SwaRon OS: It's too late to apologize

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I have still not watched today's episode. And now after reading this i am afraid that the episode won't be able to match the standards of this OS. Last time i forget to tell you how i would loved to see Swayam's emotion expressed too with this song but thank God you did that on your own. Awesome update and loved how here also you chose the perfect part of lyrics to go with the Swayam's thoughts , pain and sadness.
P.S - I just hope today's sequence is as good as this. And yeah i am glad you decided to continue this OS.

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

wow nidhi this part was much more amazing than the previous one. u wrote abt swayams pain fantastically . finally sharon realised :) thanks for continuing this fast , update soon...

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sharadhi

@candybar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

*sigh* what do I say Nidhi?? 😊This was even more beautiful than the previous part. You are a brilliant writer. 👏

And to actually read what Swayam might have felt in today's episode while he watched her dance is making me even more emotional right now. I'm sure this is exactly how he felt today. 😊

Now I'm even more excited for tomorrow and thursday's episodes. Damn, can't wait. 😳

And fab job once again. Keep 'em coming.👍🏼

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

this is beautiful...loved it..loved the ending...sharon realising that being scared of his intensity is a stupidity...her feelings for him are intense too...

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

ok this was amazing i believe that theres a continuation to part2 also...

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

wow girl superb work..
both d parts r damn amazing...😊

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705014

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Whoa ! Didnt expect you to update it this quick.

Swayam's POV and the pain was emoted really well...Sharon's thought was written beautifully ! 👏 The episode is nothing compared to your OS ! 👍🏼 Amazing part and thanks for the PM 😊

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

wow nidhi..!!!! u continued it so soon...didn't expect

n the updt was juzz amazingg...swayam p.o.v was sooo gud...

sharon feelings was expressed too well..!!!

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Gargi

@gargicool

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Dude I swear I m gonna killl you if I dun like the original sequence aftr reading this!!!

Well, cuming to the OS ...it was beautiful!!!!👏 Swayam's pain was well shown and I hope today's last shot of the episode was HER MOMENT OF EPIPHANY!!! 😲

Edited by gargicool - 13 years ago