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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE: This is an anouncement I thought might excite everyone who enjoys the story. THE STORY WILL START NOW! The past chapters were just building upto the main plot of the story. The atmosphere and setting will change completely in the next few chapters, and the story will take a complete change. The next chapter would hint some if it, and then our story will truly begin, the beautiful journey of AshKara!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice chapter Swarya😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh... thanks for d note.. the devil lucifee.. i hae it...waiting for the actual story.. bt one thing.. Ashok lived before christ...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicndance2

Oh... thanks for d note.. the devil lucifee.. i hae it...waiting for the actual story.. bt one thing.. Ashok lived before christ...lol

Okay that's seriously lol! I didn't even know that, oh well!!! Anyways, the next chapter will be really short, but after that I'll make the chapter longer!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful updat...I hope show me bhi inhi ki jodi ho sushim ki nahi...btw you are good writer 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 14 (Last Chapter of Part 1)

* 2 Years Later *

Ashok looked at the piece of earring in his hand. He had grown to be very powerful and handsome, and reluctantly accepted the marriage proposal of Ahankara's little sister, Avantika.
It took him some time to accept, but his promise forced him to.

"Ahankara, why did you leave me? Why did you force me into this promise? Oh please Ahankara, please return," He cried silently.
"Rajkumar Ashok?" A female voice interrupted, and Ashok turned around to find a girl, similar features to Ahankara. Avantika.

He quickly wiped his tears, forcing a smile.
"Rajkumari Avantika, what brings you here?" Ashok asked, his voice a little peculiar.
"You loved my sister... She loved you..." The princess was in a shocked state, and dropped down onto the bed, covering her mouth in shock.
"I can't believe I was going to attempt such a sin!" She cried.
"I'm sorry..." Ashok whispered.
"No! You shouldn't be, I'm going to call off the wedding now!" She said angrily. She got up only to be stopped by Ashok.
"Please don't... Avantika..." Ashok said, holding back his tears.
Avantika gave him a puzzled look.
"Why not?!" She questioned.
Ashok smiled.
"Your sister had made me promise..." And then he explained.
By the end, both were soaked in pain and memories.
"But Ashok... your promise is broken," Avantika said.
"Huh? What do you mean?" Ashok asked.
"Sister said that you needed to forget her, but you couldn't, and an old Ujjani tradition follows that if you can't keep up with a bit of that promise, your promise breaks that instinct!" Avantika explained.
Ashok smiled happily. He was free. He got up and smiled.
"Avantika, make sure to live your life to the fullest, and to tell everyone this tragic love story. I would never want a repeat of history." Ashok said, his expression blank.
"But Rajkumar... where are you going?" Avantika asked, confused.
"To your sister,".
With that he ran at a incredible speed, jumping high into the thick air, his window open.
"Bye everyone!" He screamed.
Then the shredding sound of air slicing through his body cut his own screams...

End of Part 1:

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay, okay, this is the first chapter of Part 2!
Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 15:

(Present time)

"Ashoka was a great prince in the Mauryan empire. His love story is really famous in India and in many countries abroad," The teacher wrote on the black board.
She felt snickers from behind and spun around to find the naughtiest boy in class. Siddharth Nigam.
"Siddharth!" She shouted. He looked up, the smile fading from his perfect face.
He looked towards the ground, standing up from his seat.
"How many times are you going to interrupt my history lesson? Final warning, sit down," She said, warning him.
Siddharth smiled and sat back down, loosening his tie.
"That was a close call!" He whispered to his best friend, Manjit or Manny.
"Yep, now shut up before Ma'am once again catches you!" Manny whispered back.
"Nah! That phsyco head will continue with her boring lesson without even turning around," Siddharth smirked. This caused Manny to laugh, gaining attention from all sides.
"Er... Sid... made me laugh," He explained when the teacher looked at him.
"Siddharth! Get out of my class now!" She yelled. Siddharth casually got up, his hands tucked in his pockets.
Before he went, he winked at the teacher, causing the entire class to laugh.
"That boy!" The teacher groaned.

Siddharth arrived outside and pulled out a gum, popping it into his mouth, and chewing it.
"Got kicked out again?" The janitor asked. Siddharth nodded.

S: Yep! These days teachers students ke jokes ko kitna serious lalete hai!

The janitor laughed, shaking his head and walking away.

*~*~*~*~*~*

M (Manny): Kya bakwaas class thi yaar!

S: Is liye toh maine nickle Liya

M: Kash main tere jegha hota!

Siddharth smiled as he rode his bike, when his eyes caught onto a certain mansion.
He stopped and noticed that a huge truck was parked outside, delivering furniture.

S: Yaha koi move horaha hai Kya?

M: Don't know yaar! Aaj hi aaye dikrehe hai

Siddharth smiled, he leaned his bike against a wall and headed towards an open window.

M: Sid! Yeh tu Kya kar raha hai yaar?!

Siddharth ignored his friend's yells and sneaked inside. He saw that the room was abit girly, but royal. The furniture was still packed.

S: Hmm, let's go check it out

He walked towards the door, when it clicked. He quickly hid behind the door.
A beautiful girl came inside, looking around. She seemed to be around Siddharth's age.
As soon as she closed the door, Siddharth pinned her against the wall, his hand placed on her mouth, preventing her from screaming. He stared deep into her eyes, and she returned it. Sudden flashes of a long haired girl jumping off a cliff interrupted him, and he clutched his head, groaning from pain.
"Aaghhh," He moaned.
The girl seemed shocked, and turned around to run, but Siddharth spun her around, again placing his hand on his mouth.

S: Shut up! Dikhta nahi ki main kitna pain mein hoon

The girl pushed him back, biting onto his hand.

S: Ow!

He pulled his hand away.

"Ma! Baba!" The girl began calling. She turned around to see that the boy had left.
The parents came rushing into the room.

P2 (parents): Kya hua Afreen?

A (Afreen): Kuch... nahi

She was still dazed by the appearance of the boy.

P2: Accha, phir aake unpack bhi karna hai furniture ko

A: Haan Baba, ayi

She looked one more time around.

A: Idiot

And then she left the room.

Siddharth sighed as he appeared from behind the cupboard.

S: God that girl can bite!

He jumped out of the window, frowning at Manny.

M: Maine bola tha na

S: Accha thikhe, zyada show off karne ki zaroorat nahi hain

He got onto his bike and rode away...

To Be Continued..

(A/N: So how was the twist? Next chapter will be longer and hopefully be updated by Saturday! Till then take care!)

PS: I kept Ashok's name as Siddharth since that's the character that Siddharth plays. And for Ahankara, I really like the name Afreen, because one of my favourite songs is Afreen Afreen! Hope you like the names!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Interesting chapter Swarya😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Lovely encounter...
And superb chapter... ashoka hai ahankara hai so yaha pe sushim bhi hoga...hmmm...plzz upupdate soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... I didnt expect such a twist... though soo wayward frm history... i like reading these type of stories. They really interest me u know... and i just loved the character Siddharth.. absolutely... and also I like d name Afreen.

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