KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Kaninika ....gr8 update as usual ....
but wat yaar ..... Armaan knows the truth now...Armaan ka dil tod diya tumn
e ...💔
I wonder wat will happen next ... Armaan attitude has so changed 4 Bharti ....i hope kaninika this is a dream ...
Continue soon .....

Keep it up ....
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Thanks Shabnam,
Just wait and watch what happens next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww.....poor armaan. and seems like bharti is also feeling bad...yay thats good for armaan....cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwww poor armaan soo sad :( hope he gets what he wants..loved the part plz write more soon can't w8 :D

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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Hi! 😊

The chapter was really good and Armaan's reaction was also in-character but I found his following Bharti a bit out of character but anyway it was a good chapter 😃 Everything looks well 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Aarti, Sejal and Rin,

Thanks a lot. Me too felt bad for Armaan.

Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rin03

Hi! 😊

The chapter was really good and Armaan's reaction was also in-character but I found his following Bharti a bit out of character but anyway it was a good chapter 😃 Everything looks well 😊



Dear Rin,


Me too was thinking that Armaan following Bhaskar will be out of his character. But I wrote this because in my story Armaan never knew the relation between Bharti and Bhaskar. He knew that Bharti has two identities cousin of Bhaskar (in office) and wife of Bhaskar (in home). He was not asking Bharti about this because he love her verymuch and he knew that Bharti must be in deep trouble. He was thinking that one day Bharti herself will tell him. But when he saw Bhaskar (in Bharti's absence), he was suspicious. He knew that Bhaskar was never a good guy, he knew how he flirted with the office colleagues, and additin to this he heard Bhaskar's conversation on phone. He thought Bharti was in trouble, may be Bhaskar had done something with her. He was really worried for Bharti. That's why he followed Bhaskar.

BTW he followed Bhaskar not Bharti.


BTW in yesterdays episode------------------Armaan and Payal---------------------the navratri promo-----------why is Armaan going out of his character??????????????😭



Take care
Kaninika

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 14


Days went by. No important things happened in between. Though the RGVA group repeatedly created problems in Bharti's life and Bharti overcame all these problems with the help of Armaan and Payal (it is a common phenomenon, so according to me these are not "important"😆).


Bharti was fed up doing "Bahugiri", but gradually she got habituated. And she could feel that not only Sudha but Laxminarayan also started liking her.😊 Though Sudha kept weeping almost everyday "kya use phirse ekdin ki chhutti nahi milegi?😔"


Only there was one thing changed in Bharti's life 'Armaan's attitude towards her. He never ignored her, helped her in all respect, always behaved like a true friend. But the sparkle ❤️that she could see earlier in his eyes was missing. He stopped flirting and always behaved very coldly.


Bharti started feeling that something was wrong. She had always wished that Armaan should stop flirting her, she always thought "main Bhaskar hun, I am the man, main koi 'gay' nahi hu ke koi mard (Armaan) mujhse pyar kare." Now this fear was gone. But she was not able to stand Armaan's change of behaviour.


In the mean time, it was really difficult for Armaan to bear with all the things that are happening between him and Bharti. He never liked Bhaskar. But when he thought about the the moments he spent with Bharti he understood that may be Bhaskar was not that bad. He knew that Bharti was actually Bhaskar, whom he cannot love. He cannot love "a man". But he was not able to ignore Bhaskar. So he tried to be his friend. He tried to suppress his feelings and continued helping him. (He is such a sweetheart😛).


Some more days passed. Bharti could feel that she was not even able to sleep properly. She felt uncomfortable and worked up all the time. Gradually she was not even able to stand Armaan. She started avoiding him. And Armaan never asked why she was avoiding him.


Gradually only one relation connected them ' the "professional relationship"; no "love" and no "friendship".

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Deep inside their heart Bharti and Armaan were not happy.


The only happiness in Armaan's life was Jia. She made his life colourfull.


Bharti was totally confused. In office regularly she had to answer why Bhaskar was not coming back. Everyday Sudha worshipped god and prayed to bring back Bhaskar, and Bharti had to join her.


Bharti: KK, tum kahan ho? meri life mein aur konsi band bajana baki hai tumhari? Main pagal hota ja raha hu. Ab to mujhe Bhaskar bana do. kya Geeta tumse prarthna nahi kii thi?


But KK never appeared.


The only happiness in Bharti's life was Payal. Payal was able to figure out what was going on in Bharti's mind but she never told her anything. She was afraid "agar Bhaskar kabhi wapas nahi ana chahe to? Agar wo puri tarah Bharti banna chahe to?"


Payal tried to make Bharti happy. She tried to do bring back Bhaskar, she took Bharti to a football match (Payal never liked watching Football, she loves Bhaskar so much; she is such a sweetheart😛); she gifted her action movie DVDs and she gave Bharti a surprise by gifting a dashing cool bike which perfectly suits Bhaskar's attitude.


But all her efforts were in vain. Bharti was cheerfull when she was with Payal, but at other times she was mournful again.


Ultimately she broke her silence. She was able to understand everything was happening because of Armaan. "Aj Armaan se baat karni hi paregi, baat clear kiye bina meri life normal kabhi bhi nahi hogi."


She caught Armaan in the car parking area of Men's Universe.


Bharti: Armaan, mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai.


Armaan: ha Bhaskar bolo.


Bharti: tum mujhse aise behave kyon kar rahe ho?


Armaan: kaise behave kar raha hu?


Bharti: aise, jaise kuchh hua i nahi.


Armaan: normal i to behave kar raha hu, waise hua kya hai?


Bharti couldn't say anything. She said "kuchh nahi".


Armaan sat down on the driver's seat and he was about to start the car.


Bharti: Ruk jao Armaan (she yelled), then she stopped. Armaan, mujhe lagta tha ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho. (Bhaskar!! Do you know what you are telling Armaan!!!!😆)


Armaan was looking at Bharti very coldly. Then he said even more coldly "Ha karta tha main pyar, lekin tumse nahi Bhaskar, Bharti se". And then he started the car and left.


Bharti was left standing there alone😒.


KK: Kyuon Bhaskar, ab pata chala dil jab tut ta hai to kaisa lagta hai? kisi se pyar karo aur wo tumse pyar na kare to kaisa lagta hai? tumne kabhi socha hai un larkiyo ko kaisa laga jab tum unke dil tode?


Bhaskar saw KK was seating on the driver seat of his car.


Bhaskar (angrily): nahi KK main kisise pyar nahi karta.


KK: wohi to tumhari life ki sabse bari problem hai Bhaskar.


Then KK gave a sarcastic smile and he vanished.


End of Part 14

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I am really sorry friends. Each day my story is getting more serious. The comedy vanished.😭

I hope the same thing doesn't happen for BB.


Take care

Kaninika

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Hey dear😛



Awesome part! Loved it! Bharti ko armaan se pyaar... i mean bhaskar ko... i felt sorry for my armaan😭😭😭
but cant wait for the next!

Cont soon, and btw i'm first to comment

Luv
Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Hey dear😛



Awesome part! Loved it! Bharti ko armaan se pyaar... i mean bhaskar ko... i felt sorry for my armaan😭😭😭
but cant wait for the next!

Cont soon, and btw i'm first to comment

Luv
Nadz😳





Thanks a lot Nadz,

Yes you are the first person to comment, thanks again😃.

You loved it? I am so happy 🥳

Kaninika


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Posted: 15 years ago
Kaninika Dear ....
It is Superb ...
Awwwwwwwwww !! So Bharti is slowly realizing her luv 4 Armaan ...
❤️

Yeah Kaninika ...u r taking the story into a very serious mod....
please do add sum moments of Gyan /Amarjeet /Sunny to lighten up a little bit ....I m just giving u a suggestion ...otherwise its fully upto u ..

Newayz .....continue soon ..coz cant w8 4 the next part ..
Well done ..
👏👏👏

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