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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Part 4

Nandhini was inside her room...

She was lost from this world...

She was on the bed upside down hugging the pillow...

She kept her eyes closed so that the image which is inside her eyes is not get disturbed...

Yes. the image of the guy who captured her heart in the temple...

Just on the first sight.. just on the very moment.. just on the very second...

Yes... She went to temple that morning...

When she prayed to God and got prasad from priest...

She turned to go around the temple...

That is when she saw him standing in front of her praying to god sincerely...

Her eyes forgot to blink the moment seeing his handsome face..

And when it blinked... it captured the image of his face inside her heart...

That is when he opened his yes and look towards priest for the prasad...

But priest didn't see him and went inside...

He seems to be little upset... and she felt he might have felt bad that his prayer is not accepted by the God and the prasad is not given as blessings...

He might have got hurt... and that very feeling itself was hurting Nandhini...

That is when he was turning from there while she forward her hand towards him with the prasad...

What if the priest failed to give the blessings... She is there to give the prasad to the person who took her heart the very moment...

When he looked at her... the eyes conveyed the words than the mouth can ever do...

She was unable to withstand his gazing eyes and moved from there to go around the temple...

As she moved.. she can see him coming behind...

She cant take it granted and think that he is coming for her...

Its a temple and after prayer every person come around the temple...

In that same way he might have come behind her...

Still the feeling inside her that he is coming behind itself was giving happiness to her...

After roaming around.. she felt that she cant stay there anymore...

If she stays.. not sure what her crazy heart will tell her mind to do...

She just rushed out of the temple and reached the house...

Since then.. she is in the bed only in his thoughts...

Avantika.. her mother too came to her room to call her for having food...

Avantika; Nandhini.. come and have food...

Nandhini; No mom.. i am not feeling hungry...

Avantika; Not feeling hungry??? surprised as i never seen you skipping food...

Nandhini: Please mom.. today i am not feeling hungry.. leave me.. please...

Avantika took deep breathe and went out of the room...

Nandhini continued on her own dream land...

When she turned towards the side...

He was lay down beside her with that killer smile...

Nandhini; you here..

She asked in surprise...

Same smile as reply...

Nandhini; Dont smile like that.. i am unable to even meet your eyes...

She said with a blush...

Still the same mesmerising smile...

She turned against him as she was unable to handle that smile anymore...

But she was unable to avoid him too...

She slightly turned her face to look at him while she found none there...

She sat on the bed and looked around...

Nandhini; Where you went leaving me...

She said with upset face...

That is when she realised it is her mere imagination...

Nandhini; Oh no.. how can i handle this...

She expressed...

She was restless minute by minute.. second by second...

The only thought now inside her mind is to see him again...

Nandhini: Where are you???

She puzzled...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Love at first sight...
Gr8 going...
But please update little long parts..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
wow...nandini too fell in love with chandra at first sight.her pov for giving prasad to chandra waa nice.nandini imagining chandra near her was romantic
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Chandra fresh up himself...

Its time for seeing around the estate...

MD already called him that he is sending a person named Ganesh to show him around...

When Chandra came out getting ready... Ganesh too reached the place...

Chandra; You are Mr. Ganesh...

Ganesh; yes Sir.. MD told me to show you estate...

Chandra: Yes lets go.. i am ready...

Chandra & Ganesh got ready...

As its hill station.. they were having a jeep to go around those up & down steep routes...

Ganesh seems to be good driver too...

He started the jeep while Chandra get on the front seat...

Ganesh & Chandra strated going around the estate...

It was very vast tea estate...

Ganesh; Sir.. can you sit that corner of the mountain...

Chandra: Yes i can...

Ganesh; Till there its our estate only...

Chandra; Oh ok...

Ganesh; Our MD is the richest in this hill station & hold max of estate volume...

Chandra: Good.. glad to know...

Ganesh; 1000s of workers are working with us...

Chandra; Obvious when the volume is huge...

Ganesh; Yes... they are paid every Saturday...

Chandra: Oh ok...

Ganesh: Can you set some houses that side...

Chandra: Yes i can...

Ganesh; Max of workers live there only...

Chandra; Oh well.. Its near for them to come for work...

Ganesh; Yes.. our MD only build houses for them together and made them stay there...

Chandra: So nice to know...

Ganesh; He is very nice person and do his best for others...

Chandra: I can get that seeing him...

Chandra smiled...

Ganesh; Sir.. you wish to go there...

Chandra: Of course we can.. we get chance to meet them...

Ganesh; yes sir.. thats why i asked...

Ganesh drive towards those houses...

All the way.. Ganesh was giving details about the estates.. their working.. this that...

That is when one more info was given by Ganesh...

Ganesh; Choti mam is just like his father & do his best for workers...

Chandra was thinking.. Choti mam.. does he mean his daughter...

He wanted to clarify with Ganesh itself...

Chandra; You mean daughter of our MD Sir...

Ganesh; Yes... we call her as choti mam only...

Chandra; Oh ok...

Ganesh; She teach education to those children... help girls to develop their knowledge & much more...

Chandra was more glad on hearing about her...

Ganesh; Even now.. she may be there...

Chandra now got excited...

She is going to be there is some great news for him...








Nandhini was restless...

She want to get rid of this condition...

She decided to go to those children of their workers atleast to divert her mind...

She swiftly got ready & looked at herself in the mirror...

Not sure why.. but she felt that she is looking more beautiful today than normally she looks...

Still she turned sides and checked herself whether she is ok in all aspects...

She was wondering about herself...

As its not her usual...

She normally never cares for any make up or beauty...

Infact she use very mild make up and simple jewellery...

But today.. she felt like should not look dull...

But at the same time.. she is not interested to over do the make up also...

She finally got satisfied herself combing her disturbed hair a little...

She took her bag and came out...

Avantika: Nandhini... where you started...

Nandhini; I am going to teach those children...

Avantika; But Nandhini.. atleast you have some food.. you didn't had lunch too...

Nandhini: no mom.. i am getting late...

Avantika; Nandhini.. you are talking as if your appointment is getting delayed.. you are only teaching voluntarily and they are not going to tell you anything even if you go late...

Nandhini; Mom...

Avantika; Come.. have fruits at least...

Avantika took her to dining and gave her some fruits...

Without any other way... Nandhini started having those fruits...

After having fruits.. she rushed towards those houses...






Chandra reached the place where houses were there...

When they got down.. the people who were there were surprised to see some new person there...

Ganesh: He is Mr. Chandra our estate manager...

All were surprised to know about their new manager...

They gave warm welcome to him...

They offer tea to him...

Chandra was overwhelmed seeing their affection...

Chandra went around those houses meeting those people...

Inside his heart.. Ganesh words were going on...

Chandra was thinking.. Ganesh said she may be here.. while she is not seen anywhere...

May be she is somewhere that side...

He went around here & there meeting people...

In short in search of her...

He cant find her anywhere...

He got little upset when he came back to Ganesh roaming around everywhere and found her missing...

But at the same time.. he cant even ask anyone why she didn't came today...

How can he.. is she a worker to ask being manager...

She is MD daughter.. and its her wish when to come or whether to come...

WHo is he to expect her to come just because he is searching for her...

But all these mind talks were not accepted by his heart...

His heart was badly searching for her...

Ganesh noticed his face turned dull...

Ganesh; Sir.. what happened.. you are dull...

Chandra; Nothing.. just like that.. may be due to new place...

He tried to manage...

Ganesh: Ok.. shall we move sir...

Somewhere his mind was not accepting him to go away giving up about her meeting...

Chandra: If you dont mind.. can we spend some more time here.. this place is so nice...

Ganesh; of course Sir...

Ganesh was wondering why he is interested to be there..

Chandra was going here & there talking to them some or other...

Now Ganesh need to return...

Ganesh: Sir.. MD will be searching for me.. if you dont mind... shall we start...

Chandra; Of course we can.. come.. lets go...

Chandra knows he cant push him to stay more...

Ganesh get into the jeep...

Now its turn of Chandra to get in...

He was wondering... why i feel uneasy... something is there...

When he kept his one leg on the jeep to get in and was about to get in...

He saw her...

Yes.. he saw her coming towards those houses with a bag...

May be she carries books in that bag to teach them...

On seeing her his face brightened...





Nandhini who was rushing towards there casually lift her face & looked at their jeep standing there...

Nandhini was thinking.. why jeep came here... for whom...

She lift her face & saw him.. the guy who stole her heart in the temple...

She was pleasantly surprised...

She was wondering.. how come he is here...

And that too why he is getting into our jeep...

Nandhini looked at him surprised...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Part 6
Chandra was standing gazing at her...

She was moving slowly towards the houses looking at him with corner of her eyes...

Ganesh; Shall we start...

Chandra nod his head as acceptance...

He get on the seat of the jeep...

It started moving towards estate office while his thoughts were around her...

Oh NO... i missed to atleast look at her for sometime...

Either i might have went there little late or she might have come little early...

He felt irritated with the wrong timing...

By now they reached the estate office...

Chandra went through some important files to understand the work procedure followed there...

After spending time there till late evening...

He locked the office and went behind towards his room...

He remembered whatever happened inside that house.. atta.. chilli powder...

He decided to be cautious now...

He slowly opened the door and looked around...

He went inside after getting confirmed that there is nothing...

Then even after going inside he looked around and nothing was there...

He felt relaxed...

Then he remembered Ganesh telling him.. his dinner will be in the kitchen...

He went to washroom to fresh up.. while again he checked for anything there...

After a while he came to kitchen on his night dress...

He took the box and went to dining...

He opened the box and started having food...

OMG... its too spicy...

Chandra; aaahhh...aaahhh...

He shouted and ran to take the water...

He swiftly drink water to handle the spicy food...

Then he kept the side dish aside and had chapathi alone...

He came to bedroom to sleep while he felt someone in the hall...

He wonder who it should be...

That too in this time...

Hall was completely dark as Chandra went inside bedroom switching off the lights...

Still he looked around to see for any sounds or any signs...

Yes.. he found someone moving near the wall...

He swiftly hold the person wrapped his hand around...

Then switched on the light...

Roopa: leave me.. leave me...

She shouted...

Chandra was shocked seeing her...

He took his hand swiftly which was wrapped around her...

But again in modern dress changed from the dress she was wearing in the evening near the staff houses...

Chandra; You.. here.. that too in this time...

Roopa: I came to do mischief and i got caught...

Chandra; What msichief you did...

Roopa: Sorry.. i only add spicy to side dish...

Chandra; Oh its your job...

Roopa nod her head as acceptance...

Roopa; i thought of going out of the house unknown to you after you go to sleep... but got caught...

Chandra: Yes.. i went to sleep.. but felt like some one in the hall.. thats why came here... Anyway.. go home.. its not right being here that too in this time...

Roopa; Ok...

Roopa rushed out from there...

Chandra was really confused...

Why there is strange feeling in seeing the same girl...

Yes.. the feeling i get seeing in the temple & near that staff house is different from what i get now...

He was surprised...






Roopa entered into her room without making noise...

Nandhini: Roopa.. where you went.. that too in this time...

Roopa; Oh.. you saw me.. i thought of making it unknown to you...

Nandhini; What you did today???

Roopa; I did mischief with that new Manager who join today...

Nandhini; Roopa.. this is not right.. he just join today & you did mischief with him...

Roopa; With new only i can do Nandhini.. if old staff then they are knowing about me and i cant do anything...

Nandhini; You wont change Roopa.. how many times i told to reduce your mischief.. you are grown now & you should not do all these like child...

Roopa; How many times i told you. i love to be like this and i will be like this only...

Roopa went to sleep on her side of bed while her twin sister Nandhini slept on her side...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
again roopa did mischief and Chandra caught her.it was a cute scene.nice to see roopa nandini together.roopa can't listen to nandini's advise.waiting for nandini to know that roopa was talking about chandra
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 7

Days were passing...

Its usual now that Chandra see Nandhini in the temple and near the staff houses whenever possible...

But Roopa continues to meet Chandra doing some or other mischief in the Estate office itself...

Though the fact was not know to Chandra that he is meeting two different girls.. still was thinking them as same while he was feeling pleasant when meeting Nandhini...

One such day...

Chandra caught Roopa trying to do mischief with Chandra...

Chandra; Can i ask you something...

Roopa; What???

Chandra: I wish to know why are you doing all these mischief with me...

Roopa; Because i like to do mischief...

Chandra: Is it the only reason behind...

Roopa: Then what else...

Chandra; Let me come to point as i am not used to talk going around... i am really confused seeing you...

Roopa: Confused for what...

Chandra: I feel you like two different personalities...

Roopa; I dont get you...

Chandra: I mean.. when i meet you in the temple or near the staff houses.. you dress differently.. behave differently.. while here you are entirely different...

Roopa was thinking.. Oh it seems he meet Nandhini in those places and mistaken it as me... as he dont know i got a twin sister...

But she was not interest to reveal the truth that she is different...

Roopa: Its like that only.. can i be like this in temple or in the staff houses.. what they will think about me.. thats why.. but here it is different.. i can be what i want...

Chandra: I can understand your point.. but i wonder is this what you want.. i mean these dressings.. these behaviour...

Roopa: Of course then what... Look... any girl will be going out in chudidar & saree.. but inside house in their own place they will be in casual night dress right...

Chandra; I agree...

Roopa: Its the same. . this estate office is ours and i can be as i wish here...

Chandra; Oh ok...

Roopa: By the way.. dont you like me to be like this...

Chandra was thinking... how can i say yes as answer for this... still if this is your wish.. i dont want to interfere...

Chandra: Not exactly.. if you are convenient.. then what can i tell...

Roopa: You can tell... i think you got that rights...

Chandra was surprised... 'I got rights..' what she mean...

Chandra; Right!!!

Roopa; Dont you have... dont pretend to be innocent...

Roopa tried to move away... while Chandra hold her hand...

Chandra; Does this mean.. you too...

Roopa: Yes.. me too...

She smiled...

Chandra: You dont know how happy i am to hear this...

Roopa: Of course i am happy too...

Chandra: Roopa.. can we meet in the temple to offer prayer together tomorrow...

Roopa was thinking... oh god.. i will be caught...

Roopa: No no... Its not right to show our closeness in places where others come.. instead we can be as we want here...

Chandra; Ok.. as you wish...

Roopa: I wish you like me more in estate than other places..

Chandra: Sorry to say this.. but i like you more in those places than here... I cant say why which is not even known to me...

Roopa; Ok.. i am leaving... bye...

Chandra: Bye...

Roopa went from there...

Chandra smiled...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Banu, first of all, Kudos to you for coming up with such a fresh and novel concept on Chandini. Similarly, the contemporary setting of the story gives such a fresh feel to the story. Another thing which I loved very much is the simplicity and clarity of your writing. Any body can impress with high sounding words, flowery language and complexity. But to do the very same in such simple words and approach is remarkable.
I loved the way you have differentiated the characterization of both Nandini and Roopa. I was more impressed when you showed Chandra observing these minute differences and observing the same to Roopa. It is quite evident that he likes Nandini even though he doesn't know Nandini and Roopa are two different girls with the same face.

'Surat' of both the girls might be the same but not their 'seerath'! And Chandra looks like a person who is more attracted towards inner beauty than external appearances. I know these days the CN forum isn't so active as it originally used to be because of the disappointment of many regarding the MUs and separation of Chandini on the actual show. But don't get disheartened. Though I haven't responded to many of your updates due to time constraints, I have followed and read your story with pleasure. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Loved the story... continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Chandra approaching roopa regarding her changed personality is interesting.oh..roopa realized chandra's confusion..still hid d truth from him.oh...i cant believe that indirectly she showed her interest in him n he is so happy.loved d fact that he prefers to see her in sacred places which shows that he is in luv with nandini tho he doesnt know that both r not same.how long will he get trapped?poor chandra

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