SwaRon OS - The Last Dance

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barbie

@barbdoll

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

purely beautiful !

first tym i got so touched by an OS !

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

You did it again with your OS. I have read the other one recently and now this also on the same level of that and equally painful. Seriously you should write some happy endings one like cindrella man. BTW again awesome work.

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346815

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

OMG I hate you sooo very MUCH 🥺

How COULD you do this ??!?!? 😭

This was beautiful as SwaRon always are ... thank you for writing this ... one of the Few OSs that highlighted the DEPTH in what Swayam and Sharon share ...

Amazing stuff Pree 👏

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Pree i can't tell you how much i cried when i read that OS where Swayam was dead and i was reading the same and watching rafi's BIKRI BIKHRI VM. Damn girl just the thought of Swayam not dere with Sharon killed me and now this. Its beautiful but heart wrenching... Swayam without Sharon or Sharon without Swayam is so painful. Beautifully written Pree😊

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NikiBh8

@NikiBh8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

This Ws Really A CUte Os 😳

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Guys I'm making a PM list... please like this comment if oyu want a PM regarding my new OS or the SS I've just started!!

Luv,
Pree!

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

This is one of the most beautiful OS that I have ever read. You play very efficiently with words. And even though you don't believe in happy endings, you do however believe in achieving peace of mind. And you have very brilliantly portrayed that in this OS. The last phrase, even after every thing, does give us hope. Tragedy is an inevitable part of life. Not every body gets a happy ending.

Edited by tanha_swaron - 13 years ago

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Beautiful.
You emoted the whole tragedy very well. The last dance, oh god, it was just too good. But this broken up Swayam was hard to take in.
Do write more.

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Pree, you are so cruel yaar... I can't see nor even imagine swaron apart forever. I can't control my tears now too... My heart is so heay n is hurt a lot... it hurts a lot when u love some1 wid d cruel fact dat u can't have him in ur life due to any reason... Love u pree... Love u a lot...:'(