Do PM me if you write something else...

Sree

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Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

I can now say with utmost confidence that I really love the way you write. The purity and the innocence of their love was so nicely brought out. I loved this OS so much. Your writing style nicely accentuates the concept and the last line of this OS was so beautiful. And the way Sharon makes him promise and at the same time wants an assurance of his love was very much SwaRon. Swayam's longing and Sharon's innocent gestures while she was drunk was again marvelously written. I have read many versions of drunk Sharon but I think your version is as close to the real Sharon as it can get. Kudos on that.

And now my most favorite part of this FF, the heart beat listening. Brilliant it was! I loved it for it's literal sense and I loved for it's metaphorical sense. The whole gesture was so sweet and childlike yet at the same time it was so much more. According to Sharon, her love is yet to match upto Swayam's and that is how she perceives it as she compared both their heartbeats. Their breakdown was perfectly penned down and Sharon telling him the swing story was another well portrayed show of vulnerability and trust.

So basically I loved each and every line of this OS. And you can now consider me your official fan. 😃