PrAja FF : Meri Aashiqui Bas Tum Hi Ho - part 9 on pg 14 /18th feb'16 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Padh liye maine updates

Yeh Pratu kuch zyaada hi attitude dikha raha hai - Phool ki sangati ka aasar hai for sure

So you made some changes I saw them and am waiting to see aage kya hota hai

Ajabde acche se sabak seekhaana iss arrogant Pratu ko

Aww no JB but we have Karnawati - I love Karnawati

Waiting for your next update baccha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update Apeksha! Loved it how Ajab replied back to him... Pratap is both angry and impressed... JB is dead?... but loved the daadi-pota relationship... nicely described... waiting for the next one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

Wonderful update Apeksha! Loved it how Ajab replied back to him... Pratap is both angry and impressed... JB is dead?... but loved the daadi-pota relationship... nicely described... waiting for the next one...



Thanks Vibha😊 Ajabde is strong girl re.. unlike in the show! pratap pat gaya..😲🤣 yup.. she's dead here😔 we have a rockstar daadi here😉😆 will update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Padh liye maine updates

Yeh Pratu kuch zyaada hi attitude dikha raha hai - Phool ki sangati ka aasar hai for sure

So you made some changes I saw them and am waiting to see aage kya hota hai

Ajabde acche se sabak seekhaana iss arrogant Pratu ko

Aww no JB but we have Karnawati - I love Karnawati

Waiting for your next update baccha



Didaaa🤗🤗 ab yuvraj hai toh attitude toh hoga hi na..😉 ajabde sabak toh sikhayegi hi pratap ko😆 karnavati is a rockstar here😉😛 will update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys..!! i'm her with the next part.. enjoy reading and do share your view😃

Part 3
Ajabde's mood was totally spoilt by the incident happened some moment back.. she was now slashing some cold water to her face standing infront of the mirror in the washroom hoping to calm down her raised temper..
Ajab: accha hota agar humne bhago ko humare saath ane diya hota.. naahi hum washroom doodndte waha jaate aur naahi uss Mr.Akdoo singh se takrate... yeda kahi ka...!!
"Kon hai yeda?!"
Ajabde raised her head to see in mirror who was it..
There stood a girl slight taller than her with big bright eyes filled with kohl, with minimal makeup, long fish tale braid, a small stud on her nose, wearing a pinkish cream color designer sleevless top and a grey parallel pants..with raised eyebrows,,
Ajab: aur kon..?! Iss college mein yeda sirf ek hi hai.. Mr. Akdoo singh.!!
The girl narrows her brows in confusion
Ajabde turn around to face her
Ajab: arre sorry! woh naam sirf hume pata hai... uska ek aur naam bhi hai!!
She looks at her left and right to see anyone is spying on them and whispers
Ajab: yuvraj pratap singh!!
Girl: Kyaa?!
She was amused..

Ajab: haan..!! Ek no. Ka lafanga hai,, lafanga!! Usse lagta hai ki saari ladkiyaan ussi keliye bane hai.. naam se yuvraj aur kartute..??! Hadh hai!!
She signs remembering her encounter with him..
Ajab: waise i'm ajabde chundawat,, aur tum?!
Girl: Hi! I'm maan kanwar.. aur,, tum jis yede ki baath kar rahi ho na..woh,, woh humare bhai hai.!
Ajabde's smile was turned into shock,, her eyes and mouth were of same size,, wide open.
Ajab: KYAAA!!!
It took very less time for her to register that the girl she was talking to was sister of pratap that means udaigarh's yuvrani..!!!
The sense of panic raised through her body.
Maan was all in smiles seeing the pools if reactions & expressions forming on ajabde's face.
Ajab:wo..woh.. i'm sorry.. ! Hume nahi pata tha woh.. i'm really very sorry..!!
Maan: Hey!! Calm down...hota hai,,
Ajab: But i'm really sorry,, hume pata nahi tha ki..
Maan: humne kaha na,, its ok!! So just chill.. Mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga..
Ajab: sach?!
Maan blinks her eyes in assurance..
Ajabde felt somewhat relaxed but she was guilty for what she spoke.
Maan sensed that she was not comfortable..She then forwards her hand for a hand shake
Maan: toh friends??!
Ajabde looks at her starled.. being a yuvrani she wants them to be friends?! indeed she was different,, unlike her akdoo bhai and that super model phool.. she thought. She happily accepted her hand of friendship with a smile.
Ajab:Friends!!

#class room#

The session was finished in no time and all the students were addressed to return to their respective classes to attend the lectures..but lecturer was not yet entered in class as it was 1st day of the college,, so all the students were having a fun time with their new friends..

and on the last bench(s) there was the royal gang
Pratap: yeh choti kaha reh gayi.. tab se washroom gayi hai aur ab tak nahi lauti,,
Phool: pratap!! Ladkiyon ko thoda toh time lagta hai na..
Jalal: ha but itna bhi time nahi lena chahiye ki washroom bhi unse bore ho jaye..
Phool: haww!!
The boys hi fived and broke into laughter
Pratap: sahi kaha jalal,,
Jalal: pratap!! How many times should i tell you,, call me 'J' yaar..
And this time it was pratap and phool who saw each other and broke into laughter..

#washroom#
Maan was laughing hard... as ajabde was imitating pratap's action
Ajab(as pratap): "Hum Yuvraj pratap singh hai !!"
She was narrating her encounter with pratap,, and the way she shoved him off her
Maan(still laughing): tumne sach mein aisa kiya??
Ajab: aur nahi toh kya? ladkiyon se aise baat kon karta hai?!
Maan: mere bhai..!!
Ajab: haan.. tumhare bhai ke alawa aisa koi itna badtameez hoga bhi nahi..!
Maan laughed again..
Ajab: tum kitni acchi ho.. ek yuvrani hone ke baad bhi,, tumme thodi si bhi ego nahi hai..aur ek tumhara bhai hai,, usme ahankaar toh jaise khoot khoot kar bhara hai..woh tumhara bhai kaise ho sakta hai.?!
Maan: aisa kuch nahi ajabde,, dadabhai jitna rude aur pattar dil banne ki koshish karte hai na..woh waise hai nahi.. bhai toh bohot acche hai humse bhi jyada!! Woh bas jatate nahi..aur tumne abhi abhi kaha na ki kisi bhi insaan ki character ko uski pehli jhalak se judge nahi karna chahiye..phir toh tum bhai se sirf 1 baar mili ho,, Right?!
Ajab: ha kaha tha but woh insaano keliye hai.. bigade huye yuvrajon keliye nahi..
Maan signs in defeat..
Maan: anyways, chalo class chalte hai.. warna pehla din daant khani hogi..
both were leaving the washroom when soubhagyavati came there

Ajab: bhago! Kaha thi tum hum kabse doond rahe the tumhe..
Bhago: ajabde!! Mein toh yahi thi.. par tum washroom keliye nikli thi na.. aur tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai??
Ajab: ab hum thik hai..
Bhago(pointing towards maan): waise yeh kon hai?
Maan: hi..!! hum maan kanwar hai.
Ajab: udaigarh ki yuvrani
Bhago: kyaa!! Yuvrani ji aap!! waise i'm soubhagyavati.. aap mujhe bhago kehke bhi bula sakti hai.. jaise ajabde bulati hai,, kyaa mein bhi aapki friend ban sakti hu??
Maan: haan.. bilkul,, par sirf ek sharat par!!
Ajab: kaisi sharath yuvrani maan kanwar?!
Maan: yahi ki aaj se aap dono hume yuvrani maan kanwar nahi sirf maan bulayengi!! thik hai??
Ajabde and soubhagyavati were overwhelmed by this friendly gesture of maan,, they nodded with a smile
Bhago: toh phir thik hai..Maan, ajabde ab hume chalna chahiye lectures bhi toh attend karna hai..
Ajab: haa.. chalo


The trio made their way towards the classroom

#classroom#
Ajabde, bhago and maan entered the classBut there were really very late to the lectureBut they were excused as it was their 1st time..
Maan: chaliye hum sab peeche bait the hai..

Ajabde saw pratap and gang in last bench so she refused to sit with them instead she took the first bench seat which was not occupied till then. She was adamant not to go near the spolit prince..maan and bhago shared a knowing look. And this didn't went unnoticed by pratap... Maan sat beside pratap and bhago in next bench..

Pratap(in a low voice): choti!! tum Ms.chawlwali ke saath kya kar rahi thi?
Maan: Ms. Kyaa?!
Pratap: arre woh ladki jiske saath tum andar aayi,..
Maan: Dadabhai.. she's my friend ajabde, and woh bohot hi acchi hai..!
Pratap: haa.. dekha humne kitni acchi hai, tumhare bulane ke baad bhi tumhare saath baithna nahi chahti.
Maan: woh issliye kyuki aap yaha baithe hai..aur lagta hai usse aapme koi interest nahi..
Pratap (rolling his eyes): as if i care!!
But somewhere in a unknown corner of his heart he knew it affected her but he didn't why..

PS- plz bear me if any spelling/ grammar mistakes..
Edited by ApekshaM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan ne entry maari... wow...awesome... so Pratap really cares about Ajab's opinion of him.. Maan is a good sister, good brother-sister bond... Jallu is also here... great... update soon Apeksha😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Truly awesome update apu 👏⭐️❤️
Maan entered and ajab-Maan friendship bhi ho gayi😛 she can play cupid in future for praja😉
Jalal oppss I mean J is also here...nice...😆
Loving Ajab...keep it up girl...don't give any bhav to him 😉 akal thikane aayegi uski 😆
pratu is already lattu on her 😳😆
update soon ...I'm waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poeple1234

Maan ne entry maari... wow...awesome... so Pratap really cares about Ajab's opinion of him.. Maan is a good sister, good brother-sister bond... Jallu is also here... great... update soon Apeksha😊

maan ne maari entriyaan dil mein bhaji ghantiyaan tang tang tang!!🤣🤣 i've gonna crazy.., 😆 Actually he is confused about her feelings..😔 jallu nahi call him 'J' yaar😛🤣.. will ypdate soon..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsm123

<font size="2">Truly awesome update apu👏⭐️❤️</font>

<font size="2">Maan entered and ajab-Maan friendship bhi ho gayi😛she can play cupid in future for praja😉</font>
<font size="2">Jalal oppss I mean J is also here...nice...😆</font>
<font size="2">Loving Ajab...keep it up girl...don't give any bhav to him😉akal thikane aayegi uski😆</font>
<font size="2">pratu is already lattu on her😳😆</font>
<font size="2">update soon ...I'm waiting</font>

Thank you Dhanu🤗🤗🤗 maan is a very helpful chees you know😛😆 pratu still is confused of his own feelings.. but lattu toh usse hona hi hai..😉😆 will update soon..😃
Edited by ApekshaM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh part best hai 😆 Bestest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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