Swaron SS: A Single Moment

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

thank god.. atleast he found her now the question is... is she safe??? aarghh pdate soon or ill die out of suspense and would like to mention i love ur works mann your awesome...

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

wow amazing update thanks for the pm

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Ahh finally he found her. And here for once i thought in order to give poetic justice you will let both of them die as u mentioned in reply to someone. This update was frightening . We could literally feel the desperation of Swayam. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Luvd th play of words used for th narration ...many classic phrases ...all perfect in reflecting Swayam's state of being & desperate battle of survival against all odds - his heart which beat in her being - pls pls update soon 😊

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Thank god he found her ..love the way u described what swayam was going through.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: marauder
Ahh finally he found her. And here for once i thought in order to give poetic justice you will let both of them die as u mentioned in reply to someone. This update was frightening . We could literally feel the desperation of Swayam. Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Don't fret! There is still hope that I might kill both of them. I'm in half minds so...

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Don't fret! There is still hope that I might kill both of them. I'm in half minds so...

There is hope that you might kill both of them? Do you see the dramatic irony gal.

I wouldn't say what you should decide on, u see..you are the awesome writer here not me..😊

Waiting eagerly for the update.

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: sudku

There is hope that you might kill both of them? Do you see the dramatic irony gal.
I wouldn't say what you should decide on, u see..you are the awesome writer here not me..😊
Waiting eagerly for the update.

Well let's just say I tend to be a bit dramatic. 😆