FF 'CHANGE' update Part 26 page 38 - Page 30

Originally posted by: Hanaa91

Hi! I'm new here and read your FF. It's amazing. Cant wait for your next update

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naleyyyyyyyy! Welcome back!! Missed your FF n u most importantly! 😳🤗

SOrry for sucha late comment...i was JUST clearing my inbox..Just TOO lazy to read my PMs 😆

You know girl, i really love the way u write..coz it seems so real...Anybody can totally relate this to real life! That jail scene..and Bhaskar talking abt the past, it was very sad! :( Can't believe Bhaskar, who is the happy-go-lucky kinda guy, actually has been living in guilt all his life..he's been regretting..and that too for something which he didn't do...!!

The advise Armaan gave: So meaningful! Love reading those lines Naley! 👏

The worst part was when Mr khana himself blames his son..? That's just so harsh! Their father is not understanding at all!

Feel bad for Bharti..but i love Bhaskar here! In this part he proved to be the brother he thought he always failed to be! Am sure he'll reunite Armaan n Bharti in some way or the other...even it means going against their father!

Wonderful part girl! But just one teeny weeny suggestion 😳

Could u have more spacing between each the dialogues....?? Meaning to say when Armaan is speaking..and the next part when Bhaskar is speaking..could there be a wider gap..? I find it difficult to read coz they r kinda close together...which results in me reading the same line over n over again 😆😆😆....

Hope u didn't mind that i asked for this 😳😆....

CHANGE

Part 25

Mr.Khaan: you told me the same thing after Bhavn's death ..but you couldn't take care of Bharti could you Bhaskar..if you took care of your sisters properly in the first place this wouldn't have happened to them So please do what I ask you to do..from right now ...in anger

Bhaskar: his fathers words broke his heart !! he simply turn to wipe his tears and turn to face his dad again ..it was just few hours a go Armaan a man he hardly knew told him that it wasn't his fault and it felt so good after years to hear him say those words but now standing in fort of his father who knew everything about him just simply telling him it was his fault made him think that his decision was wrong ...breaking the silence ..the only way I'll help you dad is if you drop all the charges against Armaan .. ??? if you don't I will not be part to this .....!!! which someway or the other will bring pain into Bharti's life ...as he stood firmly in fort of his father for his Answer .....

Mr.Khaan: what !!!..you gone mad Bhaskar ..!!! in anger

Bhaskar: NO..!! this is called being human dad ..!!!

Mr.Khanna: human my foot as he glared darkly at Bhaskar for several seconds...and kept pacing around the room in anger...what in gods name is wrong with you Bhaskar ...I don't want him near Bharti do you think I'll withdrew my charges against him .???

Bhaskar: like I said if you want me to be a part of this meaningless decision where someway or the other someone gets hurt ... you will have to let Armaan go ...

Mr.Khanna: snapped in anger.. Okay fine I'll drop the chargers against him ..as he kept on staring with anger towards his son ...

Bhaskar: heart was so relief to hear those words coming out of his furious father's mouth...wow dad that's strange i never knew you still do have little bit of humanity left inside of you....

Mr.khanna: grin laugh... you are going against your own father and talking about my humanity ...for pity's sake grow up Bhaskar and get your priorities right ..I don't care what happens to Armaan, he is nothing to me..my only concern is my daughter ...!!

Bhaskar: gees dad your only concern is your pride not Bharti, you agreed to me is to get to Bharti because you know she will never listen to you !!

Mr.Khanna: that's enough Bhaskar.!! I heard enough from you ..you never lived up to my acceptation and you never will!! so please don't make a mess of your sister's life just like you had done to yours !! now go get ready !! ordered harshly in anger..

Bhaskar: wow shaking his head I used to think Life is painful, nasty and short... in my case it has only been painful and nasty, I was living with it for all this years but a good friend told me that regret always comes too late in life, what matters is you can move on, you can grow to become a better person....', dad I'm sorry I never was that son who you wanted me to be but I'm glad I wasn't ... I would rather hate myself than live to your selfish heartless acceptations, I'm who I' am and now I know what I'm doing is right!! I'll never let you mess that up not this time as silence fell between them glaring at each other finally Bhaskar left the room..while walking away from his father he felt so good inside for standing up for himself for the first time.... It was almost 2 in the morning and Bhakar couldn't sleep as he made his way to Bharti's room..to find her a sleep on the floor near the door as he took her in his arms and slowly keeping her on the bed ...Bharti in her sleep murmurs for Armaan......

stroking her head gently Sshh..Shh..it okay Bharti ....Armaan is okay, Armaan is going to be okay....looking at his sister sleeping stains of tears still on her face ...I know we don't talk about Bhavna anymore after what happened and I wanted to say this to you for long time but i dint know how .. I always see Bhavna in you ...I see all her values in you and I just can't imagine after all you have been through how you have grown to become this strong beautiful woman is just amazing....and I want you to know I'm so proud of my little sister of who she have become!.. touching her face gently ,....Bharti i know you loved Bhavna a lot..and my apologizes are pointless right now but sweet heart I'm so sorry for not being there to protect you both , I regret that every single day of my life ..but I guess sometimes good things fall apart so better things can come together...I think we grew stronger together from all of this and I'll never let you feel that pain ever again I'll promise you ..as he took her hand in his Bhaskar notice the ring on her finger ..O my god as he kept on looking at the ring it was the missing piece of the puzzle to all this drama ...and now everything was so clear to him

It was Almost 4 in the morning .. Amaan was simply shattered to find himself losing Bharti ...and the pain of having broken heart was not so much as to kill him,yet in was not so little to let him live ..while all the precious moments he shared with Bharti kept on coming into his mind..every mint that past by became more painful it couldn't be controlled ... the sudden noise of the cell gates opening....made Armaan stood up from his broken down composure... and Armaan was shocked ..to find out that Mr.Khaana have withdrawn all the chargers against him and he was free.. as he sign out his name to walk out of the police station Armaan knew his freedom was always based on losing Bharti forever ..and that freedom was not freedom at all infect he dint feel anything... as he made his way out of the police station to find Bhaskar a cross the far road ahead ....

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sorry for the short update😃

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Naley.. beautiful... update..and my o my wat an intense epi.. just luvd Bhaskar standing up to his dad and answering him back..😛 Tho m happy Armu is free.. but its so heartbreaking to see that his freedom has come at a cost of losing Bharti..!!

Just hope things work out and ArBi come together..❤️

Great work dear..👏

Originally posted by: M-Patz

Awesome part naley
Cant wait for the next one
Cont sooooooooooooooooooooooon


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Mahnaz