KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 4

@Rin

Thanks a lot Rin.
I try to make the FF funny.

Actually the best thing in Bhaskar Bharti is that it is funny.

I just want to make the romanitic comedy little more romantic (i like romantic stories).

@ Zoya,

Thanks a lot.
Yes, I will be writing more ArBi scenes.

and by the way as you regularly read my FF I want you to tell whether my hindi is correct or not.
take care

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

@ Zoya,

Thanks a lot.
Yes, I will be writing more ArBi scenes.

and by the way as you regularly read my FF I want you to tell whether my hindi is correct or not.
take care

Part 6

Next evening, in the office: The mobile phone rang.

Armaan: ha bachcha bolo

Jia: dada, mujhe aapko ek baat bolni thi. Actually aj mera zada homework nahi hai, kya aj humlog dinner pe ja sakte hai? Mujhe bohut kuchh khaneka man kar raha hai.

Armaan: ha bachcha, thik hai tum jaldi ready ho jao main ata hu

Jia: dada, kya hum Bharti aunty ko bula sakte hai?

Armaan: nahi Jia, apki Bharti aunty bohut busy rehti hai, aj hum dono i chalet hai.

Bye, main rakhta hu.

Bharti entered the room.

Bharti: o, tum phone par baat kar rahe ho, main bad me ati hu.

Armaan: its ok Bharti, tum bolo.

Bharti: waise aj dinner par jaoge?

Armaan (with a huge smile in his face): zaroor zaroor

Bharti: thik hai, to tum aur Jia ready rehna, main tum donoko lene ke liye a jaungi.

Armaan: tum kyun aogi? Mein tumhe pick up kar lunga.

Bharti (thinking, uff yeh male ego): mera treat hai, main leke jaungi

Armaan: ok dear.

After two hours. Armaan and Jia ready for the dinner. Armaan hasn't told Jia that Bharti is coming, he wants to give her surprise. His mobile rang.

Armaan: yes, we are coming.

They came down; Bharti was sitting in her car. Jia was so verymuch excited to see her, Jia looked like a princess.

Bharti: Jia, tum mere pas baith jao, Armaan tum pichhe baith jao.

The car started moving. Armaan was feeling very awkward. (actually it was his male ego which was disturbing him, ek larki gari chala rahi hai aur main pichhe ki seat mein?)

They reached the restaurant. It was a highly decorated restaurant. Jia never came to such a place. She was very excited to see the disco lights hanging from the ceiling, the magic atmosphere all around.

Bharti asked Jia to order. Jia never heard of most of the dishes, not even Bharti (earlier she came here only to have drinks).

Bharti and Jia called the waiter and asked him about each of the dishes: what are they, how they look like, why they have such awkward names. The waiter was totally puzzled; he cannot answer so many questions at a time.

Armaan tried to stop them but he could not. He just took the menu card and ordered three dishes randomly and said "bhaiya jaldi le kar aiye main bohut hungry hu"

Bharti and Jia gave an angry look towards Armaan, then three of them started laughing.

The dishes came. Those were not something awkward (as you might be thinking, actually it was a Indian restaurant, naam ajeeb ho sakta hai lekin food wohi same i hai). They started eating.

All the time Bharti and Jia was trying to tease Armaan. He was becoming angry sometimes and sometimes he was smiling (actually within his heart he was always smiling, his anger was just an acting to make Bharti and Jia happy).

Bharti (thinking): Armaan office me to tum bohot flirt karne ki koshish karte ho, even kabhi kabhi sabke samne, Jia ke samne to kuchh nahi kar paoge, dekho , ab humlog kaise tumko tease kar rahe hai

Bharti: achcha Jia, tumhare dada to office me hamesha perfect gentleman banke rehte hai, ghar me kabhi koi garbar nahi ki?

Jia (smiling, looking towards Armaan): garbar? Ha, ekbar kya hua tha ki'

Armaan: Jia, please, no.

Bharti: Armaan tum chup karo, Jia tum batao.

Jia: ha ekbar kya hua tha, main aur Mrs. Francis humlog antakshari khel rahe the, dada office se ae aur hum e khelte dekhke baith gaye khelne ke liye.

The scene:

[ Armaan: main bhi khelunga

Jia: thik hai, ab apki bari aap "J" se gayie

Armaan: jai ho'aja aja jind shamiyane ke tale''..(the song, I mean)'jai ho

Jia: ab aunty aapki bari, aap "H" se gayie

Mrs. Francis (suddenly with a lot of 'josh' she started singin):

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.

All the king's horses,

And all the king's men,

Couldn't put Humpty together again ]

Jia: gana khatam bhi nahi hua dada itni zor se hasne laga ke Mrs Francis dar gayi, aur dada "excuse me" bolke room se chale gae. Badme dada ko mujhse bohut dat pari thi (Jia said this so seriously, as if she is his mother).

Armaan looked serious as well.

Bharti: lekin Mrs. Francis to mujhe 'Humpty Dumpty" jaise hi dikhti hai.

Armaan (seriously): actually us time mujhe bhi aisa hi laga tha

Than three of them strated laughing loudly.

End of Part 6

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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Cute part

Continue soon

Take Care

Zoya

Thanks a lot Zoya

As I have said it is really difficult for me to think, the serial is so interesting now, It is difficult for me to write more interesting things.

Take care

hey im luvin it thanx for this awesum imagination wit a combo of comedy and romance luvin it cont soon.

Luv
Nadz

wow!! great part...that ms.francis part with humpty dumpty was really funny!!! :)

loved this part plz write more soon :)