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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like I promised!

Chapter 10:

Ashok closed his eyes, climbing up the tree quickly, yet carefully.
"Wait!" He heard a voice shout from below.
He looked down, and saw a boy, his age, holding a piece of metal. His jewels.
Ashok looked around him, and saw a few hounds, perhaps that would explain the growls.
He slowly climbed down, jumping onto the ground.
"Hi," The boy greeted.
"Hi," Ashok smiled.
"Wait a minute; you're a prince!" The boy cried.
Ashok let out a small laugh.
"Ashok," Ashok took out his hand.
"Lucifer," The boy shook it.
"Lucifer, do you know how to get to Patliputra?" Ashok asked.
Lucifer nodded fiercely.
"But... it's a very dangerous trip, and a long one at that!".
"Don't worry, just tell where to go please," Ashok said.
"Err... okay... If you go straight from here, then you would come across a small waterfall. It's incredibly beautiful, making it easy to recognise. Then you need to cross it. But that's way too difficult, it is thought that some demon inhabits the place. Once you've crossed that, then you'll come across a strange looking tree, you need to go right after that, then straight." Lucifer explained.
Ashok nodded.
"Thanks Lucifer!" He said, before rushing off straight.
Lucifer grinned, his eyes began turning a deep shade of red.
"Another meal to celebrate," He whispered...

*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Ahankara stepped inside the forest. Tricking the soldiers into letting her go was clearly not easy. Maybe she could catch upto Ashok just in time.
But that's highly unlikely.
She covered her face, so she couldn't be identified.

After lots of walking, Ahankara realised that she had gone in further than she wanted to.
She looked around, thinking of a way to get back, but all she saw was trees everywhere. She listened carefully, when she heard a bubbly sound. She followed the sound, leading her into a horrible - stench swamp.
"Yuck," She whispered. When she saw Ashok's face at the top of the swamp.
She rubbed her eyes, and it was still there. A huge grin exploded on her face, and she began calling his name.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Ashok had followed the directions of Lucifer, but it had led him to a disgusting swamp.
"Ashok!".
He heard a familiar voice call out his name, and he saw Ahankara standing at the bottom.
He couldn't help but tears of joy slid down his cheek. He saw rocks piled on each other; making it a ladder to climb down.
He reached the ground and Ahankara ran upto him, giving him a loving embrace.
"Ashok," Ahankara whispered.
Ashok held onto her tightly, removing a strand of hair from her face.
"Ahankara, what are you doing here?" Ashok asked.
Ahankara looked towards the ground, if she told him the truth, then he would yell at her for not being careful.
She sighed, and decided to tell him the truth.
"I felt some kind of feeling, and thought you were in trouble, so I sneaked out, without informing anyone,".
"What! Ahankara, what if you got hurt, there are beasts in this forest, what if-".
Ahankara leaned in, and kissed him. Ashok, who was a little shocked, responded.
"Better?" Ahankara asked, letting go.
Ashok just laughed.
"Ahankara, you really do know how to get rid of my anger!".
Ahankara joined, little did he know that someone had followed them. Watching their every move, waiting for the moment to strike...

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I don't know about the show...
But according to history Ahankara also known as Tishyaraksha was the youngest and fourth wife of Samrat Ashoka
And I am loving your ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Read & loved all the parts . So, the very young couple are now in midst of the jungle, huh ? Well, as long as they're together 😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Beautifulll... is this lucifer another genus of sushim???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

I don't know about the show...
But according to history Ahankara also known as Tishyaraksha was the youngest and fourth wife of Samrat Ashoka
And I am loving your ff



Wiki was edited after this ashok ahankara track started in the show... there was no mentiin of siamak and ahankarabanywhere in wiki before show started
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Chapter 11:

Ashok stared at the beauty of Ahankara as she laughed, he slowly pulled her in, wrapping his arms around her.
She stared at him, shocked a little at his outburst of affection.
"Ashok... what's wrong?" She whispered.
"Ahankara... If you fell in love with someone else, would you leave me?" He asked her.
Ahankara gasped at his question.
"Ashok, I love you more than my life, I would never leave you. Never. But if you left me..." She trailed off.
"I love you just as much Ahankara, I would never leave you. Even if my life depended on it," He whispered.
"Ashok, what's gotten in you?!" She yelled at him.
"I feel... that something horrible is going to happen. Something that would tear us apart." He winced at the last part, gripping harder onto Ahankara.
"Don't worry Ashok, nothing's gonna happen," Ahankara reassured.
Ashok smiled.
"Well, moving on from that, how do we get to Patliputra? Eh?" Ashok asked, raising his eyebrows.
Ahankara giggled at his gesture.
"You decide, Rajkumar Ashok," Ahankara joked.
"Alright then," He looked around, thinking of which place to go, meanwhile Ahankara just stared at him lovingly.
"You know, you look really cute when your confused," She giggled.
"I'm not confused! Okay, maybe a little, but I can find the way out!" Ashok grumbled.
Then he finally decided to go straight.
"Fine! But it better be the right way!" Ahankara said.
"Let's all pray for that," Ashok whispered.
And so the couple went straight...

*~*~*~*~*

(3 hours earlier)

Siamak heard a faint bang, but decided to ignore it, instead, he turned his attention to his brothers.
"Bratha Shushim, when will we reach the dock?" He asked.
"Use your head sometimes Siamak," Shushim retorted.
Siamak sighed and turned his attention to Ashok, that's when he realised he wasn't there.
"Bratha Shushim! Ashok's gone!" Siamak yelled.
Shushim, who was tired and bored, suddenly jumped up.
"What?!" Shushim shouted.
"Yes! His gone!" Siamak yelled back.
"Good," Shushim laughed.
"Bratha Shushim, our brother is missing and all you do is laugh!?" Siamak asked.
"Soldiers, turn back, we need to find Rajkumar Ashok!" Siamak pulled onto his horse.
"Oh, fine!" Shushim groaned.
The soldiers turned their horses, and immediately began searching for their lost prince...

"Sorry Rajkumar Siamak, but we couldn't find Rajkumar Ashok,".
"Oh great!" Shushim moaned.
"Fine, let's get back home and tell father about this!" Siamak said.
"Or, we can continue the journey without Ashok!" Shushim added quietly.
"Come on soldiers!" And so Siamak led the way along with Shushim...

*~*~*~*~*~*

"Ashok's missing?" Bindusar asked, his eye brows knitted.
"Yes, Father, we looked everywhere, but couldn't find him," Siamak said.
"When did you notice he was gone?" Bindusar asked.
"About an hour a go," Siamak replied.
"Hmm, Soldiers, go and search every bit of that forest," Bindusar ordered.
The soldiers nodded, and stomped away, obeying their King's order.
"Meanwhile, I want you two to stay here till Ashok is found," Bindusar said.
"Father, do you think Ashok will be alright at night in the forest?" Siamak asked.
"I think he'll be fine," Bindusar said reassuringly.
He looked Chanakya, who shook his head in response.
"As long as he doesn't meet Lucifer," He whispered...

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Nice... u added a grimm s fairy tale touch to it.. which makes it nice to read.. i can picturise those beautiful backgrounds
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Nice chapters Swarya 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: musicndance2

Nice... u added a grimm s fairy tale touch to it.. which makes it nice to read.. i can picturise those beautiful backgrounds

Thanks for the feedback! Hopefully will upload the next chapter by tonight!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Nice chapters Swarya 😊

Thanks a lot! It's really nice to see appreciation for your work.😆
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago

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