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Posted: 13 years ago
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in 11th!
will move to 12th next month! End of school life! :(

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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 4

Pooja's house -

( Pooja is sitting in her room, with a sad expression )

Dev - Di, aap khush nahi ho? aapki shaadi hone waali hai, vo bhi itne handsome dude se! I know that bidaai stuff n all but still arent u happy?

Pooja - Dev, tu samajh nahi raha hai. Maine unke chehre par shaadi na karne ki iccha dekhi hai, I am surprised kisi ne ye notice nahi kiya! Tu to exception hai, tu to use... kya naam hai uska.. haan Shobha, usko hi ghoor raha tha. ( smiling weakly )

Dev - Chalo di, hum baddy khelkar aate hain, aapka man fresh ho jaayega.

Pooja - Haan, chalo.

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In badi haveli -

Maaa ( a voice echoed through the house )

Meera - Kanika?!! aa beta... Manish kahan hai?

Kanika - Vo mujhe kuch nahi pata! Mujhse hamesha jhagadte rahte hain...

Meera - Tu is mahine mein 24vi baar lad kar aayi hai.. Ye to ab aam baat hai..

Shobha - Fir ladkar aa gayi aap?

Kanika - maa, ye sab kya hai? mujhe sambhaalne ki bajaye mujhe rula rahe hain..

Ashish - Are didi, aap? Kaisi hain?

Kanika - Dekho aap log, kuch seekho mere bhai se, apni didi se kitna pyaar karta hai.

Ashish - Aap sab jao. mujhe didi se kuch baat karni hai...

( Everybody left but shobha was eavesdropping )

Ashish - Didi, ma meri shaadi karva rahi hai. Aap kuch kijiye na.

Kanika - sach mein? Mere bhai ki shaadi hai, aur mujhe hi pata nahi.

Ashish - Aap ye sab chodiye, main aapse kah raha hoonki aap ye shaadi rukhvaaiye... plz... main shaadi kisi bhi keemat par nahi kar sakta! aap janti hai na?

Kanika - Dekh, agar maa ne ladki dekhi hai, to mujhe lagta hai teri zindagi mein khushi vaapas laane ka yahi ek rasta hai.

Ashish - Didi aap bhi? mujhe aapse aisi ummeed nahi thi.

Kanika - Dekh apni khushi ke liye na sahi, maa ki khushiyon ke liye shaadi kar le.

Ashish was not able to say anything, he was stuck thinking abt mayuri on 1 side n maa on the other.

Ashish - Theek hai... 😒💔

Shobha came out of her hiding place...

Shobha - Aap sach mein ...

Ashish - Nahi main shaadi karoonga... ( n he ran n shut himself up in his room )

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CHAPTER 4 done.. though it is a small updt plz read n comment!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
our frozen devil is soap opera queen of the forum.
👏awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
nyc part...bilkul soap queen ki tarah

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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
nice update bhoomi!!! continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Vry nice update...:) waiting 2 noe what will hapeen next...

update soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
thnx guys! i'll updt tom!
frozen.devil thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
@ all, thnx fr d encouraging comments, i'll surely updt by 2de evening.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part...waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ bhoomi :
short and sweet update, bechara ashish, koi uski baat nahi samajh raha hai . continue soon !!😊

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