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Originally posted by: JanakNandini
I am really glad to see you back after so many days.Though you are writing very good plots around bahubali in wattpad , I feel you shpuld come here as well and write another ff in cn.It wouldbe a treat if you could write a contemporary era ff.
Coming to the storyi find it very well executed plot.Your characters did not change.Like Nand is nand.He has not subdued cruelly as cvs did in serial.Nand is giving superb fight to cgm.At this point he almost teared his shield.He is in upper front over cgm in the seige.Next is Amatya. Again unlike in the cn he is shifting his side from evil to bad.He got his own set of rules that no one should harm unborn child etcBut somewhere i feel Nandini is given more importance.Nandini may be king favorite but as per this story she is not far superior than Helena. Dont get me wrong.I really expected Helena to be there .Durdhara she herself always sees down that she is not contributing anything to cgm.But I wish to see how cgm calms and consoles her.She is going to die soon.I find two points unansweredWhen amatya says durdhara is poisoned and shall die.Neither chandra nor others exoresses any shock over that.Instead Chandra was more bothered about Amatya...???Nand did not notice Durdhara missing iin her room.
Helena is taking care of everything in Patliputra. In the present scenario, there will be nothing much to show about her in Sitapur. Scenes between Durdhara, Chandragupt and Nandini will come in the next updates. Their shock, their sorrow and sadness will be expressed there. Amatya will be the one to guide CGM and not Nandini. She will support and stand beside him just the way all his wives Helena and Durdhara do. Nand did not notice Durdhara's absence for a reason. It will come in the next update. I will complete this FF. As for another FF on CN, let's see. If I get a good Idea, I will give it a try.
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