KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Kaninika.....i'm extremely sorrie yaar that I didn't even realize that you were writing a fan fic and that too on armaan and bharti....saeriously i cudn't stop smiling at the chemistry between Armaan and bharti..fighting during debate and hitting each other...thatz so cute and awesome!!!!!
Amarjeet as Gyaan's father....awesome yaar...zaroor gyaan ko har din amarjeet ke strong dose of gaali milenge...hahahaha on top of that, payal the morality meter...hahahaha.....
Yeah mujhe toh bohat mazaa aagaya...Aur likho,alrite???? Now you have another ardent fan in your list!!!!!
I was totallie blue and shattered when i saw Armaan and Payal scenes yesterday.I just don't want their pairing for I can only picture them as friends and they are never close to the sizzling chemistry shared between Armaan and Bharti....I just couldn't see Payal coming in between them.....Bharti will make an awesome mom to Jia and an awesome life partner to Armaan...don't you think so????
Gyaan aur Vinita ki jodi is real good too.....Keep writing,k???
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Rin03


Hi Kaninika,

Ah ok 😊
lol yea, Sry I wrote Bharti instead of Bhaskar.
About your other chapters, They were really good 😊 I didn't find anything wrong, They were all okay 😊 Btw it seems to be getting serious so why not put some scenes of comedy? bring in Amarjeet or Gyan or anyone else maybe? Since BB is a romcom show so a bit comedy sometimes would be good 😊

I saw the small fic, That was funny 😆 Amarjeet talking in Tapori style and Gyan wanting to be slapped by Payal instead of listening to her lectures 😆
It;s good, A bit of comedy would help the seriousness going on in the fic.



Thanks Dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jassie_17

Hi Kaninika.....i'm extremely sorrie yaar that I didn't even realize that you were writing a fan fic and that too on armaan and bharti....saeriously i cudn't stop smiling at the chemistry between Armaan and bharti..fighting during debate and hitting each other...thatz so cute and awesome!!!!!

Amarjeet as Gyaan's father....awesome yaar...zaroor gyaan ko har din amarjeet ke strong dose of gaali milenge...hahahaha on top of that, payal the morality meter...hahahaha.....
Yeah mujhe toh bohat mazaa aagaya...Aur likho,alrite???? Now you have another ardent fan in your list!!!!!
I was totallie blue and shattered when i saw Armaan and Payal scenes yesterday.I just don't want their pairing for I can only picture them as friends and they are never close to the sizzling chemistry shared between Armaan and Bharti....I just couldn't see Payal coming in between them.....Bharti will make an awesome mom to Jia and an awesome life partner to Armaan...don't you think so????
Gyaan aur Vinita ki jodi is real good too.....Keep writing,k???
Cheers,
Jassie



Dear Jassi,

I am too happy that you liked my FF.

If you have time please read the main fanfic "KBBB", though it is now 15 chapters long😭. But it has numerous Arbi moments which I am sure you will like.

And about Payal and Armaan I am totally heartbroken😭.

I have written chapters (literally😆) on this subject in the forum under these topics;

This time it is not a dream--the post created by me

Not Again--by Nadz

Payal and Armaan-by Rin03

Take care
Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hreeyaa

Amazing,awesome,fantastic👏



Thanks for your appreciation Ria

Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey dear🤗

Sorry i'm late, i read the FF last night before sleeping but couldnt log in, got a prob with my home comp, doesnt login😕😕 but anyways cumin to the GyaaNeeta Love story😆😆😆

It was lovely👏

I was still looking for time to write one and you already wrote it😆😆😆 Loved it... and you used my short des😆😆😆 u dont need to say thank you dear😳😳 and i liked the payal and amarjeet ones😆 it was really nice😉 Lovely yaar, continue both na😳😳

Jaldi jaldi😉

Luv
Nadz😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
your break is simply too good. It made me laugh when i was reading it. And that tapori wala part is really funny.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Kaninika
Great story!! You should write for the bhaskar bharti show!! 👏

Amarjeet being gyaan's father and gyaneeta being married and having children named bhaskar and bharti is hilarious.

But the armaan acting coldly towards bharti is sooo sad.

Looking forward to the next part!

Take care,

Mai
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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear Nadz,

I am glad that you liked it.🥳

Yes I am thinking to write that FF after finishing my KBBB.

Take care

Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ram92

your break is simply too good. It made me laugh when i was reading it. And that tapori wala part is really funny.😆




Thanks a lot Ramsha.

I am very happy that you liked it. 🥳🥳🥳

Take care

Kaninika

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mmmai

Hey Kaninika
Great story!! You should write for the bhaskar bharti show!! 👏

Looking forward to the next part!

Take care,

Mai



Thanks a lot Mai

I am just...............☺️

Kaninika

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