KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Part 9

Next morning in the office: Armaan was trying to concentrate in his work. He was checking his camera. He saw Bharti entering the room.

Bharti: Armaan, wo actually mujhe tumhe kalke bare me batana tha.

Armaan (he was quite upset, he said angrily): ha bolo kya bolna chahte ho.

Bharti: actually hua tha kya ke, main aur Bhaskar ek dusre se bohut pyar karte the aur humlogo ne shadi karli.

Armaan was looking at her very coldly, giving no answers. Bharti was thinking "kya yeh vishwas kar raha hai?"

Bharti: hum log nahi chahte the ke kisiko is bare me pata chale, to main yeh itne din tak chhupa rahi thi.

Armaan came closer to her. He was searching for the truth in Bharti's eyes. Bharti felt awkward but she cannot stop looking at him. Armaan got his answers.

Armaan: tum Bhaskar ki biwi ho aur tum Bhaskar se pyar karti ho?

Bharti was not able to take her eyes off him. He was looking at her so romantically ❤️. She could only say "Ha".

Armaan: jhut (now you know, what answers he got😆)

Bharti (came back to her senses): ha Armaan main sach keh rahi hu.

Armaan (started smiling): Bharti, mujhe tumhari ankho mein pyar dikh raha hai lekin wo Bhaskar ke liye nahi.

Bharti doesn't know what to do. She was thinking "kyun bar bar main Armaan ke samne aisi ho jati hu,kyun kuchh soch nahi pati?"

Armaan: thik hai agar main maan bhi leta hu ki tum Bhaskar ki biwi ho, to Bhaskar kahan hai? Office me tumne bataya ke wo Gwalior mein papa ka dekhbhal kar raha hai. Bhaskar ke papa to bilkul fit and fine hai. Aur Bhaskar ke papa ko to yeh pata hai ke Bhaskar office ke kaam se bahar gaya hai.❓

Bharti: ha, wo Bhaskar Men's Universe ka ek secret kam ke liye bahar gaya hai, agar wo kam ho jae to Men's Universe ka bohut faeda hoga. Amarjeet sir ko bhi iske bare me pata nahi hai (she was actually stammering).

Armaan (started smiling again) : phirse jhut

Bharti (she is now irritated): kya tum meri kisi bhi baat vishwas nahi karoge?

Armaan became serious. Then he said, "Bharti, hum dono ke beech mein misunderstanding bohut bar ho chuki hai, lekin shayad tumhe pata nahi abhi main tumhe kuchh kuchh samajhne laga hu, aur abhi humare beech misunderstanding ki koi jaga nahi hai."

Bharti: to tum'..she stopped, she really doesn't know what to say.

Armaan: dekho, mujhe pata hai ke tum bohut bari koi problem me ho, lekin tum shayad mujhe utni vishwas nahi karti ke mujhe pura sach bata sako. Don't worry, main tumhe dubara nahi puchhunga.

Bharti (she was thinking: "yeh Armaan kitna achcha hai"): Thanks Armaan, main bohut lucky hu kyon ki mujhe tum jaisa dost mila hai.

Armaan (with a big smile in his face) : You are always welcome dost.

Bharti: to main chalti hu

When she was just about to leave the room Armaan called her.

Armaan: Bharti, agar Bhaskar koi musibbat mein hai to mujhe batana, main always help karne ke liye tayiar hu.

Bharti: Ok Armaan

Armaan (with a wicked smile): waise tum Bhaskar ki biwi ho yeh baat dubara mat kehna.

Bharti (bashfully): main ja rahi hu, mere paas bohut kaam hai.

Then she left. She was thinking: Bhaskar, you are "the Man", tum Armaan se aisi behave kyun kar rahe ho?

End of Part 9

................................................................

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago

Quote

Noori Khan

@CrazyNoori

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

awsum part dude cont sooooooooooon xxxxxxxxx

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: BlessedCuteOne
awsum part dude cont sooooooooooon xxxxxxxxx

Dear Noori,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.

Take care

Kaninika

Quote

440733

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Dear Rin,

I have understood what you are talking about. I just loved the way you have written about Armaan's feelings. I will try to keep it in mind when I will write the next chapters. There is one problem, I can think about ideas and situations but I don't have a good grip in my language (whether it is english or hindi or bengali). But I will try to do my best.

I will try to keep it in mind as well.

Take care

Kaninika

Hi Kaninika,

It's really alright, How you write is good it is very easy for the reader to imagine it happen 😊which is very good.
Ah, I understand don't worry just write however you want. Every writer has his own style and your writing style is good, Like I said before it really isn't THAT nessary for you to express the character's feelings since you already do that.

And about Payal it's alright howyou portray her even I think she would be a bit emotional or sad than how they show her on the show.

Anyway loved the new chapter, I think it was really good to see a mischievous Armaan.

Edited by Rin03 - 15 years ago

Quote

Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Dear Rin,

Thanks a lot for your appreciation
So this time everything is fine?

BTW I really love the mischievous part of Armaan.

Quote

Shabnam

@Dew-drop

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

Kaninika dear ...totally luved the 9th part .....

Woohoooo ...one whole part on Arbi ....
Awwwwwww feels gr8 to know dat Armaan didn't blieve about Bharti marriage ....
I hope he doesn't blieve in the original BB also ..
Fantastic update
..

Quote

Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Kaninika dear ...totally luved the 9th part .....
Woohoooo ...one whole part on Arbi ....
Awwwwwww feels gr8 to know dat Armaan didn't blieve about Bharti marriage ....
I hope he doesn't blieve in the original BB also ..
Fantastic update
..

Shabnam dear,

I love to watch Arbi together, so I wanted to write about them.
Actually many of the BB characters are missing in my FF, but I do it purposely, we can see these characters everyday in BB, but we can see only few ArBi moments.
BB is mainly a comedy show, I want to make it more romantic.

I think in real BB Armaan will surely come to know about the truth of Bharti's Marriage. But we may have to wait for it.

And finally Thanks a lot.

Take care
Kaninika

Quote

Sej

@SejN

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

loved the part like always :P and i dun no wht to say o u soucan makeit better cause i can't seem to find anything wrong with the parts :)..... but if u can can u try to make the parts a lil longer :p...onlly if u can lol ;p

Quote

Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sejal719
loved the part like always :P and i dun no wht to say o u soucan makeit better cause i can't seem to find anything wrong with the parts :)..... but if u can can u try to make the parts a lil longer :p...onlly if u can lol ;p

Thanks a lot.

You want me to make it longer? after posting each part, it seems to me that it is very long.
Good, so it is not boring?

Actually in every part I try to create a single scene and everyday I write the next part with the next scene. I need time to think dear, so it is really difficult for me to think that fast. I am sorry for that.

well I will try to make it longer.

Take care

Kaninika