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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

amazing os nidhi 😊

beautifully written !!

the way u depicted the inner turmoil of sharon and linked it with song , it was just awesome 😃

thanks for the pm .

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shiv_sis_square

@shiv_sis_square

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Resss
--Unres--

Ok we seriously fought with our mom to read this...Awesome as ever...But but but why did you end it on a negative note...It cant be the end...Please pretty please continue this (with a cherry on top)...Anyways awesome connection with her thoughts and the song...As always we love your writing...We are as usual short of words...A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!👏

-Shivangi and Shivika

PS You have to continue this

Edited by shiv_sis_square - 13 years ago

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesome... i love your works so much... n its never late... :P

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

I'm not sure if this is the end. I'm thinking of continuing it. Very confused. 😕

That would be awesome .Please continue it .

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: marauder

That would be awesome .Please continue it .

Lets see.

P.S. Awesome emoticons!!!

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Nidhi superbbb. You have expressed it so well, The song and scene connection is just awesome. I think palki maam should take a cue from you. Def I would want a scene like this in D3 Well done.

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shiv_sis_square

@shiv_sis_square

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Post edited on Page 2😊

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shiv_sis_square
Resss
--Unres--

Ok we seriously fought with our mom to read this...Awesome as ever...But but but why did you end it on a negative note...It cant be the end...Please pretty please continue this (with a cherry on top)...Anyways awesome connection with her thoughts and the song...As always we love your writing...We are as usual short of words...A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!👏

-Shivangi and Shivika

PS You have to continue this

I'm still contemplating. But lets see. By the way, did I tell you that I find both of you damn cute. I think having a twin is quite fascinating.

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shiv_sis_square

@shiv_sis_square

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

I'm still contemplating. But lets see. By the way, did I tell you that I find both of you damn cute. I think having a twin is quite fascinating.

Aww thanks Nidhi😳...Pls continue ok we need to read this 😊