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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanaa91

Nice!!! Can't wait for your next update.



thank u thank u soooooo much 🤗i'm glad u liked it
i will update soooooooon 😉
take care
luv
Naley

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naleyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!(love calling u like that😆) 🤗

Thank u so much for considering the suggestion!! It's WIDE n am able to read it better now!😆.........🤗🤗....
My my girl, u write so well!! Those quotes inside about life, it feels good when reading them!! Am so happy that Bhaskar is finally standing on his own two feet and doing things the way he thinks should be done...instead of always getting distracted by his father's orders...You go boy! *snaps my fingers* 😆
I love that line he told his father "U don't care about Bharti, you're doing this coz u care for your pride"...... His father is really a selfish, only doing what he feels is right in the name of Bharti's "happiness".....Instead it's only causing more pain to her...
Wonder what plans Bhaskar has with him now..Am thinking he's gonna make Armaan say that Bharti n him got engaged..?..🤔😉😆
Looking forward to the next part! Do carry on!
Loving your FF n the quotes u write inside!! 👏



Viniiiiii.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 you r welcome girl 🤗if u want it even wider let me know okay 😆

girl i'm sooooooooooooooooooo happy u love my writing ...for some weird reason i never seemed to writ so well in school 😆...guess u guys inspire me 🤗....o wooooooooow you like the quotes ....thank u vini.....yeah i'm happy u like the whole new bhaskar .. absolutely right ..
you go boy .Bhaskar

Pride ....money could never buy or get true happiness & love ...but the sad part is only few people believes in it ....😃.....i guess i wanted to show that in my FF ..

well girl to tell u the truth i'm still wondering what decision to write for ....Bhaskar 😆
...anyways i'll make it good one ...and hope u will like it ....😃



thank u soooooooooooooooooooo much vini girl i just simply love reading ur comments 🤗
and is always to very sweet just like you

take care girl
luv u always
Naley



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Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: haaki_ragz

hello sis!!!

How are ya?
First of all I want to apologise sincerely for not reading few parts of urs and for not being in contact with u.....
The reason was I was so, very busy....
I am sorry.....
But frankly saying...I still miss u and reading ur FF....
Today, I completed reading all the parts.....
And I loved it to bits, the way u write and the way u bring twists in the story is awesome....
I feel like I am reading a novel of some famour romantic love story writer.......
Awesome sis!
Awesome!!!!
And I swear, this time I will, at any cost read ur updates on time as soon as I receive ur PM.......
and I dunno when I will get time to update my FFs.....I have story in my mind but find no time to update it....
love u
ur li'l sis
Harika



hey love ..........finally my harkki 's comments ..i was miss them all sooooooo much ..🤗
girl Me A ok...life is simply boring with out hot guy next to u 😆😳

o sweet heart no need of apologizes .....being busy comes behind me so i understand u 😆
o woooooooooooooow i'm simply flattered....to the beautiful things u said about my FF 🤗
goodness novel of some famous romantic love story...wooooooooooooow this made me get wings thank u sooooooooooooo much ....🤗 love having u back Always

girl i loved the part u have updated ...and don't worry take your own sweet time of updating ..

take care
luv ya
Naley




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Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHANGE

Part 26

It was Almost 4 in the morning .. Amaan was simply shattered to find himself losing Bharti ...and the pain of having broken heart was not so much as to kill him,yet in was not so little to let him live ..while all the precious moments he shared with Bharti kept on coming into his mind..every mint that past by became more painful it couldn't be controlled ... the sudden noise of the cell gates opening....made Armaan stood up from his broken down composure... and Armaan was shocked ..to find out that Mr.Khaana have withdrawn all the chargers against him and he was free.. as he sign out his name to walk out of the police station Armaan knew his freedom was always based on losing Bharti forever ..and that freedom was not freedom at all infect he dint feel anything... as he made his way out of the police station to find Bhaskar a cross the far road ahead .... it was cold misty morning as Armaan made his way a cross the road towards Bhaskar , Armaan knew Bhaskar said that he will get him out but to see him right now was surprising ...

Armaan: what are you doing here Bhaskar?


Bhaskar: shaking his head with a slight smile..you know what ..I kept on asking that same question from myself all this way here ..!!


Armaan: what do you mean ??


Bhaskar: Armaan why dint you tell me that you propose to my sister?


Armaan: shook his head with a wry smile .. if losing her will keep her happy... .what is the point of my proposal Bhaskar..!!


Bhaskar: you are right ..., you shouldn't have loved my sister so much..when you knew ,you could never have her...!!!


Armaan: sighed...god I never knew love could hurt so much ..and I deserve all of it for betraying our love !!I was never worthy of being loved by her ..and I never will be..taking in deep breath ..


Bhaskar: I guess you are right !!but I never told you why I'm here did I ..??


Armaan: not having a clue in the world as he kept on looking at Bhaskar ...


Bhaskar: reach into his jacket as he took out an envelope.. This for you !!


Armaan: what is it ..?


Bhaskar: the tickets to leave Mumbai..safely!!


Armaan: No...I can't take this .


Bhaskar: Armaan Please.. take it !! my sister will never forgive me if I dint see you off safely so please take it..


Armaan: taking the ticket from Bhaskar .. Please take good care of her Bhaskar..as he turned from Bhaskar and started walking away ... Armaan's heart was troubled..so troubled that he found it hard to keep silent leaving his love that brought him so much of joy & so much of pain right now.. Made every step that he took towards leaving so difficult...


Bhaskar: ...Armaan wait as he suddenly shouted out loud ...Armaan wait..!!!aren't you for getting something ..


Armaan: stops himself simply puzzled.. as he turns towards Bhaskar again...


Bhaskar: shouting out loud..I think I have something that only belongs to you ..!! look behind you dude.. as he points his finger towards the road ahead of Armaan


Armaan: turns ahead as emotion welling up within him to see Bharti standing few blocks way from him, it was simply magical, braking into a dazzling smile..his troubled heart was now racing with joy ...as he hurried towards her ...feeling her so close to him again ,delight raced through Armaan. The relief was over flaming as tears of happiness danced in both their eyes!!! Merely staring at her for while as he held her face gently in his hands .. I thought I lost you forever Bharti..!!


Bharti: looking to his eyes I told you I'm not going to go anywhere.!!I belong here placing her palm on his racing heart, I belong right here ...


Armaan: held her tightly ,as though afraid she'd disappear if he let her go, to the length of his body. She raised her arms up around his neck, clinging to him with all her might, while he stroked her hair back her ear gently ..gazing down at her his dark brown eyes boring into hers ..o god I love you ..., their eyes locked together...slowly lowered his head and she closed her eyes, waiting...when his lips touched hers softly, his lips brushing lightly over her a deep sense of joy filled their whole being as they shared beautiful kiss .. gently breaking a way from her lips ..looking into her eyes..now that's perfect !!


Bharti: what?...as she smiled shyly


Armaan: your smile !!


Bharti: well Mr.Sinha ..you will have to work even harder to make it more perfect next time..


Armaan: O really..!! okay then as he lowered his head again to kiss her..


Bharti: Quickly covering his mouth with her hand ...Armaan No...shaking her head ..as she signals him from her eyes to turn around ..


Armaan: Bharti's hand still covering his mouth as he starts talking ..as his worlds wasn't coming out clearly ..trying to figure out Bharti...she quickly takes her hand off his mouth ..his worlds coming out loudly as possible .. What..? come on jaan I know you want to kiss me ..


Bhaskar: clearing his throat..I'm sure she wants to kiss you man...,but is best if you kiss her somewhere else other than Mumbai ..


Armaan: fully embarrass turn to Bhaskar...i.. was.. just.. trying explain him self as much as he can...


Bhaskar: chill Armaan..I'm not going to arrest you for kissing her as he smiles .. but wait she is my sister...I could arrest you for it!!.


Armaan: with a wide smile.... Thank you so much Bhaskar..


Bhaskar: for what ..??


Armaan: for believing in my love for her .. and giving me chance


Bhaskar: her happiness was always base on you...I was to damn scared of losing my little sis again ..I just couldn't rap my head round it ..!! as he looks towards Bharti..


Bharti: smiles as she comes towards her bother giving him a hug ...you are never going to lose me Bhaskar..you know that!!..what ever happened it was never your fault ..I was lost in the pain of losing Bhavna..i could control it ... but it wasn't a metrical that saved me it was simply my brothers unconditional love that made me feel again ..Other things may change in life for me Bhaskar, but we will always start & end with family !! I love you so much for giving Armaan to me...as tears came rolling down her face..


Bhaskar: looking into his sisters eyes...stop it now ..No crying okay..I need that smile for the wedding ceremony ... as he looks into his wristwatch O shoots ..we are already late ..lets go!!


both together bharti: wedding ceremony..?? Armaan: Right now..??


Bhaskar: dude correct me if I'm wrong here.. boy meets girl..boy ends up in jail for proposing to girl.. girls bother saves boy !! unites boy girl , furies father still have no clue about brother's decision ..if he did boy plus girls brother will end up in jail forever..??giving Armaan look full of meaning..


Armaan: Okay let's go... As they quickly rush to the vehicle ..leaving Bharti behind ..Armaan quickly realizing as he comes backwards and turns once again to face her, smiling down on her ..you know what this impatiently insane groom do needs his amazing bride to make his dream that dint seem so real to finally come true ...as he takes Bharti's hands in his... will you ???


Bharti : giving him a long look...


Armaan: jaan you better say something now ..or else your bother will have a stroke!! smiling down on her ..


Bharti: couldn't help herself from smiling as she nodded ..I would love to make your dream come true , Armaan because it's my dream as well..


Armaan smiling down at her once again..thank you for being my dream...as they stood there smiling into each other's eyes ..the sudden voice of Bhaskar telling them to hurry brought them to reality as they made their way quickly towards the vehicle ...

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Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow....
I am so happy sis...
Arbi together again...
I love Bhaskar for this....
awesome update...
do continue soon sis
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww so sweet!!! Arbi finally united... Well going to be. Iso eagered to read your next update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awwww ArBi reunion on the roads..😍😍😍 how dreammmyyyyy!! Absolutely luvd it..😳 Fab fab update dear..❤️ esp how ArBi hug n Armu was abt to kiss Bharti..n Bhaskar comes..

Rocking update Naley.. the perfect Diwali present 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Naley
That was Great!!!!!
Truely



TC
Mahnaz
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Posted: 14 years ago
😲😲😲😲
OMG!! Naley i just LOVE ❤️ ur ff since i have read it i am going mad🤪...seriously its fantastic👍🏼... ever part is beautifully written man👏👏👏👏...its like BB season 2...if it ever comes back i would to see ur story as BB 2 it would wow on screen what say guys aren I right?!!⭐️⭐️
plz plz plzzzz CONTINUE SOON!! i reall want to read more....
big hugs🤗 🤗🤗from me girl well done u rocked with ur ff i luv it so much❤️❤️❤️...specially scenes they touched my soul☺️😳...and i have to say ur very romantic person by god😉..lolzzzzz tc hun 😃❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naley4ever



girl i'm sooooooooooooooooooo happy u love my writing ...for some weird reason i never seemed to writ so well in school 😆...guess u guys inspire me 🤗..

@Bold: Are u FOR REAL..? 😲 Girl u write SUPER well! Trust the readers..we know best 😎😆....Really u do girl, that's why u've got readers still hooked onto your FF! 🤗.......Honestly, i don't really follow many FFs now..some of it i have stopped halfway..(i think 😆) but me still love reading yours, always!...😳
Coming to this part .....Oooh do i see a runaway marriage..?? That is SO much of FUN!! Bhaskar is like DE coolest bro in town! 😎
Oh wait i forgot to address u the normal way..
Naleyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! 🤗.....😆
Okay where was i..? 😆 Right Bhaskar is the coolest bro! Loved how he planned everything..n kept on asking them to get in the jeep! And that part where they both run towards the vehicle leaving Bharti behind....was hilarious 🤣🤣🤣......I guess Armaan was just too excited...😆😆😆...
As for the reunion kiss..☺️☺️...Need i say more girl..It was delicious...☺️ 😆..
Think am missing ArBi alot..Can't wait for the ITAs that's coming soon!..Okay off track, coming back to your FF...😆 Loved it!
Now i just hope they manage to get married in time before that hilter father of Bharti comes hunting them down! 😆😆😆
Interesting twist, me likey it...lots!.🤗
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 14 years ago

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