AshKara FF - Timeless Chapter 19 uploaded!

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Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum, but when I started watching CAS I was totally wowed by the Shushim and Ahamkara jodi. But after seeing his true mission, I started feeling really bad for Ahamkara. Then Ashok showed up and I thought exactly how would it be like if Ahamkara and Ashok fell for each other. I know that's not possible, but anything us possible in your imagination.
So I thought of writing a ff based on the two, and really imagining their pairing. Who knows, it might be interesting??


Chapter 1&2: Pg 1
Chapter 3,4&5: Pg 2
Chapter 6,7&8: Pg 3
Chapter 9&10: Pg 4
Chapter 11: Pg 5
Chapter 12: Pg 6
Chapter 13: Pg 7
Chapter 14&15: Pg 8
Chapter 16: Pg 9
Chapter 17&18: Pg 11
Chapter 19: Pg 12
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Okay, so here it goes!
Chapter 1

:Ahankara felt her tears dry up on her cheeks. It has been declared that her father was a criminal, and had been killed just a few minutes ago. She couldn't bare to see her father die and so she ran inside her room. Samrat Bindusar had been kind enough to let her stay in his palace. Shushim had tried speaking to her, but she had calmly denied his presence.She sat there, feeling lonely as ever, his eyes starting to well up.If only someone had really loved her, cared about her. If only..."You seem a little lost, princess Ahankara," A familiar voice interrupted her thought.She looked up and forced a smile on seeing Ashok. She had been so rude to him, misunderstood him so badly."It's nothing Ashok," She replied, hiding her eyes.Ashok smiled sadly.He gently turned her around, so his eyes directly looked into hers."I know how you feel, princess, but you need to fight the pain. Otherwise there will be nothing left of you," The power in his words, the pain in his eyes glowed, and Ahankara let it all out.She jumped on him, wrapping her arms around his body, crying as freely as she could.Ashok stood there frozen at Ahankara's action. He slowly wrapped his arms around her, spreading his warmth into her."Princess I..." The tears melted his heart, and he felt a spark of sadness yet anger."What's happening here?" A voice behind Ashok echoed.Ahankara gently let of Ashok, her cheeks turning a slight bit of red.Ashok turned around to look at Shushim, he had red eyes."I said what's going on!" He shouted. This startled Ahankara a little, causing her to wince."Prince Shushim, please control your voice!" Ashok said."How can I, when a dog like you are flirting with my girlfriend?" Shushim roared."You wouldn't be angry if you didn't treat princess Ahankara so badly!" Ashok said, controlling his anger."So now your going to tell me how to treat a betrayer's daughter?!" Shushim shouted. "What difference is there between you and Rajajiraj?" Ashok asked. Shushim made a confused face."He may have betrayed the Samrat, but you betrayed a lost and injured heart. You stomped on it, you played with it, you murdered it!" Ashok said, trying his best to hide."She deserved it! That old rotten-" Shushim pointed at Ahankara."Not another word prince!" Ashok shouted, raising his hand.This startled Shushim."You selfish little pig, think that you can do whatever you want! Prince, you should learn to respect women, otherwise you are not a man!" Ashok yelled.Shushim stood motionless at Ashok's shout.Anger boiled inside him. He pulled out his dagger and charged. Ashok dodged, he threw it at such a speed it was frightening.Ashok gasped, he couldn't escape this. Just then a humanoid figure jumped in front of him. He looked down at the bloody figure, his eyes wide and teary. "Ahankara..." He whispered...

To Be Continued...
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Her name is Ahankara😉
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Very beautiful... Loved ur FF... pls continue.. and pm me when u update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: palma0211

Her name is Ahankara😉


Oh, thanks, I've made the changes!!
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Originally posted by: musicndance2

Very beautiful... Loved ur FF... pls continue.. and pm me when u update...


Thanks, I will continue asap
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Chapter 2: Ahankara lay still, her body twisted and blood sprouting out. "Ahankara!" Ashok shouted, he collapsed next to her, his heart beating loud. "Please, open your eyes!" He cried, tears escaping from his eyes. Shushim stood there, he had killed her. Accidentally, but he killed her. "Move!" He pushed Ashok, who was already soaked in his tears. Shushim had to wake Ahankara up, otherwise he will get into huge trouble. "Ahankara, wake up!" He shook her violently. Ashok wiped his tears, his face streamed with anger. "You killed her!" He shouted, he pushed Shushim, and began punching. "I'll never forgive you for this!" He screamed. "Soldiers!" Shushim called, desperately. Two armored men charged in, pulling Ashok from Shushim. "Shushim! Don't be a coward, fight me!" Ashok shouted. He pushed the soldiers, and punched them so they were unconscious. He turned around to look at Shushim, but he had gone. Ashok clenched his fist. Then looked towards Ahankara, and his face softened. He lifted her up in his arms, and layed her down. "Ahankara..." He whispered. Tears dripped onto Ahankara's wound, and slowly it started healing. Ashok stared in astonishment. "Ashok," Ahankara softly whispered. "Ahankara!" He cried in joy, her hugged her. "Don't do that ever again!" He said. He felt her return the hug, and he realised what he had down. He slowly let go of her. "I'm sorry Princess," He apologised. "Ashok," Ahankara looked down towards the ground. "Yes?" Ashok asked. "Nothing," Ahankara shook it off. "Let me call the doctor," Ashok got up, when Ahankara grabbed his hand. He looked around. "Ashok, please stay near me," She pleaded. Ashok smiled. "I will always be near you, princess," He said. Ahankara just stared deep into his eyes. The distance between their faces was closing in, when just then Shushim barged. The two immediately parted away. "There he is!" Shushim pointed at Ashok. A few soldiers stomped in, grabbing Ashok and taking him. "Ashok!" Ahankara called, but her voice was low. She tried getting up, but the wound disallowed her. Shushim smirked. He looked at Ahankara. "If you dare say anything, then I will whip Ashok so much, that he'll die of wounds," Shushim threatened. Ahankara just stared. Ashok can't be punished for something Shushim did. She nodded. She knew she didn't love Shushim. No. But she only LIKED him. She was feeling something for Ashok. Something she never felt for Shushim or anyone else, one thing was sure. Ahankara was falling in love. With Ashok.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... Sushim interrupted the precious moment... i can almost imagine the story.. its too good.. pls cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely ff . Read the part 1 & going to read the second part at deep of night . 😉 😃
Btw, I write her name as Ahamkara as well . That is actually the write pronunciation IMO .
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Loved it . Please write more .

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