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Posted: 13 years ago
Here's d 5th chapter -

CHAPTER 5 -

In badi haveli -

Kanika - Ma, aapne aisa kyon kiya? Ashish ko pehle bata to deti na, bechara, socho use kaisa laga hoga jab use pata chala ki shaadi uski ho rahi hai... shaadi karwaani hi thi to use ek bar pooch to leti na aap!

Meera - Tujhe lagta hai ki agar main pehle poochti to vo meri baat manta?

Kanika - Aapne mujhe bhi nahi bataya? Ye kya baat hui.. main uski badi behen hoon.

Shobha comes there and sits next to Kanika.

Shobha - Ma, aapko pata hai bhaiyya kitne dukhi hai iss baat ko lekar? jab maine unse kaha ki main aapse shaadi tudvane ki baat karloongi to vo shaadi ke liye maan gaye.

Meera - Maan gaya mera beta? Vaah!

Mihika - Hum ek kaam karte hain, aaj bhaiyya ko lekar movie dekhne chalte hain. unka mood theek ho jayega.

Everyone - Haan... aisa hi karte hain.
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Pooja's house -

( Priyanka, the model in search of work is pooja's best friend. She is going to live with them for some days until she finds a place to stay. She is coming to Jaipur today)

Pooja - Ma aajse thoda light food banana. i mean poori, dal, fried food avoid karke whole wheat pasta, cereal, salads jaisa kuch banana. Priyanka aa rahi hai na.

Sumitra - Haan... lekin uski flight kitne baje pahuchne waali hai?

Pooja - 2 pm. Dev ke saath use receive karne ke liye airport chali jaaongi.

Dev - Main bhi aaoon! Kyon di? Mujhe match dekhna hai!

Pooja - Plz Dev, chalo na! Main akeli kaise jaaoongi?

Dev - Ok. But don't expect me to mix up with ur friend. mujhe models pasand nahi!

Pooja - theek hai. But plz apne faltu comments apne paas rakhna. vahan kuch bhi mat bak dena.

Dev - Accha, hum aate vakt Ashish jiju ke ghar hokar aajayein?

Pooja - Pahli baat vo abhi tere jiju huye nahi hain! aur doosri baat, tujhe vahan sirf jiju se milna hai ya... hahaha...

Dev - ☺️ aap kya bol rahin hai?! Maine jiju ke liye ek watch aur... aur...

Pooja - aur kya? 😃

Dev - unki behen ke liye earrings laye hain... to unhe de aana tha.. to plz jayein... mujhe jiju se milna hai.

Pooja -Ok. mil le apne jiju se...! 😆 😆
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In Badi Haveli -

( All are busy choosing invitation cards for Ashish's marriage )

Meera - Mihika, dekh na beta ye vaala card kaisa hai?

Mihika - ( somewhat tensed ) Accha hai... par kya hum thodi si jaldi nahi kar rahe?

Shobha - haan ma. Bhaiyya ne haan to kardi hai... par i think unhe thoda time dena chahiye.

Meera - Chup karo tum dono. 🤢 Itna accha mood hai shaadi ka! kharab mat karo ise...

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( Dev and Pooja go to pick Priyanka. They have been waiting for half an hour ) AND THEN -

Priyanka comes running ... She is fair and beautiful n has got dimples. She is wearing a pastel blue T - shirt with tiny muted prints and rust coloured shorts. She instantly hugs Pooja.

Priyanka - Hiii! 😃 😊 😃

Pooja - Hi! flight late ho gayi na! how r u?

Priyanka - M fine...

( Looks at Dev )

Priyanka - Hi ! Dev... ri8?

Dev - Yeah! Hi ! ( He is disgusted with her over acting )

Pooja - chalo lets go home. You must be tired hain na?

Priyanka - haan chalo. ( she is looking at Dev throughout )

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Chapter 5 done! Plz do read n comment!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Bhoomi!! Main koi daily serial dekh rahi hun?? Wah Yaar! Aisi story ke upar ek hit serial banega! Aur Bhoomi hogi uski director!
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Posted: 13 years ago
vry nice update ! :D

waiting fr the next part !...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update bhoomi...waiting for next part😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update Bhoomi!!! continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ arushi

thnx a ton dear fr d compliment. 😊

@ riu n anu

thnx a lot! I'll updt very soon... 😊

@ shweta

thnx dear, i'll updt soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here's chap 6

CHAPTER 6 -

Pooja's house -

Sumitra - Hello, Priyanka! kaisi ho tum aur aane mein itni der kyon kar di?

Priyanka - Vo aunty, flight late ho gayi thi...

Sumitra - Abhi kya logi tum? Tea or coffee? n sandwiches... something like that?

Priyanka - Nope, green tea n an apple... that's enough for now. Thanks aunty!

Pooja - Ma, mein priyanka ko uske room mein chod aati hoon... in the meanwhile aap green tea banao. Aur haan main Dev aur Priyanka baad mein movie dekhne jaayenge.

Dev - huh? 😡 🤢

Sumitra - Ok. 😊

Dev - Ab main jaoon apna bacha kucha match dekhne ke liye?
main jaa raha hoon. 😡 😡🤢
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In Shekhavat Rajbhavan -

Dhara is reading an invitation card she just found a tepoy in the hall. It read -

We cordially invite you to the wedding of -

Ashish Singhania ( son of Shri Amarjeet Singhania and Smt. Meera Singhania)

with
Pooja Vyas ( daughter of Shri Raj Vyas and Smt Sumitra Vyas )

Dhara - Dad, ye unhi ki wedding hai na jo badi haveli mein rahte hain?

Sooraj - haan beta... hume Raj ji ne invite kiya hai, aur hume jaana hai. Shaadi 1 hafte baad hai.

Dhara - Haan hum jayenge... Sarika ko lekar varna bore ho jayenge.

Preeti - Beta, aapke dance classes ka time ho gaya hai... chaliye change kar lijiye varna late ho jayengi..

Dhara - Yup mom!
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In Badi Haveli -

All of them except Amarjeet are going for a movie. ( Amarjeet is a sort of no-nonsense guy, he doesnt like dance, music, films,etc.)

Mihika - Ma, chalo varna late ho jayenge... Shashank aap to tayyar hone mein mujhse bhi zyaada time lagate hain! Chaliye jaldi varna film shuru ho jayegi!

Shobha - Main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Kanika - Awesome tu to bahut acchi lag rahi hai! Chal ab, apna aadha din to mirror ke saamne hi waste karti hai tu!

Shobha - diii..., kya pata kaun kahan mil jayein? isliye hamesha jahan bhi jaana ho, acche se tayyar hokar jaana chahiye!

Ashish - Jaana zaroori hai?

Meera - chalo, chalo late ho jayenge!
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In the theatre -

( Both Pooja, Dev n Priyanka and the Singhanias have come to the same theatre for the same movie at he same time )

Dev is disinterested in the movie and looks around ... and catches a glimpse of Shobha and the rest of her family sitting on the seat quite near him.

Dev - Shobha!

( He screams so loudly that some ppl around him start staring at him and both Shobha and Dev get embarrassed )

Pooja - Ye kya kar raha hai? Nut!! Tu pagal ho gaya hai?

Dev - I am sorry di! 😃

( Shobha is blushing and constantly looking at Dev who is returning her glances )

Priyanka is a bit displeased with he interest Dev is showing in Shobha.

~~~~~~~~~ After the movie ~~~~~~~~~

Meera is introducing Kanika to Pooja n Dev as she was not present during the engagement ceremony.

Meera - Pooja, ye Ashish ki badi behen Kanika hai.

Pooja - Namaste.

Kanika - Namaste.

Meera - Aao sab kuch khaalo.

Everyone headed towards the food court

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Chapter 6 done. plz read n comment!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow wow wow wow! Awesome yaar!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ anu n shweta di , thnx a lot!
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Posted: 13 years ago
great yar..so simple yet so sweet

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