SwaRon OS - The Last Dance

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: NamD
You are really awesome in tragic story-writing. Loved this, but I liked "without you" better.

Thanks.

All my stories are different. I wanted to bring about the contrast in reactions of Swayam and Sharon if the other person died.The way they'd let out their grief.

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doc42

@doc42

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Woman, this was heart wrenching but i seriously love your work. I am a fan of tragic endings, not hamesha can you get a happy ending. :)

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

u r one sadistic person i tellu
u had to kill her !!
this is pure blissful torture to read
like i didnt knw to cry or to smile
to cry as she is dead or to smile as he still loves her so madly and deeply

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

ok now really i shud have bashed u for killing my two favorites in each os...but here i m praising u for ur writing...😆

though i really dint like sharon dead neither do i like swayam dead in the other one...but love ur writing style...loved the way swayam remembers her and still cares for her...but again nomore sad endings, mujhe aur digest nahi hongi...😉

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Nisha

@moonlitnisha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I loved reading this OS even though i cried a lot at the End...with Sneha Kapoor Leaving D3 this OS perfectly Suitsss i felt as if it wasn't Swayam and Sharon it was Sneha drifting away from Shantanu
Awesum OS thanx for this