KYA BHARTI BANEGI BHASKAR?FF-the end-index in pg1 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part
Funny Payal
Continue soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

nice part

Funny Payal
Continue soon
Take Care
Zoya



Thanks for appreciating
I have tried to make Payal funny but I don't think that I can make her as funny as we see her in the serial
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Posted: 16 years ago
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To all Bhaskar and Payal fans,

Hey I have tried to write about Bhaskar and Payal for the first time. why nobody is commenting?

My story is KBBB (kya bharti banegi bhaskar)... so there will be Bharti as well as Bhaskar in my FF.
Edited by kaninikabasuray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Nice update ...
I liked the Payal/bhaskar part ...
😉
continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Nice update ...
I liked the Payal/bhaskar part ...
😉
continue soon..



thanks for appreciating
I will write about them again very soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Hey Kaninika (Can I call you that?)

I really liked the new update 😊 I would like to see some Bhaskar Payal moments in the show too but that isn't happening 😭
Anyway, I really liked the update and hope to see more soon 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5


It's a pool side restaurant, very beautifully decorated. Bhaskar and Payal are sitting on a table facing each other. Payal is wearing a bright red Lehenga choli. She is looking beautiful. There is a bright red heart-shaped candle burning on the table. The candle light makes Payal look even more beautiful. They are having a candle light dinner.

Payal: Bhaskar, mein kab se is din ka intezar kar rahi thi

Bhaskar not replying, he is thinking "konsi formula use karoo? Yeh Payal to sab janti hai"

Payal (little louder): Bhaskar, kya hua? Tumhari sari formulae khatam ho gayi? Mere liye kuch bachake nahi rakha?

Bhaskar (giving a shy smile): Payal tu har time mere dil ki Baat jan leti hai

Payal gave no answer, she was just smiling, she was looking towards Bhaskar so romantically.

Bhaskar started thinking again.

After few seconds:

Payal: kya hua Bhaskar? Tumhe mere liye itna sochne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, tum apna kam karo

Bhaskar (coming back to his senses): Kya?

Payal: RING!!!!!

Bhaskar started searching for the ring. After a while,

Payal: Bhaskar, ring tumhari shirt ke left pocket mein hai

Bhaskar took out the ring thinking " yeh kam pehle kitnibar kia hai, aj itni garbar kyuon ho rahi hai?"

Payal stretched her ring finger out, and just when Bhaskar was about to put on the ring, he suddenly stopped. Payal gave a questioned look.

Bhaskar: Thanks a lot Payal, tu nahi hoti to main asli hira pehchan nahi pata

Payal: Bhaskar, main tumhe sirf yeh ring dhundhne me madat ki hai, waise tum agar mujhe nakli hira dete to bhi mujhe itni hi khushi milti

Bhaskar : main is hira ki nahi, main tumhari baat kar raha hu

Payal gave a very shy look, she has nothing to say. Bhaskar put on the ring to her finger. He kissed her finger.

Wow!! Suddenly Bhaskar realized he was kissing Armaan's hand.

Bhaskar: EEEEEEK!! Armaan tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Armaan: kyuon yeh hamara dinner date hai

Bhaskar (shouting) : Nahiiiiiiiiiiiii

Bharti suddenly woke up, she was actually dreaming.

Bharti: Kya yaar, yeh kya sapna hai? Aur mein Payal ko kyon propose kar raha tha?

Ha, Armaan is the reason, wo 'dinner dinner' bol bol ke mera dimag kharap kar dia. Kal use dinner ke liye le jana hi parega.

Then she tried to sleep again.


End of Part 5
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Dear friends,
I am not good in Hindi. So if you guys find any mistake just tell me.

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Rin03

Hey Kaninika (Can I call you that?)

I really liked the new update 😊 I would like to see some Bhaskar Payal moments in the show too but that isn't happening 😭
Anyway, I really liked the update and hope to see more soon 😊



yes you can call me Kaninika.

Thanks a lot
I hope you will like the 5th part as well
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
lol XD 😆
Part 5 was funny 😆 Suddenly Armaan popping up 😆


I liked today's update 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
nice part
Continue soon
Waiting for some ArBi scenes
Take Care
Zoya

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