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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 12

Ahankara stumbled upon a twig, luckily Ashok had caught her.
"Careful Ahankara, you might get hurt," He said.
"No worries Ashok, you'll be there to catch me if I fall," Ahankara smiled.
"True, but what if I die-" Ahankara instantly covered his mouth with her hand.
"Never say that," She said, sternly.
But even the thought hurt her to think Ashok die.
Ashok smiled.
"I would never leave you Ahankara, but you have to promise you'd never leave me," Ashok said.
"I can't promise that Ashok. Everyone dies, one of us will die as well, but you just promised you'd never leave me, but... After I die, promise me you'd live your life happily. Forget about me," Ahankara said.
"What!? No! If you die, I'll die." Ashok turned his back on her.
Ahankara smiled and took his hand, placing it on top of her head.
"Promise me Ashok, after I die, you'll live your life happily, you'll marry a nice girl, and have kids. You'll forget about me,".
Ashok hesitated, he gulped, blinking back his tears.
"Ahankara, please don't make me do this," Ashok whispered.
Ahankara just stared.
"I... I promise all of them except one," He declared.
"Which one?" Ahankara asked.
"I won't be able to forget you, Ahankara, never." He said.
"But Ashok..." She trailed off, looking at the pain in his eyes.
"Fine. Everything else but forgetting me," She agreed.
Ashok smiled.
"Luckily that day will never come!" He cried.
Ahankara smiled.
"Now, Ashok, which way will we go?" Ahankara asked.
"Hmmm, right?".
"Fine with me," Ahankara said.
She held onto Ashok's hand and both started their way, when they stopped.
"Ashok? What's wrong?" Ahankara asked.
"Footsteps," Ashok whispered.
He grabbed Ahankara, and hid behind a tree, he tried to look at who it was, but couldn't see as a branch was in the way.
"Hello children,".
The two jumped at the surprise of the voice.
Both turned around to see an old man, dressed all green.
"Hello sir, um, would you mind telling us where Patliputra is?" Ashok asked.
"Patliputra? Your going the wrong way son. Hmmm, tell you what, it's pretty late, how about you two stay in my cottage for the night, and then leave tomorrow," The old man offered.
Ahankara smiled, and decided to accept the offer, but Ashok stopped her.
"Just a minute,".
He pulled Ahankara further from the man.
"What's wrong Ashok?" She asked.
"We can't just go to someone's cottage. We don't know him yet, not even his name." Ashok said.
"It's only the night, plus, he's an old man, what's the worse he can do?" Ahankara replied.
"Don't underestimate anyone Ahankara. You can never-" Ashok was cut by Ahankara who walked past him.
"Thank you for your invite, Mr...".
"Lucius," He finished.
Ashok stared in surprise.
"Um, Lucius, do you have a son or someone in your family called Lucifer?" Ashok asked.
"Oh yes, a grandson! Although he doesn't live here, he lives right on the other side," Lucius said.
Ashok nodded, even though he had suspicions on this man.

"Unfortunately, I only have one spare room, you two can share, right?" Lucius asked.
"Sure," Ashok replied.
Both went in, when they saw one bed.
Both felt their cheeks burn up, and look at eachother.
"I'll sleep on the floor," Ashok grabbed a cloth.
"No Ashok, you'll sleep on the bed... With me," She blushed again.
Ashok slowly climbed onto the bed, making sure to keep some distance.
Ahankara looked at him, then went closer to him, laying her head onto his chest.
Ashok smiled and stroked her head, putting her into sleep.
He wrapped his arms around her, and soon fell asleep.

Lucius watched the couple sleep.
He smirked, then his eyes began glowing, and his figure began changing...

*~*~*~*~*

"Acharya Chanakya, do you think Ashok will be alright?" Bindusar asked Chanakya, as they talked in Chanakya's room.
"Samrat, his trained enough to handle any wild animal, but..." He trailed off.
"But what Acharya?" Bindusar asked, confused.
"As long as he doesn't meet Lucifer," Chanakya replied.
"Lucifer?".
"It's a long story," Chanakya said.
"But one thing I can tell you is that his not any creature that you can destroy, but something you can't hide from," Chanakya said.
"What is he?".
"The-" He got interrupted as a soldier barged in.
"Samrat! Apologies for the rude entrance, but it's urgent,".
"Continue," Bindusar encouraged.
"Rajkumari Ahankara is missing!" The soldier cried.
"What?!" Bindusar stood up.
"Yes, she's not in her room or anywhere! In fact, Rani Dharma sent us to look for her, but she's not in Patliputra!" The Soldier explained.
"Acharya, where do you think Ahankara went?" Bindusar asked.
"I think I know where. Have you checked the forest?" Chanakya asked.
"No," The Soldier replied.
"Go, check in the forest!" Bindusar ordered.
The soldier nodded and rushed off.
Bindusar turned his attention to Chanakya.
"Acharya, why do you think Ahankara's in the forest?" He asked.
"The nearest destination to Patliputra is through the forest.".
Bindusar nodded.
'Ahankara's in the forest because of Ashok,' Chanakya thought.

To Be Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it..was waiting for your update
please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved it..was waiting for your update

please continue soon

Thank you Zaara, will try to upload one tomorrow!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Chapter Swarya 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanksss, will upload soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like ur ff.. par serial.mein itna acha nahi ho raha... bata nahi kuch ajeeb sa hai.. bt tumhari story meinjo disney touch hai.. i just luv it... waiting to knw what actually lucifer is
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicndance2

I like ur ff.. par serial.mein itna acha nahi ho raha... bata nahi kuch ajeeb sa hai.. bt tumhari story meinjo disney touch hai.. i just luv it... waiting to knw what actually lucifer is

Thanks! I've always loved disney movies, nd imagined Ashok's first love story to be magical. I'm actually kind of enjoying the current track due to Ashok being with Ahankara all the time, so hopefully love will happen! But I can understand that it's confusing. Loved yesterday's AshKara scene yaar! Will try to upload the next chapter ASAP. Hopefully tomoz.
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Holy mother of gawd!!! It's exactly what I was lookin for
Em shippin AshKara from the very beginning <3 .They look so cute together :* en I strongly feel they've got that set-the-screen-on-fire-chemistry hehe.. :D
Loved your work so far,keep the good work coming <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: goodlucksam

Holy mother of gawd!!! It's exactly what I was lookin for


Em shippin AshKara from the very beginning <3 .They look so cute together :* en I strongly feel they've got that set-the-screen-on-fire-chemistry hehe.. :D
Loved your work so far,keep the good work coming <3

Thanks, even I was shipping AshKara, but then because of Sushim, I switched it but now I'm back nd loving their track!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 13:

Ashok closed his eyes, but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't fall asleep. He looked down at the angelic figure of Ahankara sleeping in his arms, a smile grew on his face.
Suddenly, a slight noise snapped him out of his trance.
He gently layed Ahankara down and went over to check.
"Lucius, are you oka-" His eyes grew wide and he stepped back, paranoid at the horrendous creature the stood in front.
'Ahankara!' His mind lit up, and he quickly rushed over.
"Ahankara! Wake up!" He tried waking her up.
Ahankara rubbed her eyes as she woke up, shaking her head and sitting up.
"What's wrong Ashok?" She asked.
"Lucius, Lucifer... Their the same! Their the-".
A deep laugh interrupted Ashok and Ahankara's eyes grew wide.
"Your the..." She couldn't finish the sentence.
"The devil?" The voice roared.
The creature had black, slimy horns, with red skin and boiled eyes.
"Lucifer... the name used in Christianity for the devil!" Ashok whispered.
Ahankara looked ahead. Suddenly, the surroundings converted into huge rocks, and she fell off the bed, causing her to shed her knee skin.
"Ahankara, are you alright?" Ashok asked worriedly.
"I'm fine Ashok, but..." She got up and looked around. She could see her breath, and sudden chills ran up her spine. The atmosphere had a sudden change to a low degree.
"Ahankara, I think we're on top of a mountain," Ashok predicted.
"Possibly, but how?" Ahankara agreed.
"Because I want to," A deep voice boomed. The couple jumped up, grabbing each other's support.
"What do you want from us!?" Ashok yelled.
"Your soul," The same horrendous figure appeared.
"Soul? You mean one?" Ahankara asked.
"Yes, one is enough. That was makes me live longer!" Lucifer screamed.
"How do you do get our souls then?" Ahankara enquired.
"Stop it! Wouldn't you make your final wish? Very well, you will jump off the cliff, where I will suck your soul through the air,".
Ahankara smiled sadly. She looked at Ashok, who looked on determined to win. "Take me, leave Ahankara!" He shouted.
The monster laughed.
"As you wish, young man," He started towards Ashok, who stood in front of Ahankara.
"Ashok! Remember your promise?" Ahankara asked.
Ashok looked confused.
"You will never leave me alone!" She repeated.
Ashok's eyes widened.
"But Ahankara-".
"No Ashok, don't forget your promises, please," She whispered, loud enough for Ashok to hear.
"But Ahankara, how will we get out?" He asked.
Ahankara smiled, and gave him a deep hug.
"Remember Ashok, I'll always love you," She said, before jumping off down the cliff.
"AHANKARA!!" Ashok cried, he ran to the cliff, frantically searching for Ahankara. But all he saw was a broken earring.
Tears sprawled out of his eyes, and he collapsed to the ground, griefing greatly.
He felt the drops of rain touch his skin, and he looked up, his eyes bright red with weeping, towards the sky, that poured out its tears.
Ashok hugged the earring, never letting go.
"I'll always love you too," He whispered.
He got up, and remembered Ahankara's words, 'Don't forget your promises Ashok'. The voice echoed in his ears.
"Don't worry Ahankara, I'll always respect my promise towards you,".
He looked towards the earring, wet with rain and his tears.
He looked around him and noticed that he was back in jungle.
"Rajkumar Ashok!" A voice called him.
Ashok turned around to see a soldier run upto him.
"Samrat us waiting for you," The soldier said.
Ashok looked back in his hand.
"Ahankara, you will return, I will bring you back," He whispered, before following the soldier...

*~*~*~*~*

Chanakya stared out of the window as the heavy rain poured down.
"What are thinking Acharya?" Radha Gupt asked.
"I'm looking at the rain, I have never managed to understand this weather. Sometimes it's full of sweetness and joy, others it stuffed with pain and torture.
But what I see today is beyond any pain. It's love. And love is torture." Chanakya explained.
Radha Gupt smiled.
"Acharya, it's not the time to think about rain, but welcome Ashok back," He replied.
"Of course, let's begin,".

*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Dharma ran upto Ashok, giving him a tight hug, crying tears of joy.
"Oh Ashok, you scared me alot!" She lightly slapped him.
"Welcome Ashok!" Bindusar greeted.
Ashok just nodded, unable to respond.
"I hope you are all fine! Have you seen Ahankara anywhere?".
The words stung like a bee, and Ashok couldn't bare it.
He collapsed once again and began crying.
"L- Lucifer... He got to her!" Ashok stuttered.
Chanakya's eyes grew in horror and shock.
"It's my greatest fear that has at last come true," He whispered.
Radha Gupt stared confused.
Bindusar sighed, his eyes forming tears.
"Hope Gods will give her paradise!" He cried.
Ashok wiped his tears.
"She's not dead! I know she isn't! She will return, she will..." He looked down. No matter how much he'd say it, it would never convince him. Because one fact was true, Ahankara was dead...

To Be Continued...

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