ff(name not decided yet) part 2 pg 6

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i want to start something par uske liye approval milne ka intezaar kar rahi hoon😊😆.mods pls don't close this topic😊.an idea was hovering in my mind from past two days.i wanted an ff in which there should mixtures of all the emotions a soldier possess like love,loyality,encouraging,quick decision maker etc.so i thought that i should write an ff of my own.here is the character sketch.inn sabki baaki qualities baad mein likhoongi

ashish sharma as wing commander ranvijay singh=an air force officer.

yami gautam as alisha=an intelligence officer.

manish wadhwa as group captain keshav rathore=senior officer and mentor of ranvijay.

sooraj thapar as ram=elder bro of alisha.major helper of terrorists.

<font size="4">plot:</font><font size="3">ranvijay and alisha secretly get to know that ram is helping terrorists in getting some major top secrets of indian defence.what will they do now?will they favour their close relative or their nation.</font>

<font size="2">to guys kaisa laga. pls tell wether i should work on this plot or not</font>

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reserved for whole character sketch.

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index

first promo-page four.

first chapter-page five

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such-such bolo.aru di ke alawa kisiko yet idea pasand nahinaaya kya.

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dear tune link hi nhi diya kisi ko is thread ki..aur sab active bhi to nhi hai

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Originally posted by: aru_86
dear tune link hi nhi diya kisi ko is thread ki..aur sab active bhi to nhi hai
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aru di jab se iss topic ko post kiya hai tab serve page 1 par hain aur isko dus se zyada views mil chuke hain first bhi kisine comment nahi kiya.

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topic 1st page pr isliye hai q k forum inactive hone k wajah se naye topic post nhi huye ..aur 10 views baht kam hai..mere baht sare posts 100 views hone k baad bhi 1 bhi comment nhi milte..because jo dekhte hai vo random viewers hote hai not necessarily any member

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Originally posted by: machinegun
such-such bolo.aru di ke alawa kisiko yet idea pasand nahinaaya kya.

are bhai, itni jaldi dhiraz kyon khote ho??😛 Acharya se kuch shikha ki nehi?😉

yaar mere saaare subjects ki full paper exam chal raha hay😭 so bahat kam time mil raha hay kaal se

anyway, nice concept😃 Please continue😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

@machinegun- sounds interesting yaar. military- terrorist conflict. mazaa ayega. do continue. i may not be able to read it frequently and comment but as i get time i certainly will.
👍🏼 go on!!

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Originally posted by: sapphirose176
@machinegun- sounds interesting yaar. military- terrorist conflict. mazaa ayega. do continue. i may not be able to read it frequently and comment but as i get time i certainly will.
👍🏼 go on!!

thank you so much dear😊.i am writting this ff because my family comes from a millitary background.my grandpa was in police and my dad is in army.they both have inspired me to write this story😊

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