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Posted: 16 years ago
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Now Part 3

Part 1

Bharti is accepted by Bhaskar's parents, though Bhaskar's father is not happy with her, he accepted her on Bhaskar's mother's request. Bharti ki saans is very happy with her daughter in law, she is like a doll to her, she is happy giving her "bahu training". Bharti is irritated.

Today morning Bhaskar's mother gifted Bharti a nice salwar suit, the colour of which is a combination of green and red.

Sudha: kya roj roj ajeeb sa dress pehenke office jati ho, aj yeh peheno
Bharti: Ok sasuma


In Men's Universe:

Hirabai: uff!! tu dekhke nahi chal sakta?
Narayan: maf kardo Hirabai


Actually Hirabai was adding detergent to the bucket and as Narayan pushed her and a lump of detergent fell on the bucket.

Hirabai: kitna sabun gira dia

Then she starts cleaning the floor
.

Hey guys guess what? the floor is slippery now.


Next scene: Bharti is entering the office and Armaan is coming to meet his assistant.

Auuuu, screams Armaan, he slipped and fall in Bharti's arms, whatever Bharti is not capable of holding him but she took the support of the wall behind her.
At first Armaan's face was serious, he cannot believe that he was just falling, Bharti gave a typical "I am the man" smile.

Then he gave a smile and said "Tum achchi catch pakar leti ho"
Then they kept smiling and looking at each other.

Suddenly Ketki appeared and said "Bharti, Amarjeet sir apko bula rahe hai"

Bharti and Armaan tried to get up and they both fall down and they started laughing.

Armaan: dono girjaye to kon kisko uthaega!!

And they continued laughing even more.

End of Part 1
.......................................................................................

Part 2

After a while they got up because they have works to do.

Bharti: hey, see you
Armaan smiles and goes to his assistant.

In Amarjeet's cabin:

Amarjeet: Anu beti, it is good but isko thorisi "Indianize" karo.
Then we can see the word "Indianize" on the screen. It is his "word of they day"

Anu: dad, I think it is perfectly fine.

Bharti comes in to the room.

Amarjeet: are Bharti aa gai! (with a big smile in his face). Bharti tum aa gayi, lekin tum aisi "Indianized" hoke kyun ayi ho?

Bharti: kya?(then she realised that she was wearing a salwar suit)
woh ma ne..(then she stopped, realizing that what she was telling)
Sir, new idea!! "bhartiya mardoko apni ma ke liye ideal bahu kaese milegi"...yeh theme ke liye mein aj yeh dress pehenke aa gayi
(then she gave an expression "uff bach gayi")


Amarjeet gives a big smile, his eyes telling that "look Anu what a wonderful editor we have!!"

Amarjeet: yeh hamari nayi idea hai? good yeh bohut "Indianized" idea hai! lekin Anu ek idea le ke ayi hai, mein tumhe wohi dikhane ke liye bula raha tha.

Then he passes the file made by Anu to Bharti. Bharti starts checking it.

Bharti: Sir yeh to bilkul bakwas hai!!
Amarjeet: kya?

Anu gives a very angry look.
Bharti: Sir yeh article "Men's Universe" mein nahi, "Women's Universe" mein honi chahiye, it is so girly, aisi bakwas ideas larkiyon ki dimag mein hi a sakti hai.

Amarjeet is stunned, he turns towards Anu. Anu is stunned (not angry, she never expected ke boss ki beti ko koi aisa bol sakti hai)....then she left the room saying nothing.

Amarjeet gave a look which says " kya karoo ab?"


End of Part 2
...................................................................



Part 3

Bharti also left the room saying "Sir, mere pas bahut kam hai mein ja rahi hu".
Amarjeet thinking"yeh larkiya indianized kab hogi?"

After a while in Bharti's room:
Her mobile phone is ringing, Bharti takes the call.


Sudha: Bharti beta kaisi hai tu? khana khaya?

Bharti
(little irritated)
: school ke time se aapko to yahi chinta lagi rahti hai ki maine khana khaya ya nahi

Sudha(amazed): kya?

Bharti: woh Bhaskar ne bataya tha ke aap uske khaneka kinta chinta karti thi, aur ab aap mujhe bhi puchh rahi hai

Sudha became emotional, tears falling from her eyes.
Sudha: Bharti beta, Bhaskar ki koi khabar mili?

Bharti became little emotional as well.
Bharti: nahi ma, ..
then she saw Armaan entering the room and she said
"mein abhi rakhti hu"
Sudha: beta aj jaldi ghar a jana
Bharti hang up the phone.

Armaan: tum apni ma se bat kar rahi thi? tumne kabhi bataya nahi unke bare me

Bharti (little embarassed): ha, woh gwalior me rahti hai, harwaqt unko meri chinta hoti rehti hai
...then trying to change the topic..tum kuchh kam ke liye aye the?

Armaan: ha, tumhe yeh photos dikhani thi, keep them with you, check karke batana
Bharti
(with a serious face, still thinking about ma): OK

Armaan was leaving but suddenly he realised Bharti was not happy so he stopped and turned around. Bharti was serious, still thinking.

Armaan: waise Amarjeet sir ne bataya ke tum ek nayi idea ki bat kar rahi thi, " bhartiya mardoko apni ma ke liye ideal bahu"..aisa kuchh?

Bharti (still serious): ha

Armaan: yeh idea tumhari hai?

Bharti: kyon nahi ho sakti?

Armaan( with a naughty smile): tumhe kya pata adarsh bhartiya bahu ke bare mein?

Bharti (getting angry): mujhe nahi pata? main ek ideal bahu banke dikhaungi

(thinking that one day she will definitely impress Bhaskar's (I mean her) father, she is angry with the whole mail community, she thinks yeh Armaan bhi yahi sochta hai ke main nahi kar sakti)

Armaan (just waiting for this moment): main soch raha tha ke main jab dusri shadi karunga to aisi ideal indian bahu se hi karunga

Bharti suddenly realised what Armaan was talking about, the seriousness of her face was gone. She gave a smile, her eyes telling "phirse flirting shuru"

Armaan was smiling too, his eyes were telling " you know what I am taliking about"
Armaan
(happy that he made her smile): Ok, mein chalta hun
And he leaves.

Bharti keeps smiling (hey guys, you see Armaan is the ray of joy in Bharti's life)

Armaan entering the room again (may be to see her smiling face again).

Bharti: kya hua?

Armaan: woh hamara dinner pending tha, tumhe yad hai? aj raat?

Bharti
(she remembers her mother told her to come home early): nahi aj nahi, aj mera kuchh kam hai.
Armaan: Its Ok, but bhul mat jana,
and he leaves

Bharti started thinking: ma ne jaldi ane ke liye boli hai, aj phirse koi nayi dish banana sikhayengi, kya kya nahi karna par raha hai tujhe Bhaskar? she became serious again.

Armaan entering the room again.

Bharti:ab kya hua?

Armaan: tumhe aj ek bat batani thi

Bharti: kya? mein Jia ko achchi lagti hu?

Armaan: nahi, tum in indian kapro mein bohut achhi lagti ho


Bharti started smiling again.

End of Part 3
...............................................................................


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww this is sooooooooooooooo cute !!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Love_ya

Aww this is sooooooooooooooo cute !!!!!


Thanks a lot
I will post the next part very soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
awww wht a cute udate loved it plz write more soon:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
great updates..they're really sweet.......luved how she stuck it to anu!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Hey 😊

I love the sweet moments you put between Bharti and Armaan, I really love their pairing 😊

I like your fic and would love to see the next update soon but take your time 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Good one..Keep up the good work..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Zoya, Dew-drop, Love_ya, sejal719, bmtdluver, Rin03 and sheetalsasi2008

Thanks a lot for your appreciation
I will post the next part very soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
nice part dear
Continue soon
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Now part 4

Part 1

Bharti is accepted by Bhaskar's parents, though Bhaskar's father is not happy with her, he accepted her on Bhaskar's mother's request. Bharti ki saans is very happy with her daughter in law, she is like a doll to her, she is happy giving her "bahu training". Bharti is irritated.

Today morning Bhaskar's mother gifted Bharti a nice salwar suit, the colour of which is a combination of green and red.

Sudha: kya roj roj ajeeb sa dress pehenke office jati ho, aj yeh peheno
Bharti: Ok sasuma


In Men's Universe:

Hirabai: uff!! tu dekhke nahi chal sakta?
Narayan: maf kardo Hirabai


Actually Hirabai was adding detergent to the bucket and as Narayan pushed her and a lump of detergent fell on the bucket.

Hirabai: kitna sabun gira dia

Then she starts cleaning the floor
.

Hey guys guess what? the floor is slippery now.


Next scene: Bharti is entering the office and Armaan is coming to meet his assistant.

Auuuu, screams Armaan, he slipped and fall in Bharti's arms, whatever Bharti is not capable of holding him but she took the support of the wall behind her.
At first Armaan's face was serious, he cannot believe that he was just falling, Bharti gave a typical "I am the man" smile.

Then he gave a smile and said "Tum achchi catch pakar leti ho"
Then they kept smiling and looking at each other.

Suddenly Ketki appeared and said "Bharti, Amarjeet sir apko bula rahe hai"

Bharti and Armaan tried to get up and they both fall down and they started laughing.

Armaan: dono girjaye to kon kisko uthaega!!

And they continued laughing even more.

End of Part 1
.......................................................................................

Part 2

After a while they got up because they have works to do.

Bharti: hey, see you
Armaan smiles and goes to his assistant.

In Amarjeet's cabin:

Amarjeet: Anu beti, it is good but isko thorisi "Indianize" karo.
Then we can see the word "Indianize" on the screen. It is his "word of they day"

Anu: dad, I think it is perfectly fine.

Bharti comes in to the room.

Amarjeet: are Bharti aa gai! (with a big smile in his face). Bharti tum aa gayi, lekin tum aisi "Indianized" hoke kyun ayi ho?

Bharti: kya?(then she realised that she was wearing a salwar suit)
woh ma ne..(then she stopped, realizing that what she was telling)
Sir, new idea!! "bhartiya mardoko apni ma ke liye ideal bahu kaese milegi"...yeh theme ke liye mein aj yeh dress pehenke aa gayi
(then she gave an expression "uff bach gayi")


Amarjeet gives a big smile, his eyes telling that "look Anu what a wonderful editor we have!!"

Amarjeet: yeh hamari nayi idea hai? good yeh bohut "Indianized" idea hai! lekin Anu ek idea le ke ayi hai, mein tumhe wohi dikhane ke liye bula raha tha.

Then he passes the file made by Anu to Bharti. Bharti starts checking it.

Bharti: Sir yeh to bilkul bakwas hai!!
Amarjeet: kya?

Anu gives a very angry look.
Bharti: Sir yeh article "Men's Universe" mein nahi, "Women's Universe" mein honi chahiye, it is so girly, aisi bakwas ideas larkiyon ki dimag mein hi a sakti hai.

Amarjeet is stunned, he turns towards Anu. Anu is stunned (not angry, she never expected ke boss ki beti ko koi aisa bol sakti hai)....then she left the room saying nothing.

Amarjeet gave a look which says " kya karoo ab?"


End of Part 2
...................................................................



Part 3

Bharti also left the room saying "Sir, mere pas bahut kam hai mein ja rahi hu".
Amarjeet thinking"yeh larkiya indianized kab hogi?"

After a while in Bharti's room:
Her mobile phone is ringing, Bharti takes the call.


Sudha: Bharti beta kaisi hai tu? khana khaya?

Bharti
(little irritated)
: school ke time se aapko to yahi chinta lagi rahti hai ki maine khana khaya ya nahi

Sudha(amazed): kya?

Bharti: woh Bhaskar ne bataya tha ke aap uske khaneka kinta chinta karti thi, aur ab aap mujhe bhi puchh rahi hai

Sudha became emotional, tears falling from her eyes.
Sudha: Bharti beta, Bhaskar ki koi khabar mili?

Bharti became little emotional as well.
Bharti: nahi ma, ..
then she saw Armaan entering the room and she said
"mein abhi rakhti hu"
Sudha: beta aj jaldi ghar a jana
Bharti hang up the phone.

Armaan: tum apni ma se bat kar rahi thi? tumne kabhi bataya nahi unke bare me

Bharti (little embarassed): ha, woh gwalior me rahti hai, harwaqt unko meri chinta hoti rehti hai
...then trying to change the topic..tum kuchh kam ke liye aye the?

Armaan: ha, tumhe yeh photos dikhani thi, keep them with you, check karke batana
Bharti
(with a serious face, still thinking about ma): OK

Armaan was leaving but suddenly he realised Bharti was not happy so he stopped and turned around. Bharti was serious, still thinking.

Armaan: waise Amarjeet sir ne bataya ke tum ek nayi idea ki bat kar rahi thi, " bhartiya mardoko apni ma ke liye ideal bahu"..aisa kuchh?

Bharti (still serious): ha

Armaan: yeh idea tumhari hai?

Bharti: kyon nahi ho sakti?

Armaan( with a naughty smile): tumhe kya pata adarsh bhartiya bahu ke bare mein?

Bharti (getting angry): mujhe nahi pata? main ek ideal bahu banke dikhaungi

(thinking that one day she will definitely impress Bhaskar's (I mean her) father, she is angry with the whole mail community, she thinks yeh Armaan bhi yahi sochta hai ke main nahi kar sakti)

Armaan (just waiting for this moment): main soch raha tha ke main jab dusri shadi karunga to aisi ideal indian bahu se hi karunga

Bharti suddenly realised what Armaan was talking about, the seriousness of her face was gone. She gave a smile, her eyes telling "phirse flirting shuru"

Armaan was smiling too, his eyes were telling " you know what I am taliking about"
Armaan
(happy that he made her smile): Ok, mein chalta hun
And he leaves.

Bharti keeps smiling (hey guys, you see Armaan is the ray of joy in Bharti's life)

Armaan entering the room again (may be to see her smiling face again).

Bharti: kya hua?

Armaan: woh hamara dinner pending tha, tumhe yad hai? aj raat?

Bharti
(she remembers her mother told her to come home early): nahi aj nahi, aj mera kuchh kam hai.
Armaan: Its Ok, but bhul mat jana,
and he leaves

Bharti started thinking: ma ne jaldi ane ke liye boli hai, aj phirse koi nayi dish banana sikhayengi, kya kya nahi karna par raha hai tujhe Bhaskar? she became serious again.

Armaan entering the room again.

Bharti:ab kya hua?

Armaan: tumhe aj ek bat batani thi

Bharti: kya? mein Jia ko achchi lagti hu?

Armaan: nahi, tum in indian kapro mein bohut achhi lagti ho


Bharti started smiling again.

End of Part 3
...............................................................................



Part 4

In Payal's house

Payal is sitting on the floor. In front of her there is a empty chair, a plate which contains laddus, kachoris, and flowers, a dia and a number of candles and agarbattis.

Payal (looking towards the empty chair, as if somebody is there):

He KK, mein nahi janti ke aap kaun hai lekin mujhe pata hai ke aap "who, who cannot be seen"
(guys I have taken the line from Harry Potter " who, who cannot be named") ho. Then she stopped and said

aap english samahjte hai na? matlab aap "wo, wo jo dikhai nahi dete" ho.
Aap mere Bhaskar ki life mein itni problems kyun create kar rahe hai? aap ko to pata hai wo dilka bura nahi hai.....
well main janti hu ke aap yeh kyun kar rahe hai...lekin aap mujh par to daya kar sakte hai na?
main Bhaskar ko bohut miss karti hu, mujhe mera Bhaskar wapas de dijiye..

Then with a lot of shraddha she waited for an answer from the invisible KK, but there was no answer.
In the mean time Bharti was coming up the stairs. She is thinking "phirse bahugiri karo, are yaar meri life kab sudhregi? ek taraf ghar mein bahugiri karna aur dusri taraf office me Armaan ke isharo se bachna. Payal yaar kaha hai tu? mujhe bacha."

Payal: Ok KK. mujhe lagta hai mein kuchh zada hi mang liya...
Thik hai,lekin ekbar to aap mujhko Bhaskar se mila sakte hai na?

Somebody knocked the door. Payal was just getting up to open the door, her eyes stuck to the empty chair. There was a "mayurpankh" on it...she wanted to touch it....the doorbell rang very loud. She came back to her senses, there were nothing on the chair. She got up and opened the door.

Wow!!!! it was beyond her imagination!!! she can see Bhaskar standing in front.

Bhaskar
(ignoring Payal as he can see KK standing behind Payal): tum!!!! tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? meri zindagi hell banake tumko maza nahi aya? Payal ko pareshan karne ke liye aa gaye...

KK
(giving his typical "I am the almighty" look) : main sirf apna kam karta hu Bhaskar. kisiki sachchi prarthana mein kaise na puri karoo?

Payal is standing, watching Bhaskar, she is not even able to hear his voice, she can only hear her heart, which is beating very fast.

Bhaskar: mujhe baaton mein mat uljhao KK. dekho tum mera jo chaho bigar sakte ho lekin tum agar Payal ko chhuneki koshish bhi ki na, to mein....
he is really very angry

Payal cannot beleive what she just heard. She suddenly hugged Bhaskar. Bhaskar hugged her as well, it was clear that he wants to protect her from every evil comes to her path.

Bhaskar gives an angry look towards KK, KK gives a cool smile and then he vanishes.

Bharti: Payal kya hua? tu ro kyun rahi hai? KK ne kuchh kia kya? (she was stairing to the empty chair, laddus and all)

Payal (controlling herself): nahi to, woh aunty mujhe puja karna sikha rahi thi

Bharti : O, chal mere ghar chal.

Bharti was so worked up that she couldn't understand what just happened a few moments ago.
Both of them headed towards Bharti's house.

End of Part 4
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Edited by kaninikabasuray - 16 years ago

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