SWARON SS-I cant get enough of you:part4 pg9

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Mansi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Hey i read the full ss in one go and it was just too awesome..good work.. Plz can u pm me wen u write anything next tym?

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Amruta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Hey Rutu i read ur SS yesterday n i hav to say it was mindblowing...really awesum work...👏 🤗

All d parts were amazing...😃

Keep writing like dis...n do pm me d next time...i hav sent u a buddy req do add me...😛 😛

And ya a biggg bigg jhappi from me for writing dis SS...🤗🤗

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

"Tumhare cuteness pe has raha tha."

"Tum bohot special ho."

"Tootne nahi doonga mai tumare dil ko."

"Tumhari har uss ada mein chipi hai saadagi."

"Change toh mai hua hu par acche ke liye."

"Mai tumhari us waqt ki zaroort tha."

"Itna bhi nahi samjhti."

"Toh tume farak padta hai."

"Bohot jald mai misunderstanding se miss hata doonga."

"Kyunki uss dance se tum emotionally attached ho...mujhse."

having the current situation in my mind these lines just made me cry
i miss this swaron
i miss them aloot
and the way u write just brings all of it BACK
thank you so much

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

I cant get enuf f u...hum sab swaron k liye bhi yahi feel krte h...nd swaron also nvr get enuf of each odr...dis ws a again a vry beautiful stry...swayam leavin...can imgne hw sharon felt..nd lvd hw she wrkd soo hrd to sty with swayam..."nd hey whte shrt..."dat ws funny..sharon proposed sooo swtly...nd she again mde our majnu propose her...bt it wud hve been nyc if sharon wud hve got dwn n her knees nd propsd swayam...a swt story..😃😆

Edited by tannu_swayam - 13 years ago

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__anonymous__

@__anonymous__

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

~ Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication ~

Rutu . . .🤗 as I'm well concerned of ur magnificently profound penning approach by this time , this SS appeared as a pleasing astonishment for me . . . The oozing cuteness & simplicity was the power pointer of this piece which u yielded so fantastically . . . . I'm mesmerized . . . I'm surprised . . . . but, most significantly, I'm at peace . . . . Big round of applauds , dear . . . . for such delightful write-ups . . . . . . .👏

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter
"Tumhare cuteness pe has raha tha."
"Tum bohot special ho."
"Tootne nahi doonga mai tumare dil ko."
"Tumhari har uss ada mein chipi hai saadagi."
"Change toh mai hua hu par acche ke liye."
"Mai tumhari us waqt ki zaroort tha."
"Itna bhi nahi samjhti."
"Toh tume farak padta hai."
"Bohot jald mai misunderstanding se miss hata doonga."
"Kyunki uss dance se tum emotionally attached ho...mujhse."

having the current situation in my mind these lines just made me cry
i miss this swaron
i miss them aloot
and the way u write just brings all of it BACK
thank you so much

Thanks a ton for commenting😳

Originally posted by: princessaaliya
wow..wonderful!

Thank you😳

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

awesome ss sissy
loved it
sharon studying hard to get in the same clg swayam is
is a big thing...lolz
tha proposal part was realy cute
thanks for the pm

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--
awesome ss sissy
loved it
sharon studying hard to get in the same clg swayam is
is a big thing...lolz
tha proposal part was realy cute
thanks for the pm

Thanks a ton Nish for the comment, and yeah Sharon studying hard so that she could be with Swayam was indeed a big thing😉