Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 8

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Viren woke up in the middle of the night. Nothing had changed and yet everything was changed. Nivi was in his arms and they had no distances or veils between them any more. He had lost the battle, but he had won the war. There was not much light in the room' But still he was able to see the sleeping beauty.

She was so peaceful while sleeping and he remembered the note he once had written to her. He had left it on his side of their bed with a rose.. He wanted to write it down to her once again.

Then he got this spontaneous idea' He brought his mouth near her ear and said that bahut pyari lagti ho tum, bahut masoom, tumhe sote hoye dekh k lagta hai k jaisi jagti aankheen sapna dekh rahi hoon. And then he looked on her and said that on that day I had a rose to give, but today I do not have it. Instead of that, I hereby give you my word on that no matter what happens in life, this soul, which belonged once to Viren Sood, is yours. You may do whatever u like to do with it'

Then he kept looking at her and Nivedita started to turn a little while sleeping. He was loving her more and more. The time was flying away and there was moments he wanted to live with her. He kept looking at her, caressing her hair and in between her face and not to mention her lips.

Nivedita was on the other enjoying all this. She was already awake when Viren woke up. She just pretented to be at sleep and it was paying off. She was absorbing every breath of Viren in her soul. She was getting high with each touch of his and with his increasing caress, it seemed like it was getting hard to pretend to be the sleeping beauty.

She just loved Viren... He knew all the roads to her heart, her soul, her existence. She was feeling honoured to be able to experience this sort of love. She was aware of the fact that Viren loved her, but his love was making her to love herself. She was loving every part of herself because Viren loved every part of her being. She was not to be found anywhere. All she knew was... There was no one else beside Viren in the universe...

She had this urge to see him, especially his eyes. There was a world in those eyes which only she was allowed to explore and time was running out'

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Nivedita opened her eyes and she looked directly into the desired world of NivRen. A world filled with honesty, mystry, innocence, love, passion and list could go on. She was almost frozen and had no plans of going back to the cruel world which was going to separate them forever.

At this moment, he had mischievousness in his eyes and she was too curious to find out what was he planning to do now. She had just pretended to sleep and fooled him. She was thinking within herself that this man can take the best out of me.

Viren who had his fingers on her lips came closer and placed a small kiss on her lips. He told her that he knew that she was awake and had tried to fool him. Every time she tried to convince him that he was wrong in his observations, he kissed her and did not allow her to utter one single word. She was a little mad at herself for being so transparent but on the other hand she was enjoying this open hide and seek with him.

Viren looked at her and told her that he was right when he said to her that he knew her better than she knew herself. He promised her that from now and onwards' no matter what happens, every time she will try to convince him about something which wasn't true, then she will get her punishment like this. He asked her whether she accepted it or not and Nivedita nodded.

Viren smiled looking at her. She was so irresistible at times like she was when they initially arrived at the Lover Shack. They way she was praying' Her simplicity was breathtaking at that moment & and at this moment and he was greedy.

Praying' It ringed a bell in his head. He had to do it and how could he forget it. He looked at Nivedita and thought that now was the time to do something so these moments could last forever. He wanted to wake up every morning having her in his arms, listening to her heartbeats, feel her breath over his chest.

It was like a new chance given to him and he had to execute it at once. But how will he in the middle of night go out of the house leaving Nivedita behind him in worry. He knew that she was not going to let him go and he had to go.

Soo romantic and awesome sweets can read it again and again luv u for writing these scene plz lz write more sply after the news this made my weekend.

WOW Abidah the scenes are absolutely awesome, love it love it!!! Its SO romantic I can't get enough of it, its BRILLIANT please continue soon love it x

wat shud i say...too Gud fr words...absolutely brilliant...Luvd i t to d core...everytim i read it i just get lost in it
And d title perfect.......