KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi kaninka (can i call you di) anyways, im really really really really srry for not reading parts. i was relaly busy. very very very sorry*holds ears* i just read the parts.they're awesome!! poor bhakar/bharti, arman, payal, and bhaskar's mom!! i feel so bad for them. payal loves bhaskar, bharti loves arman, arman loves bharti. but bharti is a guy. so complicated. keep on writing!! youre doing a fabulous job!! omg, luved the kash yeh hota part!! it was really good. lol, of course gyan's plans would fail. And i can imagine the garbar going on because of bharti and arman!!😆😆 thanks for writing!! youre doing a fabulous job!! and srry once again
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

hi kaninka (can i call you di) anyways, im really really really really srry for not reading parts. i was relaly busy. very very very sorry*holds ears* i just read the parts.they're awesome!! poor bhakar/bharti, arman, payal, and bhaskar's mom!! i feel so bad for them. payal loves bhaskar, bharti loves arman, arman loves bharti. but bharti is a guy. so complicated. keep on writing!! youre doing a fabulous job!! omg, luved the kash yeh hota part!! it was really good. lol, of course gyan's plans would fail. And i can imagine the garbar going on because of bharti and arman!!😆😆 thanks for writing!! youre doing a fabulous job!! and srry once again




Thanks a lot.

I am very happy that you liked it.
And don't be sorry.😆

Kaninika

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Kaninika u dedicated this FF to me ..
😳😳
Thank u soooooooooooooooooo much dear..😃
Cum here honey ...lemme giv u hug :-))



Now to the FF .....It waz fabulous ....👏👏
I luved it very much ....surely lightened me up ..😃
(waz really upset after the Payal/Armaan angle in the yesterday epi..)😡
totally luved their characters & descriptions ...
Amarjeet "chalti phirti dictionary "
🤣
& Payal is the " Gundi "(morality meter) here ...Loolllzz
& sooo luved the small Arbi part ( I hope its longer next time ..)😉

But there waz little thing which I could not digest ( sowwie )
"Gyan often gets a slap from Payal for his dishonesty "

How can Payal slap Gyan often..
He is supposed to b her Father in Law & no bahu slaps her FIL ...
U also described Bhaskar as a good boy ...meaning honest & obedient..
So will he allow his wife to slap his father often ..
😕

Apart 4rm this I luv ur short FF
👏
Please do continue ....
Cant w8 to know about their plans..
😉
& Thanx once again ..🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Shabnam,
Welcome Dear😛
I am really really sorry, you are 100% right. I have edited my story. You read it
and tell me.
I am very happy that you liked it.
Actaully I was really feeling very very bad 💔after watching yesterdays episode😭. I hated everything. specially the background music which I think is only meant for ArBi. The Navratri promo, how Armaan chose Payal as his dance partner, how Armaan and Payal was looking at each other.😭 😭 😭 😭
And when you told me too write something funny, I really wanted to write something which will make us happy.😊
And thanks a lot for your appreciation.
BTW I will finish my story KBBB then I will think about this one.
Take care
Kaninika
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

@Shabnam,

Welcome Dear😛
I am really really sorry, you are 100% right. I have edited my story. You read it
and tell me.
I am very happy that you liked it.
Actaully I was really feeling very very bad 💔after watching yesterdays episode😭. I hated everything. specially the background music which I think is only meant for ArBi. The Navratri promo, how Armaan chose Payal as his dance partner, how Armaan and Payal was looking at each other.😭 😭 😭 😭
And when you told me too write something funny, I really wanted to write something which will make us happy.😊
And thanks a lot for your appreciation.
BTW I will finish my story KBBB then I will think about this one.
Take care
Kaninika




Kaninika Dear ....I luv it ....
Its so much better now ....
😃
I can just picture Gyan getting hour long lectures 4rm Payal .... 😆
OMG !!! Wat would be his expressions ...Hahahaa ..I would just luv 2 see it ...🤣


OMG !!! Wat promo...I didn't see any promo ...😲😲
How dare Armaan chooses Payal ...😡
I m really getting mad ....Arrrrgggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!


& please do continue this short FF...dont leave it hanging ...
wat say ....whenever there is sum serious stuff going on .....bring this special short FF then 2 lighten up the mood ..
😉

& yes ...of course the KBBB has 2 be completed tooo ...😃

Keep Rocking ..
😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
@ Shabnam,
Thanks a lot.
OK. I will think about this short FF.
Take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

@ Shabnam,

Thanks a lot.
OK. I will think about this short FF.
Take care



Ur Welcum Dear ..😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
lol i liked ur idea..... and i hope happydays are back in the story :(
loved the update plz write more soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ Sejal,
Thanks a lot. I am happy that you liked it.🥳
Kaninika
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray


Dear Rin,


Me too was thinking that Armaan following Bhaskar will be out of his character. But I wrote this because in my story Armaan never knew the relation between Bharti and Bhaskar. He knew that Bharti has two identities cousin of Bhaskar (in office) and wife of Bhaskar (in home). He was not asking Bharti about this because he love her verymuch and he knew that Bharti must be in deep trouble. He was thinking that one day Bharti herself will tell him. But when he saw Bhaskar (in Bharti's absence), he was suspicious. He knew that Bhaskar was never a good guy, he knew how he flirted with the office colleagues, and additin to this he heard Bhaskar's conversation on phone. He thought Bharti was in trouble, may be Bhaskar had done something with her. He was really worried for Bharti. That's why he followed Bhaskar.

BTW he followed Bhaskar not Bharti.


BTW in yesterdays episode------------------Armaan and Payal---------------------the navratri promo-----------why is Armaan going out of his character??????????????😭



Take care
Kaninika



Hi Kaninika,

Ah ok 😊
lol yea, Sry I wrote Bharti instead of Bhaskar.
About your other chapters, They were really good 😊 I didn't find anything wrong, They were all okay 😊 Btw it seems to be getting serious so why not put some scenes of comedy? bring in Amarjeet or Gyan or anyone else maybe? Since BB is a romcom show so a bit comedy sometimes would be good 😊

I saw the small fic, That was funny 😆 Amarjeet talking in Tapori style and Gyan wanting to be slapped by Payal instead of listening to her lectures 😆
It;s good, A bit of comedy would help the seriousness going on in the fic.


Ah yes 😭 I saw that 😭
I don't think he is going out of character actually, The only person I see going out of character is Payal and Since Payal and Armaan seem to make a good pair (But I DO NOT want them together, I find their pairing VERY weird. It's just that Payal wouldn't go for a guy like Armaan, She is more better with Bhaskar) and now that he is on friend only mode with Bharti so the creatives can make Armaan can get close to Payal instead since she is the type of person he needs for Jia (You know caring, loving mother and all) but for me Bharti is his perfect match and is the perfect mother for Jia.

The only woman in the show that can make Bharti/Bhaskar really understand the pain of a broken heart is Payal since Payal is Bharti's good friend so if Armaan falls in love with her than it would break Bharti's heart and Payal is a special person for Bhaskar so yea if she falls for someone else than it would break Bhaskar's heart.

But anyway, I fell that more than Armaan it's Payal who is out of character. I mean suddenly falling for Armaan? I mean she could watch Bhaskar going out with different girls every day, if she has that much strenght to handle that then why would she suddenly for Armaan just because Bhaskar isn't there?

Anyway let's discuss this in the othet topic, Can't discuss about it here now can we?


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