PrAja FF : Meri Aashiqui Bas Tum Hi Ho - part 9 on pg 14 /18th feb'16 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Apeksha laut aayi saath mein new story laayi! [:D/] 😛
Fabulous start dear. 👏 In the starting ajab-hb convo, well similar thing happens with me often. Ajab is chawl wali! 😲 Oh ye patta and ratan kina ladte hain. 😆 😳 Praphool are bf-gf 😡 Arey nahi but i like a jealous ajab. 😃
Please continue soon... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Yayyy!!! 🥳
New new FF!!! And it's modern! I like it ❤️
Pehla FF bhool mat jaana ok?
This one was fabulous!! 😳
Yuvraj ka description mast tha 🤪
And idhar bhi Phool ban gayi Kabab main Haddi 😡
Never mind...usse Ajab nipat legi 😈
You update soon with romance and fun 😉
All the best for your studies and everything 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Apeksha laut aayi saath mein new story laayi! [:D/] 😛
Fabulous start dear. 👏 In the starting ajab-hb convo, well similar thing happens with me often. Ajab is chawl wali! 😲 Oh ye patta and ratan kina ladte hain. 😆 😳 Praphool are bf-gf 😡 Arey nahi but i like a jealous ajab. 😃
Please continue soon... 😉



Ramya!!🤗🤗 thnk u..😳 yup ajabde is a chawl wali..😉 patta aur ratan toh hai hi shaitaan..😆

shant baalike.. phool ko jaldi hi chutti milengi..😆 abhi toh bohot jalna hai ajabde ko..☺️ will do..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Yayyy!!! 🥳
New new FF!!! And it's modern! I like it ❤️
Pehla FF bhool mat jaana ok?
This one was fabulous!! 😳
Yuvraj ka description mast tha 🤪
And idhar bhi Phool ban gayi Kabab main Haddi 😡
Never mind...usse Ajab nipat legi 😈
You update soon with romance and fun 😉
All the best for your studies and everything 🤗



Nuts!! thnk u so much🤗🤗 1st ff ko kaise bhulungi.. but will update that ff later..😊 yuvraj..!! ahaa.. ab hot hot yuvraj rahega tabhi toh maza aayega..☺️ arre yaar CV's toh than li hai praphool ki jodi banane keliye.. so thought ki usse yaha par hhi chudail hi banade..😆ha ha.. ajabde bohot intelligent hai u know..😉 will do dear.. thank u once again😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys.. i actually needed to make some slight changes... the plot is same but for th future parts... i've inserted 2 fictious characters.. and here ajabde is not taken as a bad omen by her father infact she is their beloved daughter.. if time permits plz go through the prologue once..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
superb update Apu 👏⭐️
wow the way you described pratu ...temperature badh gaya idhar☺️🤣 ajab toh obviously lattu honi hi thi 😉😆

what phool here too 🤢 chutti kar dena uski jaldi 😉

eagerly waiting for next update and and and praja
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsm123

<font size="2">superb update Apu👏⭐️</font>

<font size="2">wow the way you described pratu ...temperature badh gaya idhar☺️🤣ajab toh obviously lattu honi hi thi😉😆</font>

<font size="2">what phool here too🤢chutti kar dena uski jaldi😉</font>

<font size="2">eagerly waiting for next update and and and praja</font>



Thanks dhanu🤗😃 pratu ka description part was for u guys only😆 patience darling!! will soon do something to get rid off her😉 update is on the way!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hey frnds..!! i'm here with an update.. i know i said to update it next week but this story is not making me stop.. 😆and i don't want my lovely readers to wait for soo long😉enjoy reading and do share your views😃& Guys plz bear with me if spelling/grammar mistakes as no proof reading is been done

PART 2
#Back stage#

Pratap made his way through the crowd waving his hands to his over excited fans.. with his super model girl friend phool beside.
Once reaching the stage he slowly removed his shades and blew some flying kisses to the crowd or i should say the ladies in the crowd..
Pratap: Hi guys.. humari aise swagat keliye aap sabka bohot bohot shukriya..hum yahi chahte hai ki aap sab ka support aise hi humare saath rahe..
Phool: aur ha... aaj pratap ke wapas aane ki khushi mein humare dad ne rajmahal mein ek party rakhi hai.. ab usme toh tum log nahi aasakte..
She then entangles her hand with pratap's
Phool: But don't worry.. we'll make sure ki tum logon ke liye bhi ek party organise ho.. jo tum logon ne kahi nahi dekhi hogi..!!

Here ajabde was feeling somewhat suffocated.. so she thought to freshen up in the washroom..

Ajab: ah bhago.. ! Hume kuch thik nahi lag raha hai..
Bhago: kya hua ajabde.. tum thik toh ho?!
Ajab: pata nahi bhago.. shayad hume itna crowded place mein rehne ki aadat nahi hai toh issilye thodi si suffocation horahi hai..issi liye hum ek kaam karte hai.. hum zara wash room jaakar fresh ho kar aate hai..!
Bhago: thik hai.. mein chalti hu tumhare saath..
Ajab: arre nahi nahi.. tum baito, hum thik hai.. bas abhi aaye
Bhago: you're sure na??
Ajab: ha baba.. bas abhi aate hai..
She then walks out from that place

the noise of the crowd was subsiding as the authorities addressed the students about the prestige of their college in entire devgarh.. pratap and phool were now seated in the 1st row which was reserved for them and as of now the focus of the students were on the speech of the authorities' than the main attraction of the crowd..although some girls were still drooling over the prince of udaigarh..
Just then pratap got a call so he gets out from there excusing himself


#Corridor#
Pratap: hello Dr. Uncle ab kaise tabiyat hai Daadi saheb ki?
Dr. Uncle: chinta mat karo pratap beta... rajmata ki sehat sudhar rahi hai., but woh kuch jyada hi stress leti hai.. unhe kuch dino ke liye riyasat ki kaamo se dur rakhna padega..
Pratap: aap chinta mat kijiye Dr. Uncle, hum daadi saheb ko sambhal lenge.
Dr. Uncle: hum janate hai beta.. isseliye toh aapse bol rahe hai..aur waise bhi rajmata aajkal bacchi bangayi hai.. har baat par zid karti hai..
Pratap chukles a bit hearing the childish tantrums of his darling daadi
Dr. Uncle: accha beta hume ab jaana chahiye.. rajmata ko medicines dene ka time hogaya.. hum aapse party mein milte hai..bye beta.
Pratap: sure uncle.. bye!

Pratap was a 21 year old youngster.. he was too attached to his daadi saheb 'Rajmata Karnavati'. After the death of his mother 'Maharani Jaiwanta bai' he was totally taken care by his daadi saheb.. she never let him miss his mother.. coz she knew if she let him to do so then he can't become a strong prince who must take care of the entire udaigarh in future..she was always stood beside him to correct his every mistakes, to guide him to walk in right path, and all the stratergic decision making that the prince must have knowledge of.. and her hardwork is the result what he is now. A brave, intelligent, difficult to tackle and overall a role model for the entire udaigarh.. she meant life to him! And now she was ill due to the continues work of the riyasat she has been doing.. even though his dad was the Maharaj of the state but all the decisions were taken by rajmata itself.. its the main reason he came back to india from london, in the name of completing his graduation.. and also the time has come now,, to take up his responsibilities and rule the country..and his daadi saheb by his side he can manage both his studies and the riyasat as well

He was in a trance and *BANG!!* he collided with something or someone!? But before he could realise anything the figure in front of him seems to loose its conscious and in a reflex his arms saved her from hitting the ground..

Ajabde was wandering since a long time in the corridor hoping to find someone who can guide her to the washroom.. and to add on more dificulty to her present problem..in the mid way, the heel of her sandal broke and she was fidgeting with her sandal to somehow tuck it back on its original place by balancing on one leg.. but the next second moment she hit into someone and it was none other than but the prince??!! she felt herself loosing her conscious which made her land in the arm of pratap..

Ajabde eyes widened in shock,,
Pratap for 1st was thinking what's happening but the moment ajabde fell in his arms he was lost in her kohl eyes..they had a perfect eye lock but no sooner ajabde was struck with the reality that he was a prince!! So she straightened herself this brought pratap out of his trance..

Ajabde was all red in embrassment.. she thought she should ask apology for her mistake..
She opened her mouth to say something but before she could further continue he then coming back to his usuall 'prince of udaigarh' form began with a smirk

Pratap: agar itni hi jaldi thi humare baahon mein aane ki,, toh you could've requested for... you know.., Itni drama karne ki kya zaroorath thi..
Ajabde was confused at first but when realisation dawned upon her.. she was boiling with anger..'HE WAS ASKING HER OUT' how could he think such useless things about a person whom he didn't even met once..!!
Ajab: Mind your tongue Mr. Yuvraj Pratap Singh!!! Aapko kya laga?? Aap yuvraj hai iska matlab yeh nahi ki aap kisi ke bhi bare me kuch bhi bol sakte hai!!

All the while pratap was staring at her in amusement. He was shocked to the core.. no one till today talked to him like this.. but this girl!! How dare she talk to him like that..he was loosing his temper..

Ajab: Bolne se pehle socha kariye..!
She was about to go when he grabbed her arm and pulled her to me in a swift action..
Pratap: tumhari itni himmat!!
Kya hua agar meine pooch liya toh?ha? Oh wait..! let me guess,, tum ek chawl wali hi hogi.. right?! Dekhne se toh yahi lagta hai..Tum logon ko life enjoy karna aata hi nahi.,,
Ajab(in angry tone): Aap..
Pratap: waise daath deni padegi tumhari himmat ki.. tum humse.. YUVRAJ PRATAP SINGH Jiss par saari ladkiyaan marti hai usse ulaj rahi ho..?!
Ajande was irritated by nowSo she got free of his tight grip
Ajab(in a loud voice): Baaki ladkiyaan marti hongi aapke upar PAR. HUM. NAHI..!!

Pratap was taken aback by her words.. how could she refuse his charms..! But now his ego was hurt.. he had to something to get over her he thought..
She then saw a passerby who looked like a clerk so without wasting any time she asked him where is the washroom and after giving another look to the prince she marked her way to washroom
he saw her retreating figure..he ironed his narrowed brows and once again his signature smirk was back on his lips..
Pratap: jo bhi ho.. ! kuch toh baat hai iss ladki mein..!!
Although he was angry but he couldn't neglect the guts of that girl..

His chain of thoughts were intrepted by phool
Phool: pratap..!! Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??
Pratap: ahh woh.. Dr. Uncle ka call aya tha toh usse hi attend karne aaya tha..
Phool: Oh.! Kya kaha Dr. Uncle ne..??! DS kaisi hai?
Pratap: yea she's fine..!!
Phool: thats good news.. ab chalo yaha se.. maan aur dadabhai tumhe kabse doond rahi hai!
Pratap: kya?! Choti!! But woh kab aayi? Aur unhone hume baataya kyu nahi..?!kaha hai woh
Phool: pratap!! Tum hi toh tabse gayab ho..
Pratap: oops.!! Sorry,,Well abhi mil lete hai.. what say?!
Phool: superb.. lets go..!

And they both assembled at backstage again..
Edited by ApekshaM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
awesome update 👏⭐️ totally entertaining 😉
ohh JB is dead in this ...and we have karnavati here 😳 dadi - pota bonding is nice change😳👍🏼
omg ajab pratu ki bahon mein...and eyelock bhi ...
but wait... pratu what did you say to her re?😲 she is not like other girls 😳 phool ki sangat ka asar hain sab 😆 once he started having company of ajab sudhar jayega ye bhi 😉😆
liked ajab's answer to him 👏 you rocked girl ⭐️ keep ignoring him
pratu defo can't forget this girl 😳
hope you update soon with praja
precap toh de 😛

Edited by dsm123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsm123

<font size="2">awesome update👏⭐️totally entertaining😉</font>

<font size="2">ohh JB is dead in this ...and we have karnavati here😳dadi - pota bonding is nice change😳👍🏼</font>
<font size="2">omg ajab pratu ki bahon mein...and eyelock bhi ...</font>
<font size="2">but wait... pratu what did you say to her re?😲she is not like other girls😳phool ki sangat ka asar hain sab😆once he started having company of ajab sudhar jayega ye bhi😉😆</font>
<font size="2">liked ajab's answer to him👏you rocked girl⭐️keep ignoring him</font>
<font size="2">pratu defo can't forget this girl😳</font>
<font size="2">hope you update soon with praja</font>
<font size="2">precap toh de😛</font>



Thank you!! Thank you!! 😳yup.. JB is dead 😭 but it is necessory for the future parts rajmata's character play's important role in the story😉 arre abhi toh pratap aur ajabde mile hai.. itni jaldi thodi na sudhrega😆 ajabde is a rockstar!!😉 will update soon😃

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