Originally posted by: pyaar2012
I am finding severe lack in the consistency of the story.
1. How did Tara realize that Old Deva has returned? He was grumpy till morning... He is not a gear of a car who will change this soon.. Makers atleast should apply some brain...! This kind of lousy script is not expected from Swastik.
2.Why makers are rushing? There is no monolougue or heart to heart convo between Badshah and Deva or Basantkaka or Deva regarding his mother. He overnight accepted her! The editing section is doing terribly bad job and the screenplay writer is under pressure and writing a flawed script.
3.They have not shown Farwari's reaction on Deva getting his mother back... A track of her acceptance is equally important. She just hug Deva and expressed her joy that he got a family. Why she is not insecured? Raunak easily can take advantage of it. which I feel is very natural and could have been shown.
4.I thought Prakash was a stronger villain but Raunak has more potential to affect Deva than him.
5.They have stopped showing the Sehgals completely atleast they could have been mentioned them in a monolouge or a dialogue between Tara and Raunak
6.Only Nani is a consistent villain and is being used properly... Soni, Ananya Raunak and Prakash are just brought but are not used... The writer is currently messing up a lot.
7. Why did Deva didn’t get up and stop Tara from going... And then why he is running behind her to search her. (BTS)
8. If Makers had brought the maid track it should be used properly...
9.I really appreciate Preeti that how she motivated Tara. But Is'nt that wiered that A woman who is so timid and weak is giving such valuable marriage advice to Tara who is more educated, bold and intelligent than her Or is it just because She had been a married woman thats why she could do it?
I am quite optimistic about the maid track Hope makers give a compact storyline... Vishal alone cannot pull the entire show... He is not getting proper rest Even the story-writer is also not writing the plot properly. They are jumping from one to another without finishing the previous one..
What is ur opinion?