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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved reading this beautiful review of the chapter, Avantika. Thank you. My responses to your comments are in bold.

Originally posted by: Avantika1115


Shailu..
Its is very good scripted chapter. I really loved it..

Satya and chanakya bond is very good.
Satya is patriot and has great Guru Bhakti towards Chanakya. Chanakya is truly blessed to have wondeful pupils. But again,Satya is very young and he is overstepping I guess. He is not testing the water how much deep it is.. May be His fate makes him do so.

Chanakya is really blessed to have wonderful pupils. But a lot of credit must go to him as well because he made them into what they are today. He shaped them into the beautiful and efficient people they are from raw clay.

I think Satya ,is going to die at hands of Dhanand since he is underestimating Amatya.
Chanakya is very brilliant in warning him about Wit of Amatyarakshas.He is very clear that he wants Amatya alive.. may be he wants to team with Cgm

Maybe, Satyajit will not live a long time but he will not give up without a fight. He will go all guns blazing like a brilliant comet.

Bhadrasal is very tricky character and he is not just galloping horses like we saw in Serial. He is acquainted with warfare tricks. His fighting skills fascinates me.. Rakthabheeja comparison I enjoyed.

Bhadrasal is gruesome warrior and able general. We will be able to appreciate the valor of the good side only when it is fought against antagonists of equal potential and not against cardboard cutouts or cartoons. We will appreciate Chandragupt, Chanakya, and his men like Bhimsen and Purushottam only when they win and outwit people who are equally capable, efficient, brave, with a number of negative traits, and not because the opposition or antagonists are weak or foolish.

Bhimasen is very promising character .
Dhanand temper proves that he is indeed Nand's vansh. he does not know Amatya's greatness, poor fellow i pity him.Amatya is loyal to unworthy family...

Yes, Dhananand does not know the real worth of the people around him. He is very arrogant and often misbehaves with his own men. This will also prove to be one of the aspects of his downfall.

Where is Cgm..
is he still in Arjun Rajnagari..
does he know all these updates..

Yes, he is still in Rajnagari and does not know most of these things. These kind of things are not informed or relayed through messengers because they could be misused if they fall into wrong hands. However, there is no need to worry about his lack of information about these happenings because his present priority should be clinching the alliance which he is doing. Before leaving, he gave the full authority to act on his behalf to Helena and Acharya Chanakya and they are doing it excellently.

I hope he is not in la la land.because War is approaching very fast..

He is not in la la land. He will rise up to the occasion when the situation demands it.

I enjoyed every bit of it.. I wish to see betrayal by someone close to Chandragupt.It will add spice to the plot

Let's see!

Shailu all kingdoms you mentioned like gandhar ,videha,,they were under magadh right.. How can they wag their tails against Chandra

No, according to this story, they are still not under the suzerainty of Magadh. They are independent states and jealous of the growing power of Magadh. I precisely made the point that they are not directly helping Padmanand or attacking Magadh. They cannot afford to do it as well. They are just indirectly helping, engaging in subversive actitivities, and providing logistics (finance, free passage to enemy soldiers, caravans, etc) That part of the story how Chanakya and CGM tackle all these issues and how they bring them under a single umbrella is yet to come. I am not approaching this according to the historical chronology nor sticking to authentic historical facts. All these details and descriptions are fiction.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Interesting update. thank you for the PM.👍🏼


Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Avantika1115


yes amina..Cvs can read this story which is truly historical in all aspects. Shailu balances it with all flavors of Emotions.

but problem is Cvs want sensation and passion more... So they want to kindle all emotions more than story.they want desperate trps... So

They cannot show helena as good. SHe has to be bad and possessive.. Why cant she be caring..?

They cannot show Durdhara as wise.. because she has to support Nandini.. so she cannot overshadow Nandini. So she is one loosu ponnu..

Chanakya why he hates Nandini... Just for akand bharat ,he makes silly plans... Omg... He is a idiot in this show... He gives all wrong advises.He does not know selucus how he came suddenly out of no where.

In that serial only Amatya and Dhananand knew what they are doing. Even Chandragupt sorry,he is in my hit list from today.
Because
He is going to accept HElena for sake of Magadh? isn't she your wife idiot
going to throw nandini... because that foolish girl is nand daughter...
i seriously wish Roopa is now with us...
Bunch of lunatic characters in name of Chandragupt

pn Shailu,I watched telgu film you mentioned. It was far more better than Chandranandini. Atleast Nageshwara rao was better than this Chanakya...
I could make the story though I did not understand the language...


Avantika, in that film there were only two bright spots. Nageswara Rao's Chanakya and Amatya Rakshas. They did a good job despite everything going against them, and being expected to ham and overact in an unreasonable manner. The fancy dresses and pancakes on face makeup only made things worse. Nageswara did make even skull talking in the graveyard look believable and plausible. But then the movie was bad and comic unintentionally.
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Posted: 8 years ago
chapter 35:: Oh My God! What a breathtaking chapter it was. You are expert in creating thrill in your writing. Especially the last part of the chapter with Chanakya and Satyajeet gives goosebumps.
Loved the way you wrote about Dhananad, and also his conversation with Amatya Rakkhas. From this chapter, I am more with the enemy team than Chanakya 😆, I love them more than the good ones. 😆The flashback of the conversation between Rakkhas and Chankya was priceless!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
This chapter was really engaging , and very intellectual .
There is also the fact , you make the enemies motive and characters more believable also you do not show the protagonist a lot heroic which I really like

Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

chapter 35:: Oh My God! What a breathtaking chapter it was. You are expert in creating thrill in your writing. Especially the last part of the chapter with Chanakya and Satyajeet gives goosebumps.

Loved the way you wrote about Dhananad, and also his conversation with Amatya Rakkhas. From this chapter, I am more with the enemy team than Chanakya 😆, I love them more than the good ones. 😆The flashback of the conversation between Rakkhas and Chankya was priceless!!👏👏👏

I am happy you liked the action, thrills, and enemy gang. I too love the baddies like Dhananand and Rakshas because they are often very interesting, and as a writer one can explore a number of shades, while with the good people it often becomes a bit predictive. The flashback conversation was a very favorite part of that chapter even for me too. It was a sort of dream of mine to see Acharya Chanakya and Amatya Rakshas in the same frame discussing their diverging viewpoints and perspectives in a meaningful scene. It has been there with me since the days I read the translation of Mudrarakshas in English. A kind of what if Acharya Chanakya and Amatya Rakshas meet on the same platform imagination! I am glad this scene appealed to you too. Thank you for reading and responding.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeehana

This chapter was really engaging , and very intellectual .

There is also the fact , you make the enemies motive and characters more believable also you do not show the protagonist a lot heroic which I really like

Will be waiting for the next update

Thank you. I always feel characters and story connect when we understand their motives even though they might be antagonists.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 36: Another terrific update! Your Chanakya, your Mudrarakkhas, your Dhananad, your Bhadrashal and Bhimsen seems to be just came up from the pages of History books! Your Satyajit is a perfect example of a loyal young spy of the royalty. In very few lines you have perfectly described his smartness and loyalty towards his mentor and his motherland together.
Your plot is getting more intriguing with each and every chapter. 😳 I don't know what is your profession, but I am very sure that you would be a very successful script-writer. Especially you are expert in building such strong, intriguing, thrilling and intelligent scenarios over romance. The dialogues of Satyajit shows the depth of your thoughts over the plot! Lend me some of your skills please. 😆

You know what, I was thinking about the show while reading your story and I was like seriously what it should have been and look what crap they are throwing on us now!! 🤪 🤣 Got to watch some scenes of today's episode and was thinking what is happening actually! 😆

So much of happenings, but where is our Chandragupta Maurya? Let him to back with a bang please!! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

<font size="3">Chapter 36: Another terrific update! Your Chanakya, your Mudrarakkhas, your Dhananad, your Bhadrashal and Bhimsen seems to be just came up from the pages of History books! Your Satyajit is a perfect example of a loyal young spy of the royalty. In very few lines you have perfectly described his smartness and loyalty towards his mentor and his motherland together.</font>

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<font size="3">Your plot is getting more intriguing with each and every chapter. 😳 I don't know what is your profession, but I am very sure that you would be a very successful script-writer. Especially you are expert in building such strong, intriguing, thrilling and intelligent scenarios over romance. The dialogues of Satyajit shows the depth of your thoughts over the plot! Lend me some of your skills please. 😆</font>

<font size="3">You know what, I was thinking about the show while reading your story and I was like seriously what it should have been and look what crap they are throwing on us now!!🤪🤣 Got to watch some scenes of today's episode and was thinking what is happening actually! 😆</font>

<font size="3">So much of happenings, but where is our Chandragupta Maurya? Let him to back with a bang please!! 😃</font>

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Stuti, thank you! Though these chapters read like history, this FF isn't historical. Just a few plot devices, characterization and techniques are drawn from historical fiction. I studied English literature. So I have a peculiar fascination for stories,characters and narratives. Chandragupt will be back with a bang whenever he comes. Three or four back to back chapters have passed without him. But the way the story was going, it would have plainly interrupted the flow if I brought him there.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes shaillu i wish balaji had script writer like you ,you sketch each character so clearly unlike the show where confusion hi confusion hai to me they just decide on dailly to daily episode no concrete script no wonder it's haywire
Honestly speaking I don't want to watch it unless he put that crown back on his foolish head

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