SwaRon OS: It's too late to apologize

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swaron19

@swaron19

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Hey sawyer_tom,

I'm new here and I just read your OS. You really have emoted sharon's and swayam's feelings in a beautiful manner and the connection of it with the song and dance was also wonderfully portrayed. I was truly engrossed while reading it and felt experiencing it for real. 😊

Amazing OS.Loved it to core.👏

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Wow awesome os nidhi 👍🏼

U described swayam's pain so well n finally sharon realized her feelings for him...really nice 😃

Thnx 4 d pm 😊

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

I haven't watched the precise sequence yet, the original episode. I watched some sort of an edited version of the whole week's episodes, so they only showed Sharon-Rey's dance and whatever happened before that between Swayum and Sharon was ignored.😳

Anyway, this is a piece of intense and fiery writing which actually feels mellow when you read it, like pregnant with emotions, anything like that is both fiery and soothing. Well done, mater! I dun think the actual sequence is just as vivid, but Swayum's POV is surely one of your best attempts ever. He sure does scare you with his intense sentiments, that's all too noble and generous and loving of a man to long for a woman like Sharon. Sadly, there's many Sharons around who secretly look for such people, whilst real men find it funny to be jerks.

You're majestic!

Thanks for the PMs.

-Kanks

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

sorry for being late... (it's not too late to comment na😉)

brilliant writing... Sharon's pov was written so well...

for that matter even swayam's pain was written very well..

the emotions were described so well, that i was able to feel it while reading.. it was more like seeing the scene visually...

awesome OS.. 👏

Edited by ---Priya--- - 13 years ago

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

amazing awesome os i love it

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Brilliant work En, honestly.

*edited*

Oh damn I just realized I've changed my user name.

It's me, Pree (Sheherzade).

Edited by CoffeeAddict - 13 years ago

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

hey Nidhi...awesome post ...great piece of work ...👏👏👏

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

You know wat, u are awesome, super-duper, mindblowing writer!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Nidhi, it's just a lazy Sunday afternoon and while I'm supposed to study for my upcoming exams, I ditched my books and thought of reading one of your works.
It's an incredibly brilliant piece of work. Right amount of facts with the right amount of emotions expressed with sheer excellence. Sharon's battle with her inner-self, her realisation of the intense affection that Swayum holds for her have been described in such a sensible manner. Swayum's POV, his pain, his ache and most importantly, his love for Sharon have been showcased in a truly beautiful way. I was completely engrossed while reading it and as everyone around has been saying, the original scene fails to match up the standards of this OS.
Commendable work.
Nids, I just read (Un)Platonic Love but IF isn't allowing me to comment there. It's saying that the topic is closed. Besides that, I feel extremely mortified for not reading your other works yet but I will surely read them later. Hope you understand :-)

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