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Posted: 1 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: govindagopala

I will write in detail point wise later. Currently seems like lot of pressure on many shows on Colours. Neerja was to be closed but got extension after thinking of new track. Many new shows are ready to launch. So makers are ensuring that even at 6pm they are able to retain TRP 1 at least. Whether you agree or not, my view is that 16 Jan & episodes after that this week will be liked by lot of audience not just fans of romance. Hopefully TRP will be retained. After that the makers will bring Tara in disguise the week after which will bring romance & family drama.

Wiil be waiting for your reviews. 😊

Tomorrow is the TRP day. Hope CJL get at least 1 .

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Posted: 1 years ago
#32

Today's episode 16 Jan was good, hopefully it grabs them the TRP. Colours has lots of shows lined up so hoping TRP will stay at 1 at least. Vishal & Kanika are doing well. But today Nani & Jyoti were good too. Its not an easy task for writers too.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Ego ki ego se shadi hui hai Stubbornness paida karke separation hoga aur kya?

Temporary separation...SM toofan aaye usse pehle Chanda aagayismiley37. Makers ko pata hai galiyaan padhne wali hai

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Posted: 1 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: govindagopala

That's exactly the reason makers are trying to attract more audience & not just lovers of romance. Even at 6pm TRP has to be retained. There is something called target audience for each slot & that has to be attracted. Online hype, X &! Instagram hype means nothing in India if TV TRP low. At 6pm ppl in age group of Nani, mami, Jyoti, watch the show, they like drama so that's being pushed.

You are right they are trying to attract viewers of all age groups. I don't have any problem with family dramas and separation. I just want them to look for the loopholes they are leaving. Sare characters choot Gaya hai . They didn't even give proper closure. If they don't want to show vanraaj they can let him die after the promise or send him to abroad for treatment. They left ananya hanging between behan and sautan. They can show us she is trying her luck with Deva or move on in her life with a new guy.

Even praksh chillane k ilawa kuch nahi karta. Farwary ne kuch nahi bataya Deva ko about that night incident and Raunak saving her.

Deva had a transformation from Mr. Mallik to Deva within 15 minutes smiley3.

Characters are scenes mein consistentsy nahi hai. Makers ko iss baat pe bhi dhyaan karna hai.

Drama, saazish, separation, union, romance, roothna manana chalta rahega.. scenes acche hone chahiye logical way mein dikhana chaiye

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Posted: 1 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

I am finding severe lack in the consistency of the story.

1. How did Tara realize that Old Deva has returned? He was grumpy till morning... He is not a gear of a car who will change this soon.. Makers atleast should apply some brain...! This kind of lousy script is not expected from Swastik.

2.Why makers are rushing? There is no monolougue or heart to heart convo between Badshah and Deva or Basantkaka or Deva regarding his mother. He overnight accepted her! The editing section is doing terribly bad job and the screenplay writer is under pressure and writing a flawed script.

3.They have not shown Farwari's reaction on Deva getting his mother back... A track of her acceptance is equally important. She just hug Deva and expressed her joy that he got a family. Why she is not insecured? Raunak easily can take advantage of it. which I feel is very natural and could have been shown.

4.I thought Prakash was a stronger villain but Raunak has more potential to affect Deva than him.

5.They have stopped showing the Sehgals completely atleast they could have been mentioned them in a monolouge or a dialogue between Tara and Raunak


6.Only Nani is a consistent villain and is being used properly... Soni, Ananya Raunak and Prakash are just brought but are not used... The writer is currently messing up a lot.

7. Why did Deva didn’t get up and stop Tara from going... And then why he is running behind her to search her. (BTS)

8. If Makers had brought the maid track it should be used properly...

9.I really appreciate Preeti that how she motivated Tara. But Is'nt that wiered that A woman who is so timid and weak is giving such valuable marriage advice to Tara who is more educated, bold and intelligent than her Or is it just because She had been a married woman thats why she could do it?

I am quite optimistic about the maid track Hope makers give a compact storyline... Vishal alone cannot pull the entire show... He is not getting proper rest Even the story-writer is also not writing the plot properly. They are jumping from one to another without finishing the previous one..

What is ur opinion?

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Agree with all points

Vishal can't pull all show by his acting esp for neutral viewer...I agree with each pointers..their basic track is good..it has so much potential..they just need proper writing and same track can stretch as well..I don't know what's the hurry and how it would help TRP..each track takes some time to grow..it just gets over before it starts properly..is that old original writer not writing anymore Hedge..any idea

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Posted: 1 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Neerasi29

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Agree with all points

Vishal can't pull all show by his acting esp for neutral viewer...I agree with each pointers..their basic track is good..it has so much potential..they just need proper writing and same track can stretch as well..I don't know what's the hurry and how it would help TRP..each track takes some time to grow..it just gets over before it starts properly..is that old original writer not writing anymore Hedge..any idea

Hedge is not writing. 😭😭😪😪
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Posted: 1 years ago
#37

Oh how u know?

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Posted: 1 years ago
#38

A track needs atleast two week to unfold and get an arc fully utna waqt toh dena hota hai... But the makers are jumping and not arranging the story. Its ok they want to grab new audience but they will have to think that ppl watch this for Devra. Logical loopholes chor rahe hai... Ek track full nhi dikha raha hai...

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Posted: 1 years ago
#39
Ek toh Hedge does not write so clumsy

And some ppl said that he was unwell and currently writing Aangan.... Usually trp drop hone pe writers badal diye jate hai... Chahe woh kitni vi acchi ho....

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Nani had rightly pointed out that Tara is emotional...and Deva is hot headed. I was mad at Tara.. But now I literary want to smack his head on the wall.. I mean What a timing! She asked him straight and he chooses to play a prank now?? I mean seriously..... This is the second time his timing and understanding is sooo wrong...The gatbandhan get burnt.. When exactly the time when he was again trying to confess his feelings..

Deva re Deva... Tu almonds kha le. He was knitting amaltash flower.... And the thread of his love is broken. Iske Romantic surprises kya kavi poorie honge He was looking so cute when he hide the dupatta behind his back 😍😍🥰🥰 Shooo cuteee 💓💓💓But wrong time Deva... Ap ki chiriya khet chuk ke chali gayi ab woh aande nhi denewali.

Are the makers peeping into our forum. So finally they instill the inferior complexity in Farwari's brain..This dumb and impractical girl will now trust Ronak. And Deva ne vi nani ko kuch nhi sunaya.... He was focused on Tara memsahab only. Kar do makers kar do poorie duniya ko Tara ki khilaf kar do 😈😈


His eyes are searching her frantically.... Deva finally expressed his own restlessness and Tara came downstairs. Poorie Duniya ko pata hai ki Tara ne Deva se kya kya vada kiya... Pati patni ki privacy aur tv shows ka chattish ka akhra hai.Now Deva is angry that Tara is leaving him and his haveli! Aare ab toh rok le Bhai smiley44smiley44

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