KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear all,
I am writing a FF. In my story all the characters remain same as the serial.


"Kya Bharti Banegi Bhaskar?"
Index:

chapters Pg
Part 1................................1
Part 2...............................2
Part 4...............................3
Part 5...............................4
Part 6...............................5
Part 7...............................6
Part 8...............................8
Part 9...............................9
Part 10............................10
Part 11.............................11
Part 12............................11
Part 13............................12
Part 14............................14
Part 15............................15
Part 16............................18
Part 17............................21
Part 18........................... 24
Part 19............................28
Part 20...........................28


Part 1

Bharti is accepted by Bhaskar's parents, though Bhaskar's father is not happy with her, he accepted her on Bhaskar's mother's request. Bharti ki saans is very happy with her daughter in law, she is like a doll to her, she is happy giving her "bahu training"😆. Bharti is irritated.😡. Nobody in the office knows that Bhart is Bhaskar's wife.

Today morning Bhaskar's mother gifted Bharti a nice salwar suit, the colour of which is a combination of green and red.

Sudha: kya roj roj ajeeb sa dress pehenke office jati ho, aj yeh peheno
Bharti: Ok sasuma


In Men's Universe:

Hirabai: uff!! tu dekhke nahi chal sakta?
Narayan: maf kardo Hirabai


Actually Hirabai was adding detergent to the bucket and as Narayan pushed her and a lump of detergent fell on the bucket.

Hirabai: kitna sabun gira dia

Then she starts cleaning the floor
.

Hey guys guess what? the floor is slippery now.
😉

Next scene: Bharti is entering the office and Armaan is coming to meet his assistant.

Auuuu, screams Armaan, he slipped and fall in Bharti's arms, whatever Bharti is not capable of holding him but she took the support of the wall behind her.

At first Armaan's face was serious, he cannot believe that he was just falling, Bharti gave a typical "I am the man" smile.

Then he gave a smile and said "Tum achchi catch pakar leti ho"😛

Then they kept smiling and looking at each other.

Suddenly Ketki appeared and said "Bharti, Amarjeet sir apko bula rahe hai"

Bharti and Armaan tried to get up and they both fall down and they started laughing.

Armaan: dono girjaye to kon kisko uthaega!!🤣
🤣🤣🤣

And they continued laughing even more.

End of Part 1
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part deaar
Continue soon
BTW I am the first one to comment
Take CAre
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Nice part deaar

Continue soon
BTW I am the first one to comment
Take CAre
Zoya



Thanks a lot Zoya
and I am also waiting for your FF, when are we getting the updates?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray



Thanks a lot Zoya
and I am also waiting for your FF, when are we getting the updates?

Well I am working on the second part
It will be a little late as I have tests starting from monday in my college
Hope you understand
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woouww.. Fantasticc.. do continue plzzz.. its really gooood
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nice update.lolz.it was prety funny.i liked the line where he goes if we both fall, who's gnna catch us. Sweet update, can't wait til the continual
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice updat plz do write more :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks everybody for appreciating my FF. I am busy this weekend. I will post the second part definitely on Monday.

Take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Now I will write the 2nd part. I am giving the 1st part again for the continuation

Part 1


Bharti is accepted by Bhaskar's parents, though Bhaskar's father is not happy with her, he accepted her on Bhaskar's mother's request. Bharti ki saans is very happy with her daughter in law, she is like a doll to her, she is happy giving her "bahu training". Bharti is irritated.

Today morning Bhaskar's mother gifted Bharti a nice salwar suit, the colour of which is a combination of green and red.

Sudha: kya roj roj ajeeb sa dress pehenke office jati ho, aj yeh peheno
Bharti: Ok sasuma


In Men's Universe:

Hirabai: uff!! tu dekhke nahi chal sakta?
Narayan: maf kardo Hirabai


Actually Hirabai was adding detergent to the bucket and as Narayan pushed her and a lump of detergent fell on the bucket.

Hirabai: kitna sabun gira dia

Then she starts cleaning the floor
.

Hey guys guess what? the floor is slippery now.


Next scene: Bharti is entering the office and Armaan is coming to meet his assistant.

Auuuu, screams Armaan, he slipped and fall in Bharti's arms, whatever Bharti is not capable of holding him but she took the support of the wall behind her.
At first Armaan's face was serious, he cannot believe that he was just falling, Bharti gave a typical "I am the man" smile.

Then he gave a smile and said "Tum achchi catch pakar leti ho"
Then they kept smiling and looking at each other.

Suddenly Ketki appeared and said "Bharti, Amarjeet sir apko bula rahe hai"

Bharti and Armaan tried to get up and they both fall down and they started laughing.

Armaan: dono girjaye to kon kisko uthaega!!

And they continued laughing even more.

End of Part 1
.......................................................................................

Part 2

After a while they got up because they have works to do.

Bharti: hey, see you
Armaan smiles and goes to his assistant.

In Amarjeet's cabin:

Amarjeet: Anu beti, it is good but isko thorisi "Indianize" karo.
Then we can see the word "Indianize" on the screen. It is his "word of they day"

Anu: dad, I think it is perfectly fine.

Bharti comes in to the room.

Amarjeet: are Bharti aa gai! (with a big smile in his face). Bharti tum aa gayi, lekin tum aisi "Indianized" hoke kyun ayi ho?

Bharti: kya?(then she realised that she was wearing a salwar suit)
woh ma ne..(then she stopped, realizing that what she was telling)
Sir, new idea!! "bhartiya mardoko apni ma ke liye ideal bahu kaese milegi"...yeh theme ke liye mein aj yeh dress pehenke aa gayi
(then she gave an expression "uff bach gayi")


Amarjeet gives a big smile, his eyes telling that "look Anu what a wonderful editor we have!!"

Amarjeet: yeh hamari nayi idea hai? good yeh bohut "Indianized" idea hai! lekin Anu ek idea le ke ayi hai, mein tumhe wohi dikhane ke liye bula raha tha.

Then he passes the file made by Anu to Bharti. Bharti starts checking it.

Bharti: Sir yeh to bilkul bakwas hai!!
Amarjeet: kya?

Anu gives a very angry look.
Bharti: Sir yeh article "Men's Universe" mein nahi, "Women's Universe" mein honi chahiye, it is so girly, aisi bakwas ideas larkiyon ki dimag mein hi a sakti hai.

Amarjeet is stunned, he turns towards Anu. Anu is stunned (not angry, she never expected ke boss ki beti ko koi aisa bol sakti hai)....then she left the room saying nothing.

Amarjeet gave a look which says " kya karoo ab?"


End of Part 2
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey ...this is so very gud ...luved the part where Armaan falls & Bharti catches ....😆 ....please do continue ..

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