FF- Premkatha chap 6 on pg 11

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

I am thinking of writing a new FF. I just got a nyc idea n also dis will keep d forum active!

This FF is an indian version of William Shakespeare's famous play 'As You Like It' starring our Ashish n also a few other characters...

Give ur opinion whether i shud continue or not. 😊

- Bhoomi 😊

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@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

as you like it one of my most fav piece of writing...go ahead..but plese don't just copy..aa urs style and make it ur story...

and also try to take paras-palak😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

as you like it is just like i like it,william is my fav poet and dramatist and charles lamb is my fav essayist along with francis bacon.go on honey,go on.👏

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

This story is based in the heart of India - MAGADH.

Here is the 1st char sketch -

CHAR SKETCH 1 -

1. Shriman Vishnugupt Maurya ( dead )

He was a very rich trader of silk with all the comforts and luxuries of life. A very good person by heart, he died of an incurable ailment.

2. Kumardutt Maurya

He is the eldest of the three sons of Vishnugupt, who has inherited a large chunk of his property. He is cruel and ill - tempered but the turn of events transforms him.

3. Chandragupt Maurya

Chandragupt is the second son of Vishnugupt. He is d rough n tough guy around but is sadly deficient in higher education n d ettiquetes of nobles.

4. Purushdutt Maurya

The youngest son of Vishnu. He stays in Panchnad to pursue further education.

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

continued cs -

5. Maharaj Ganagadhar -

He is the ex - king of Magadh. He was overthrown by his younger brother and sent on an exile to the forests. A very kind hearted and just person also a capable king.

6. Maharani Vijaylakshmi -

Ex - queen and wife of Gangadhar. A very sweet lady.

7. Rajkumari Manyata -

The daughter of Gangadhar n VIjaylakshmi. A very smart, beautiful n sweet girl. She is exeptionally gud at horse riding and hand 2 hand combat. The bestest frnd of Rajkumari Mohini.

8. Maharaj Dhanadhar -

Younger brother of gangadhar and d present king of Magadh. Kind but also shrewd n believes in politics. His most prized possession is his kingdom.

9. Maharani Nayantara -

Wife of Dhanadhar. A family woman. Loves her daughter more than anything in the world.

10. Rajkumari Mohini -

Daughter of dhanadhar n nayantara. The bestesttt frnd of Manyata. A very gud archer n fights damn well with a sword.

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702755

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Posted: 13 years ago

mohini should be paired opp ashu.😉

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

who is this manyata??can't recognize

can i give a suggession?? in as u like it when the princess turned into a shepherd boy a girl fell in love with her and there was also another boy who loved the girl..when the truth revealed princess got them married

please take paras-palak for that story😳

or make any other track

Edited by aru_86 - 13 years ago