KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 8

Originally posted by: ram92

hey i read all the parts now. They r really nice. Its good that u r keeping bhaskar and payal tracks too. Good work👍🏼

Part 10

That evening, Bharti was coming back from her office.

She was thinking "phirse khana banao, aur wo saree? Koi mard aise kapre pahente hai kya?"😆

"Hahahahahaha, Bhaskar tum saree me bilkul apni ma ki tarah lagte ho"

Bhaskar saw KK was seating at the back seat of the car, he was dressed as a rock singer (with curly long hair).

Bhaskar: O KK, to yeh kya nautanki hai?

KK: Tumhari halat dekh ke mujhe bohut hasi a rahi hai Bhaskar, mujhse tumhari yeh dard dekha nahi jata, to main tumhare liye kuchh naya soch raha hu.

Bhaskar: aur wo kya hai?

KK: phirse game khelte hai Bhaskar, "Kya Bharti Banegi Bhaskar?"

Bhaskar: KBBB? Wohi char pehlon wala game?

KK: No Bhaskar, this is "KBBB Level II"

Bhaskar (with a sarcastic smile): O, to tumhara game me bhi Level II hota hai? To yeh Level II hai kya?

KK: Main tumhe ekdin ke liye Bhaskar bana dunga, is ekdin me tum jitna achcha kaam karoge utna hi tumhara Bharti se Bhaskar banne ka chance barega. Ab 7 baj rahe hai, kal sham 7 baje tak tum Bhaskar bane rahoge. Your time starts now.

Then before Bhaskar could ask anything KK vanished.

Bhaskar was overjoyed, he looked at the mirror and did his "Iam the Man" gesture (I think you can imagine the tune which was playing behind, yes it was the "dream machine" tune).

Bhaskar (looking at the mirror): I am back (with a big cute smile). Konsi disco me jaoge Bhaskar?

Suddenly he could hear KK's voice within his head "jitna achha kam karoge utni hi jaldi Bhaskar banoge".

Bhaskar (leaving a long breath😭): Hmm, Payal help me, main a raha hu.

In Payal's house, the door bell rang and Payal opened the door.

Before she could understand anything Bhaskar dragged her and started dancing. He was saying "Payal I am Back, Payal I am back….".

Payal was delighted, she started dancing as well (on which tune? You are right "Shala lalla la la la").

After a while when they stopped dancing, Payal asked "Bhaskar, tumne aisa kya kia? Tum sach me Bhaskar ban gaye ho? Kahin KK as pas to nahi?"

Bhaskar: nahi Payal, KK yahan nahi hai, lekin main puri tarah Bhaskar nahi bana hu, KK ne mujhe ekdin ka waqt dia hai, a game "KBBB Level II". Isme main ekdin mein jitna achha kaam karunga utni hi jaldi main puri tarah Bhaskar ban jaunga".

Payal (confused to hear so many words together😕): KBBB Level II ?

Bhaskar: Ha. Aur mere paas kal sham 7 baje tak waqt hai.

Payal (in a gesture, "chalo, abhi chalte hai"): To hamare paas bilkul waqt nahi hai, abhi 8 baj chuke hai.

Bhaskar (sat down on the sofa) : Relax Payal, chal abhi long drive me chalte hai, jo kuchh bhi karna hai, kal subah karenge.

Payal (she was very angry😡): utho Bhaskar, hamare paas waqt nahi hai.

Bhaskar 🤢: Ok, to pehle kya karoo?

Payal: Uncle ji; uncle ji ko Haweli ke papers do.

Bhaskar gave a mournful look,😔 he was thinking "yeh Payal na..........itne dino bad mujhe khulkar hasne ka mauka mil raha hai, aur yeh kharoos bauji se milne ke liye keh rahi hai"

End of Part 10

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Originally posted by: ram92

wow its a nice track. Y dont u write some anu and nanahe scenes? It will be good.

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Thanks a lot.

You want me to make it longer? after posting each part, it seems to me that it is very long.
Good, so it is not boring?

Actually in every part I try to create a single scene and everyday I write the next part with the next scene. I need time to think dear, so it is really difficult for me to think that fast. I am sorry for that.

well I will try to make it longer.

Take care

Kaninika

Dear friends,

I am posting the 11th and 12th part together. Actually they are very much related to each other.

Part 11

Yes, he did it. Bhaskar fulfilled his dream of gifting his father the Haweli.🥳

As we all expect Bhaskar's father was very happy😛 but did't show it (male ego). He only said (with a fake anger) "Thik hai, thik hai, jao apni ma ke paas jao, wo mar rahi hai tumhare bina".

Sudha was very delighted😃; she cried a lot,😭 she stopped at about midnight when all of them were almost dead🤢 (because of hunger)😆.

Bhaskar was ready with the answers; i.e. He got only oneday off, Bharti went to see her ill friend, he had no option other than marrying Bharti etc. He could only sleep after 3 am because after answering all questions he had to listen to Nanhe's "Bablu bhayia meri nayi prem kahani aj aapko sunna hi parega"😆.

Next day morning, in Bhaskar's room: Payal entered.

Payal: Bhaskar, tum kahaan ja rahe ho?

Bhaskar (with full of confidence): office. I was the king of Men's Universe, main phirse wo fame feel karna chahta hu. Waise aur ek kaam hai, wo Gyaan aur Raichura ke saath mujhe kuchh hisab clear karna hai😉.

Payal: Pagal ho gaye ho? achha kaam karna hai, kisiko nuksan nahi pouchhana hai.

Bhaskar: Toh?

Payal: let me think. She kept thinking for 5 minutes. Then she said "Idea!!🥳, Bhaskar tum mafi mangoge un larkyo se jin sab ko tumne dhoka dia hai (she got the idea from "Bachna ae haseeno").

Bhaskar (thinking "uff yeh larkiya kitni budhdhu hoti hai"): Good Payal, 10% bhi khatam nahi hoga mera time khatam ho jaega.

Payal: Thik hai, kisi ek ko chuno; Geeta to tumhe maf karne se inkar kar dia, koi aur? Jo Geeta se bhi zada Bhagvan ko manti hai? Socho Bhaskar.

Bhaskar took 1 minute to think and said : Ha, hai, Aradhana, jaisa uska naam waisa uska kaam, uff hamesha uski "aj yeh puja hai, kal wo puja hai" lagi rehti thi. Dadar mein Sidhdhivinayak mandir ke paas rehti thi.

Payal: tum uska pata jante ho? to chalo.

In Aradhana's house:

Bhaskar was on his knees with a red rose in his hand "Aradhana, mujhe maaf kar do, main janta hu ke tum mere bagair nahi reh sakti, main tumhara bohut dil dukhaya, I am really sorry".

Gosh!! He got a slap from her!! 😲

Aradhana: Tumhe aj ka hi din mila tha mujhe yeh kehne ke liye? Aj meri sagai hai, aur yeh (she pointed someone from the croud, btw the whole house was beautifully decorated) mera honewala pati hai!!😆

After half an hour, they were back in Bhaskar's car. In the mean time Payal took the day off from Aashis, she called Amarjeet and said that Bharti was ill so she could not come to the office. Armaan called Bharti (because he was worried about Bharti) and Payal said that Bharti was sleeping.

Bhaskar (this time he was really sad😔): Payal, kash main itni larkiyo ka dil nahi dukhatha.

Payal (she felt like crying, then she controlled herself and said) : Chhoro Bhaskar'waise yeh funda to kam nahi kya, chalo Geeta ke pas chalte hai, usko jake batana ke tum larki banke kin kin mushkilo se already guzar chuke ho, use request karna phirse Bhagwanji se prarthna karne ke liye. Bharti ki baat wo nahi mani, lekin Bhaskar ka yeh sudhra hua roop dekhke shayad wo man jaye.

Bhaskar: Phirse Geeta? Lekin wo to out of town chali gayi.

Payal: uski friend shayad mil jaegi, uske paas shayad Geeta ki nayi phone number mil jae.

Bhaskar: Ok, chalo.

But she was not there, what they got from the neighbours was that "wo to sales job karti hai, shaam ke 8 bajne se pehle wapas nahi ati, lekin uski room met Geeta 6 baje tak wapas a jati hai, aplog usko aake puchh sakte ho"

Bhaskar and Payal was shocked😲. "Geeta !! Geeta wapas a gayi"

Payal: yeh Geeta kaha job karti hai?

Neighbour: hume pata nahi.

Again, they are back to the car.

Payal: to Geeta se milne ke liye shaam 6 baje tak wait karna parega. What next?

Bhaskar: Payal bohut ho chuka, aur abhi 3.30 baj raha hai, main office ja raha hu. mujhe office mein Bharti ki position stable karna hai.

Payal: Ok, tum office jao, main kuchh shopping kar leti hu, 5.30 baje tum mujhse ghar pe milna.

End of Part 11

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Part 12

Men's Universe (4 pm):

Bhaskar entered Men's Universe. He thought "I am back". Everybody in the office were surprised to see him (the girls could hear their heartbeats❤️).

But for a change, he ignored all the girls and moved towards Amarjeet's cabin.

Bhaskar didn't notice his change of behaviour (compare this Bhaskar with the Bhaskar you saw on the first episode where he was flirting with the office colleagues), KK was smiling from the heaven (I don't know where he actually lives)😆.

Amarjeet: Bhaskar, tu a gaya !! yeh to bohut "portentous" ghatna ho gaya. (you could see the word of the day "portentous" flashing on the screen).

Before Bhaskar could say anything he saw Gyaan, Vinita, Anu (she is interested about this new handsome guy) entering the room.

Gyaan (almost crying): yaar to kahan chala gaya tha'then he hugged Bhaskar. 🤗

Vinita: "darling, manti hu tumhare papa hospital mein hai, lekin tum ekdin ke liye a sakte the".

Bhaskar was very angry, he was thinking "in tino ki to mein aj hi chhutti kar dunga", then he controlled himself remembering what Payal said "aj no panga in office".

Amarjeet: Bhaskar, tu a gaya, tujhe bohut "portentous" papers dikhana hai mujhe, Bharti utni "portentous" nahi hai ke main use yeh dikha saku.

Gyaan: You are right Sir, ek aurat kaise itni important position le sakti hai? Vinita kicked him from the back. 😡

Bhaskar: waise Sir, aj main phirse Gwalior wapas ja raha hu. Bharti ek bohut achchi aur intelligent larki hai, aap use Bhaskar hi samjhiye.

Amarjeet: kya? phirse? Thik hai lekin aj tu yeh papers dekhke ja. Then he started showing him the papers. Time was running out😔.

Bhaskar came back to his room. He started studying the files which Amarjeet gave him. Actually he loves doing work. He was thinking "itne important papers? mujhe sir ne itne dino tak nahi dikhaya?" "sigh" shayad ek larki bhi achchi kaam kar sakti hai yeh unhe vishwas nahi hua."

Armaan entered the room.

Armaan: Bhaskar, tum yahan? Tum kahan chale gaye the? Aur Bharti kaisi hai❤️?

Bhaskar: Main ek important kaam ke liye bahar gaya tha, Bharti ne tumhe bataya nahi? Aur Bharti bimar hai, wo ghar par hai, ma bauji uski dekhbhal kar raha hai.

Bhaskar was thinking "yeh Armaan kitna achcha hai, iski meri kitni fikar hai, sirf yeh hi Bharti ki izzat karta hai.😍"

Armaan: OK, tum apna kaam karo.

Armaan left the room.He was thinking "Bhaskar ko pata hai ke main janta hu uske papa bimar nahi hai?" (5.45 pm)

6.00 pm, Bhaskar's phone was ringing.

Payal: Bhaskar, tum abhi bhi ghar nahi pohoche? Ek ghanta baki hai, tum Bharti ban jaoge.

Bhaskar: Yaar yeh Bharti se mujhe kab chhutkara milega?😭

Payal: thik hai tum directly Geeta ke ghar chale jao, main bhi waha pohochti hu"

Bhaskar: Ok, main ata hun

6.30 pm: At Geeta's house. Bhaskar and Payal knocked the door.

Yes, it was Geeta, who opened the door. Bhaskar and Payal were delighted.😛

Bhaskar: Geeta, tum wapas a gaayi'then he sat down (on the road) on his knees.."mujhe maaf kar do Geeta, dekho main badal gaya hu".

Geeta: Ha Bhaskar, mujhe dikh raha hai ke tum kitna badal gaye ho. ab konsa natak karne ke liye ae ho? ab main samjhi, usdin station par wo larki tumne i bheje the na meri beizzati karne ke liye?

Bhaskar: Nahi Geeta, wo main hi tha, main sachmuch larki ban chuki hu, yeh to tumhare Krishn bhagwan ka ek game hai, main ekdin ke liye larka bana hu😔

Geeta: phirse mazak? Krishn Bhagwan ne kabhi mujhe dikhai nahi die aur wo tumhare sath game khel rahe hai?😡

Bhaskar: thik hai tum 5 minute wait karo, tumhe sach pata chal jaega (6.55 pm).

7 pm. Bhaskar turned into Bharti. Geeta was shocked and so was Armaan.

Armaan was suspicious about Bhaskar and he wanted to know how he was related to Bharti. At 6 pm he came back to ask Bhaskar about it and heard Bhaskar's conversation over phone. Then he chased him down to Geeta's house.

End of Part 12

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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Dear Rin,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation
So this time everything is fine?

BTW I really love the mischievous part of Armaan.