Chandni FF: I hurt you Completed FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Banu, first of all, Kudos to you for coming up with such a fresh and novel concept on Chandini. Similarly, the contemporary setting of the story gives such a fresh feel to the story. Another thing which I loved very much is the simplicity and clarity of your writing. Any body can impress with high sounding words, flowery language and complexity. But to do the very same in such simple words and approach is remarkable.

I loved the way you have differentiated the characterization of both Nandini and Roopa. I was more impressed when you showed Chandra observing these minute differences and observing the same to Roopa. It is quite evident that he likes Nandini even though he doesn't know Nandini and Roopa are two different girls with the same face.

'Surat' of both the girls might be the same but not their 'seerath'! And Chandra looks like a person who is more attracted towards inner beauty than external appearances. I know these days the CN forum isn't so active as it originally used to be because of the disappointment of many regarding the MUs and separation of Chandini on the actual show. But don't get disheartened. Though I haven't responded to many of your updates due to time constraints, I have followed and read your story with pleasure. Keep up the good work!

It was really sad to see Roopa misusing Chandra's trust. She knows he has a mistaken impression and does not know that Roopa and Nandini are two different individuals. But she does not tell him the truth. She knows he actually likes Nandini and that he is close to her because he thinks she is Nandini. But she keeps on foisting herself on him. Is it alright for her if he marries her and is close with her thinking she is Nandini? It looks very creepy. I hope she does not do anything nasty to Nandini! I hope Chandra comes to know the truth about Nandini and Roopa. I liked this part very much.

it's a surprise that nand came to know about Chandra roopa love from roopa and talked to Chandra about fixing their marriage. Chandra is so nice to be against dowry and not wanting to be the owner of the estate.Chandra doesn't know why he is not feeling so happy about this marriage and roopa hugging him.May be god himself is hinting him that he is not seeing the truth

Nice banu.

Banu the story is proceeding at an interesting pace. I just hope Chandra gets to know the truth about Roopa and Nandini being twins and that he had always loved Nandini.

Hi banu, I have been a silent reader all this while but I couldn't refrain myself from commenting anymore. This is such a beautiful contemporary take by you on Chandni based on Roopa track. Interestingly, Padmanand is such a positive father. Though in the show, his love for his daughters were not unconditional and pure, your version of their family dynamics serves as a soothing balm.

nandini is supporting roopa's marriage without knowing that the groom is Chandra.poor nandini will be shattered if she comes to know the truth.will Chandra know the truth before marriage?