Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene 13:

He caressed her face, looked lovingly into her eyes and asked her about why she was feeling that he was restless. He couldn't be restless when he is with her and it was certain. Nivedita did not feel the answer was convincing and asked him with a firm tone that he couldn't hide his restlessness from her and she demanded an answer.

Viren just loved the way she was talking, actually scolding him. So he smiled at her and said that he saw her red saree from KarwachoW*H in the closet. She looked like a bride that day and the color suited her so well. He wanted to see her in it tonight.

Nivedita couldn't believe what she was hearing. He wanted to see in the red saree dressed like a bride in the middle of the night. This night was so special, where every single moment was so precious that couldn't be wasted' She wanted to hit him with something.

She was annoyed and she was showing it to Viren. He on the other hand was enjoying her changing mood and he knew that this task was not easy at all. Nivedita was getting up and did not want to talk to Viren. His smile was irritating and she did not want to scold him for being so stupid.

Viren grabbed her arm and forced her back to the bed. She was struggling to get her arm free when Viren ran his fingers over her chest, then her neck while his lips followed his fingers. Nivedita was finding it hard to resist his passionate style of seeking forgivness.

He whispered in her hears with 'sorry' and 'I love u,' and when she looked in his eyes, she saw a storm of tears in them. He was so intense in his behavior when it comes to her that she felt that she had to fulfill his wish. She wanted first of all to apologize for being annoyed at him.

Viren allowed only to say 'Viren, I am'' before he interrupted her by a kiss on her lips and then finished her sentence by saying '' in love with u.' She smiled at him knowing that he knew what she wanted to say and he smiled back to her.

She placed her finger on his lips and said firmly that don't you dare to interrupt me this time. Give me half an hour and your bride will be ready. Viren was delighted and kissed her finger indicating his thankfulness. Nivedita was a little worried about what Viren will do while she gets ready. She was about to ask him when Viren said to her that I'll see u very soon.

Unable to understand what he was trying to tell she looked at him and he pointed at the window and indicating that he will be going out from it and will be back. Nivedita got all worried, but Viren assured her that nothing will happen and that he was happy to get some fresh air before he was allowed to see his wish come true.

Nivedita was not liking this and then Viren told her hurry up because they did not had that much time till dawn. He was all dressed up in a hurry and kissed her forhead and headed towards the window. He signaled to Nivedita that she should hurry up and gave her a flying kiss before he headed towards his number two destination.

Edited by savera2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
luv ya sweetie🤗...these updates are sooo romantic...heat beat sky rocketing again😳....cant wait for ur next update really wanna know wutz going on inside Viren's head....plzzz update soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohhh!!!! Abidha, just now I finished reading all your scenes..I'm just feeling breathless, do not have words to express how beautiful all the scenes were..soooo romantic, passionate, and especially the confession or so to say asking forgiveness from Nivedita..that scene was fabulous. In CCBM we would like to see the scenes which you have been writing. Abidha you are a great writer. Your scenes are so intense though full of expression which I can feel and visualize as well. Thank you very much, Abidha for gifting us such wonderful NivRen moments which are making me to fall for NivRen all over again.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scene 14:

After Viren had left the room Nivedita started missing him. She was wondering, if she cannot bear to be separated from him for a moment, how she is going to live her entire life without him'. She wanted to cry her heart out. She had been blessed with so much happens today. She had enjoyed every single moment of it and she could feel Virens presence inside her already.

She went over to the closet and took the red saree out. She had promised Viren to be dressed as his wife, but she knew in few hours it will be finished. What they had together was so sacred and beautiful that she was unable to understand why it couldn't be fixed.

She thought about her mannat in the Mandir that day. She had prayed for them to be together in eternity. She was thinking about the fast, which broke and yet accepted. Why was she given everything spiritually and not worldly? She had no answers to the questions'

She sat down on the edge of the bed looking at it. The moments that passed so quickly, but their imprints were to be found in the heart. She was always afraid of love and today even on the edge of losing it forever in the worldly sense, she had no fear.

When love reach its peak, where the beloved and the lover unites in a sacred bond of love, then the love lives on in eternity. This was the case with Nivedita and her love. She had experienced the ultimate love in every sense and after experiencing it, you cannot lose it. It grabs you, embraces you and guides you towards yet unknown path. Path that is invisible for the world, but only visible for the lovers.

Nivedita ran her finger over the right side of the bed. Virens fragrance could be smelled and it was if she could sense him lying there, smiling towards her with lovingly eyes. She looked around in the room and it seemed like even the air carried love from end of the room to the other. It was like the whole universe was trying to let this love be inside this room and making sure that no one disturbed the sacredness of love.

Time was flying away and Nivedita, who was lost in love, was finding it hard to get ready. But she had to get ready for her loves sake. He was waiting eagerly to see her as a bride. She went towards her table to lie her jewelry and bangles and started to wear the saree. She remembered the time when she wore it the first time. She was wearing it because of the custom and because she had respect in her heart for Viren.

Tonight the situation was something else. She found the red color being more beautiful and to some extend seducing. She felt like the queen of love knowing every single bit of the art of seduction. She was smiling by herself and thinking of what might get through Virens mind when he will see her as desired. She was blushing when she get the thought of what Viren might do in the first place.

All her bangles and jewelry were in place and she made sure that the bride was a little shined up. She knew that Viren liked her as she was and would have loved to see her as simple as she was. But, not tonight. Tonight she was going to look as beautiful, as seducing, as intoxicating as she could. It was Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood who was getting ready for one and only for Mr. Mysterious.

She was ready but something was lacking besides Viren. She hasn't got any veil on her and she did not wanted to make her sarees pallu as the veil. So she went to the closet and found her weeding veil, which Viren so nicely had put on her on the weeding day. As she was placing it on her head, she felt, that it was not her, but Viren who was putting it on her. She closed her eyes to feel him knowing that he was not in the room.

When she opened her eyes, she could see from the mirror that Viren was leaning at the wall close to the window and his eyes adored her. She felt a sudden shyness.

Edited by savera2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Yeahhhh more scenes😊 Thanks for the updates, their amazing!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AMAZINGGGG..
WONDERFUL.OUTSTANDING,SIMPLY MINdBLOWING
i LOVE IT😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abidaaaah.. Bacche ki jaan legi kya..?! I'm choking with emotions.. Oh my.. I'm having goosebumps reading d latest scenes.. It was soooo passionate.. Haiiiii..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww dat was beautiful cont soon n plzz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abidah u r da most brilliantest romatic passionate writer ever.👏..thank u sooo much for giving us these scenez n cant wait to read ur nxt update...big hug🤗...luv ya sweetie
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omggggg awesome awesome. Thank you sooooo much. Loved it, so much of passion, my heart is beating so fast just by reading it. Plz continue soon. Mwah thanks again.

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